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[250 Color Hero]

Wrong

The score I gave you was 5. Someone else gave you a 3. (I'm referring to your "bouncing till the bounce stops". This is different. Where is the cute music style? Getting more serious I see. All your songsa are too short. Make a full length song. No clue why this song is called 250 color hero. I like the beat of this song. A bit dancy. The ending sucks though. I didn't find the song annoying and yes I did enjoy it. So yeah whatever is messed up with the ending where there is silence and some quiet popping sound keeps coming...get rid of that. So umm 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Bye for now

mooseymaniac responds:

Oh cool... thanx for the 5 then! If you have listened to my 21 songs... no wait... theres twenty... most of them are actually pretty serioous, I do have a few "cute" ones that I throw in at random because I'm bored though :)
The end was a glitch that I didn't notice till after I had subbmitted it. And I don't know how to fix it, but I guess you'l just have to stop it and play it again if you wanna hear it loop. Thanx for the review! I appreciate it.

[Confusion - 3:33]

This is different

Usually your reviewing my song. Now it's the reverse...Finally. :) Not sure what your angry with and confused about. This song is distorted enough that I feel all confused myself. I see you used some vox. Is that your voice? Your use of the kick clap loop reminds me of mgrac3 music. Interesting...the song transitions into something almost hip hop modern like. Your special effects are nice, especially the ones near the end of the song. There is one particular fx that I want. That fx near beginning of song that sounds like 2 knives rubbing against eachother. Did you ever listen to Jebbal's "Revelation" song? He uses that fx alot and I love it. So overall the song is good. The hip hop part did drag on for a bit. Finally a dance song I can 5/5 that actually deserves it. All the other songs like "messin with a g-tar, goo3, etc. I fived for fun. You like the real dark dance stuff so keep them coming. Oh and I see your changing alot of the melodies around just like a story. :) Bye for now

Trunks responds:

Heh, yeah it's been a while :D

Ehh, life just hasn't been going my way lately ^_-*

Anyways, that's why I named the song like that. And it's my voice layered on top of a sample so it sounds unique, so in other words it's not *really* me.
Hip hop modern? Never thought of that, but looking back, it does sound a bit like that.

Thanks for the review ^_^ :D

[Forest People]

say hmm

This is you at 10:00 am? 10:00 am isn't early. I'm wide awake by that time, but it looks like your half asleep still. I could see this song in a video game where you explore the congo jungle and the tribal guys start dancing. I'm not fond of this type of music. However since this is still a tribal like dance sure than good job. I like how you use contrasts of high pitch and low pitch sounds. It repeats alot though so add more tribal beats. I don't know...like a tambourine and shakers. So 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Okay bye for now.

Noizaholic responds:

You see the Tribal Guys Dancing too!?
I thought I was just psyco...

Thanks for the review!

[Toki O Koeru Omoi [FINAL]]

Review

What does the name of the song mean? Okay the beginning of the song is kinda boring, but when the epic stuff comes in..well the song is quite nice. I like that piano tune you used with more quiet piano playing in the background. I think I heard a tune similar to this. Maybe I listened to your unfinal version, but forgot I did. The transition is somewhat nice. I noticed a slight gap in the transition, but still a nice flowing song. This song can work in a drama where some guy or girl is lost and another person is trying desperately to find him/her to well make love. Cheesy but that's what I feel. Overall a very nice piece. What the? How come no one is reviewing your song? Classical is a popular genre but I guess lots of ppl don't like this kind of music. So 5/5 review and 10/10. Continue with the classical drama. Bye for now

studio-nightbird responds:

wow thanks. I'll keep that in mind. I'll stick to classic. thanks for the great review ;)

[Polyurethane Smile]

hmm weird lyrics

Well I guess it has a pop like flavour. The lyrics are really messed up though. This sounds more of a parody of a pop song rather than a real pop song. I like the beat. The vox is nice for voice tone. No warbly voice. Oh well, this one is for laughs. Interesting how you used an organ in the beat. So kudos to the instrument players and the vocalist. Not so much whoever made the lyrics. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. Your whistles aren't synchronized too, but it sounded peaceful. Bye for now

juttman responds:

I agree that my lyric writing isn't too good. I would have put this under a different section (maybe comedy) but there isn't a comedy section for newgrounds.
BTW: I am the instrument player and vocalist.

