Music-story's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fairy Wings PT2]

Hard techno

I like how you start with this cool rhythm. Also has that mysterious flavour with that sweep pad you use (or did you put massive reverb on it?) In comes the bass. Oh great. Just found out that I'm reviewing your part 2 song before part 1. I am assuming Lacie is your gf. She likes this kind of music? I think you got the epic feeling going on, but I don't see much diversity at the start. You add some new stuff at the end of the song, but I was expecting that new transition part to be longer than just 1 second. I understand that trance is supposed to repeat so I always give trance a 10/10 diversity . I wish I could make synths as cool as this song. I guess the song is calm whenever the hard techno sound is not there. To tell you the truth, I'm not sure why I'm reviewing this song. If your gf likes it than who cares what critique I tell you. So I'm assuming your gf loved this song so hey I guess I loved it too. :) Time to review your part 1 of fairy wings. Bye for now

DoobyTimePiece responds:

well ill tell you....if your making snynths you need disinence about 50 percent of the time or a lot of browsing through library's.

[Chemical Six]

Umm

Is some baby crying in the background? Did someone fart? Okay I guess it isn't a baby crying or farting. It's just a whiny synth and you making those farting sounds with your mouth. Add some nature effects and yes we got a really messed up song. Okay now I can sense the reason why you named it chemical...not sure about the six though. The chemical synths sound lonely. Where are the drums? Where are the harmonies? Finally the drums come in. Same stuff again and again. A rapid surprise transition back into the whiny synths. You got some strange music taste. Your originality score is going to be 10/10 for sure. Okay so nice beat when the drums come in, but that whiny synth really gets annoying. So a 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now

Jimbobsthebest responds:

Yeah my taste in music is very weird I suppose. I only submit the stuff to newgrounds that I'm not particularly pleased with. Although that said this is the sort of music I tend to put on at around 6 in the morning after a rave or something. Very minimal. Cheers for the review man, always nice to get feedback.

James

[Death of the spaceboy]

Does this mean no more spaceboy?

Is this your final song to the spaceboy series? I like the pace of the song. Very quick and again good use of those spacy synths. Hey I like this tune. So I guess a battle is going on and spaceboy dies in the battle or something? Is this song in the C key? I like how you move the song gradually up the scale to a higher pitch. Adds a climactic event. Tell me what the real story is for spaceboy. What are you going to do next if spaceboy series is over? So this one is your best space boy song out of all your other ones. A good sign your getting alot better. 10/10 review (I don't care if the bass is not that loud. I like high pitch sounds anyway.) and a 5/5 voting raising your score from 0 to 5. I feel so powerful. :)

[{Show Me The Way}]

Uhh where you come from?

Okay so your song is no where on the top 10 dance list. Fast forward to blammer day (every tuesday) and viola your near the top of the list. How you do that? Magic I guess. Is this a remix? You got the techno feel going well. Oh here comes the hard bass. Uh oh Rave. Nice job implementing the piano to your song. Maybe my headphones suck, but I'm hearing some fuzzies. Did you do that intentionally? I think your song is happy and dark music. A two in one package. :) Your best part of the song is the piano. Where are the harmonies? Get some harmonies in your next song and use some crazy synths like you used in this song and we got ourselves a master___ piece. So well whatever happened with your score shooting through the roof of of a sudden, will I'm going to shoot it up 1 more notch. I win :)

DaGrahamCraka responds:

lol thanks for the nice review. i swear i didnt 0 everybody either. promise.

[eye of the tiger remix]

Okay review 2

Your score is 2/5 before I reviewed. Weird that means you got blammed and someone else must of hated this song. Guess they forgot to listen to the song :) Again you do alot of modifications to the original which is great. You kinda bring that anticipation feel for the melody of eye of the tiger main chorus to start...however it doesn't come in the entire song. You should have let that catchy melody come in the song. :( I like your use of special effects better in this song than your other remix. Better effort, but I think you left the listener waiting for something that never comes. I'm going to give you also a 5/5 voting since you submitted this song on the same day as your thugs paradise remix. Try to make your own song in your future full length audio. Oh can you take a listen to my song "Music story for you" please. Thanks and as always bye for now

[thugs paradise remix]

You asked I give

Okay to start things off, I'm not a big fan of remixes because they are not as HARD to make compared to making a song from scratch. Despite this, I see you made alot of modifications to this song. I heard the original and you made this song more dancy. I guess the song has alot of diversity, but if you didn't have the voices than it would have been very repetitive. I need vox so I can repeat my songs and ppl will still like it. I see the blammer got you by giving you a 0/5. Don't bother though. The blammer doesn't hate just you. He does that to all new submissions. I used to hate that but now I don't mind because people can always vote for themselves and I guess counter his 0/5. Hopefully you didn't vote for yourself already? I guess this song won't make the a-bot top 5 list. That sucks. Since you are still relatively new to submitting to NG (I think your NOT new to playing music though)I will give you a good grade. Also probably your first blammer attack experience so I'll give you a 5/5 voting. Time to review your eye of the tiger remix. See you there

[Afghan-Flute]

dang it hawk

Your right...I don't hear this music except on Aladdin. :) So originality is a 10 for sure. Love the shakers going. Very ethnic to the utmost extreme. Why don't you respond to my reviews :( I always listen to song at least twice before I make a review so it is a real review rather than a rushed one. I didn't cry in this song. Did you think this was a sorrowful song or something? Glad you finally made a full length song. You know what your missing in this song. You need the whole snake slithering out of the pot and making hissing noises. Arabically great and unique and a good score for a full song. 10/10 and 5/5 voting. Note the blammer is going through each genre section right now and blamming all the new songs so I hope your 5/5 stands until midnight so you can be on a top 5 a-bot list. Good luck. :)

[Chutzpah - Wicked Habits]

Uh oh

This one loops you said? That means repetitive. Okay the start is hip hopish...maybe more modern hip hop. You got some diverse tunes, but they are soo far spaced apart and streched for too long. Than again what am I saying...this is trance what else is expected? I'm not sure what to say now. Maybe whevenever you don't make trance, make your next song transition into different stuff faster rather than the drums and bass doing a big solo. I suck at mastering my tracks too, but yours sounds better mastered than mine. 5/5 voting. And bye for now

[UN-titled]

Bored?

If you were bored than that means you had lots of time to make a masterpiece. I guess you were busy. Yeah a strange disordered sound with no pattern. Your vox sounds freaky. The notes sound like you just mashed the keyboard hoping for a good sound. Since this is your first submission, unless you have another account.....I will give you a good score. 5/5 voting....but the review will be not soo good.

[First submission]

And your first review

I like the loop except for where those rapid claps happen near the end of it. Took you a while to finally submit your first audio. Expand on this one and it can be some song that I never heard before on NG. Quite an original idea you got going here. Loops usually don't get a high score by me so a 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now

Subterfuger13 responds:

yeah it realy wasnt a loop
and the claps did make it anoyying as
the end or a trancending part of the song. ill work on it.