[Para-Noid (MAC7 Loop)]

...so how many

How many loops are you submitting for this competition? I like this one better than your hip hop one. Not much to say cause just a loop so I'll stop. 5/5 vote and 8/10. I only give 8 as highest score for any loop. Check out my new songs and leave a review. Bye for now

Para-Noid responds:

The most you can submit is only 2 which I did but something screwed up and it was put on there twice.

Para-Noid

[*Flying High* (ZeRo BaSs)]

Yeah diamond

I think I heard this song a while back when I didn't have a NG account. I've decided to review a old song of yours. I like the start with the cheer going. Good synths and pads used. A bit long before your start adding some new harmony. They work together quite well. It kind of repeats for a while. I like the guy screaming ever so softly..funny that contradicts. Similar stuff I like your heart of sword song better cause more diverse. Anyway not sure when this track got diamond but congrats on that. The ending of the song is cool and is really different from the heaven like style. Making a song in progress? or studying for finals? I'm doing the latter. What am I doing?! Got to get back to studying. So 5/5 voting which hopefully will change your score significantly (which I doubt) and 10/10 cause you made the dance section popular and that's cool. Everyone would hate the dance section if it wasn't for you, eon, and flashburn. Bye for now

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

thank you MS!!!!!!

[F-777 Dark Shire Dance Mix]

what's this? new song...review

well I found out you posted a new song so I'll review this too. The starting happy synth is funky. The song starts slow but when the bass comes in than much better stuff. I see your using harmonies and they are playing different stuff. That's good stuff. I guess kudos to your friend for the composition and a clap to you for making it sound much better. Just piano might have been a tad boring to hear. The song is quite clear...at least to my speakers. Suggestions...hmm well hard to say. I like the atmosphere synths. Maybe the start of the song could have used some improvement. Transition quicker to the action stuff with the bass. So 5/5 voting raising your score..yah and 10/10 review. Hope my suggestion helped you out. I'm easy to please so I lack criticism usually. Oh and effort is still good, but not a 10 since you didn't make the song from scratch..your friend started it for you. Bye for now

F-777 responds:

Thank you so much for the comment!

[Bloody Tears ROX!]

I am the 10% :)

Video game synths and pads....check
video game tune.....check
video game song title.....check
Looks like we got ourselves a video game song. Too bad this style is the old consoles way. No video game company today will want this music for xbox 360 ps3....maybe wii. It's quite a clear song you got hear. I like how your drums do a crescendo and decrescendo near beginning of song. What's rox? I'm surprised with the diversity you put in this song. You return back to the chorus keeping things organized. Everything seems to fit perfectly. Even the slow down in the tempo fit nicely. The only problem is the end of the song. I don't think you should have put that messed up modulation. So 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Rev my "system override" song now. :) I actually review songs because I want to, but I just want to see if your one of the 10%. Okay bye for now

paradiddlesjosh responds:

It's okay. I did that as a joke since I see more and more of those lousy statistics in people's signatures.

That messed up modulation is actually feedback from the simulated guitar (who'd have thunk!? I'm still using synths despite the fact that I can record live with decent quality!)

I'll give "System Override" a look as soon as I can. Thank you for your very detailed review.

[Go (A Techno Theme)]

3...2...1...go

I heard that 3 2 1 phrase before. Heck I actually used it in my "system override" song but this time a female vox. Can you review it plz? That lead synth sounds quite happy. The contrast of mood in this song is some what of a ride. When the song gets serious it reminds me of hip hop modern for a bit. I do like the rhythm of that pitchy hook. What would make the song better is more bass action at the start. The bass is playing 1 note every 1 second....too slow. More harmonies too would be nice. The hip hop feeling part had a harmony so good job on that area. 5/5 vote and a 9/10 review. Wait only your 3rd song on NG. Hmm I'm impressed so 10/10 review. Bye for now P.S. the ending needs improving too.

nal1200 responds:

Thank you for the feedback! Well, this song was the first I had ever made, I will probably remix it later on, but until now, check out some of my later stuff. Thanks!