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[Gorgthor]

Yeah...not sure what title means

The song does have a suspense mood. Kinda like the "evil" side plotting something bad for the heroine to conquer. The good guys always win for some reason though. :) As usual miscellaneous music is pretty wierd. I do like the guitar section though. The guitars sound almost like monster truck guitars. The ending of the song didn't make much sense but good overall. This can work in a cartoon movie with of course some devious villian in it. 5/5 and 9/10. Too bad you didn't have more stuff going when the guitars came in. You did well before the guitar section, but just guitars is bland. So that is why you get the 9/10.

[I don't have a title :P]

Wow!

Exceptional title I say. Very original. :) 10/10 originality just for the title. About the song. You used some obvious minor key which I guess is typical of alot of techno songs, but yours is the first where the minor key popped into my mind so easily. If it weren't for the digital computer sounds (eg beep boop) than this would be trance. Your trancy pad is a little bit overpowering. I can still hear the other harmonies you put on top, but not 100% clear. So starts atmosphery and shifts to the more serious side. Good change of themes. Keeps me not from sleeping. So 5/5 votee and 9/10 review. I would like more better harmonies on top of the trance pad instead of simply hold one note than shift to another.

[Whirlwind (FW) exclusive]

Problems with this song

Okay so I tell you the good parts. I love the strings. Gives it that movie type epic feel. The guitars are nice with a tad bit of distortion you put on them. Lots seems to be changing around like a music story so that is a great point. The guitar patterns just bring back memories of the calm relaxing days out in the sun. This is definately your best song yet. Now the problems. Well I think the bride might not like this song as much as the groom. Gifts should be suitable for both the bride and groom...if not than give two separate gifts. Second problem is why the song on NG? If this WAS a personal gift to your buddy than it should be only for him...not for us NG bums. I do appreciate the gift though. :) The last problem is the title of the song. Obviously your not good at naming songs. Heh those are my complaints. Nothing really to do with the song, but oh well. 5/5 and 10/10. Keep this stuff coming. A big change from your ravy techno like songs. Bye for now

wolf-tech responds:

well they both like that kinda music so i'm not worried about it. it's the thought that counts right?

[==(Transparent Machine)==]

You say this is a loop?

Is this for that mac something competion? Well it is repetitive. That fuzzy sound is unique. Not sure what pico is thinking. He is just a pixelated character. :) I really can't make a long review on this song. Like you said...this is just a loop. Are you going to implement this into a full length song? So in short I feel like I'm playing a video game where there is alot of industrial stuff going on. 5/5 thanks to the originality. I usually never give a 5 for loops but for some reason this one tells a story..strangely enough. 9/10 rev. No 10 for loops. Check out my new song "guitar hero". Bye for now

Buoy responds:

it's a loop fo sho' there was a contest going tho it ended now¨ at least i'm not the only person clueless about pico feeling

k seen your song and I'll review it gotta be laters tho

[Baroque Organ]

Hmm organ music

Not my type I do do recognize a song bach made that uses almost the exact same instrument. Baroque is so olden time music. I like the romantic classicals better, but overall you did quite a good job. You were able to make a song almost identical to bach so that's a good achievement. Not much to say cause if I say anything bad then I'm saying bach screwed up which just isn't right. 5/5 and 9/10 review. So yah more stuff going on would be better. Umm so bye for now

[Static - 3:??]

oh new song

Well I didn't know you made a new song. Okay so the title of the song is appropriate. Lots of static. Your songs all seem to have that signature bass. Gives the dark feeling. I like that trancy sound you use. If it weren't for the clapping loop this would be trance. The ending is cool. Not too much is going on in this song pattern wise. Gets you concentrated on one mood set. However, you already know what I expect for diversity...which I guess is just my opinion. Not much more to say except an interesting use of the cymbals. 5/5 and 9/10 review. Bye for now

Trunks responds:

Thanks for the review!

I liked a new sample that I made splicing a snare and white noise, and it sounded staticy so I made a song out of it :D

And in this song, I think I did much better with the bass than normal.

Anyways, thanks for the nice review and I think that I'm done with this style of songs :D I'll work on a new style before I submit anything.

-Trunks

[A Little Metal]

Welcome then to NG

Heavy metal song? Well your guitars are typical of heavy metal. If there was more stuff going at once instead of the solo a whole bunch of times...than this song would be more like heavy metal. Cymbals is your main drum support. I wish you had more than just cymbals. So for your next song add more harmonies like more guitars playing at once. Besides that I'll give you a good mark for your first try. Better than my first try so 5/5 and 10/10 review. Bye for now

BulletTrainX responds:

Thanx, I'll do better on my next submittions. I might even fix this one.

[Party In Heaven(RMX)]

hmm uhh

41 ddl already??? I think that is impossible. Anyway your music sounds like mgrac 3. For some weird reason his account is gone.
:( The synths and pads are soo familiar. I like that wobbly special fx. However you hold it on too long. Maybe make it shorter cause gets annoying. A few off key moments, but no biggie. I never really liked that voice mask. So many ppl use it cause they can't sing. Me too...I can't sing. :) So 5/5 voting and whoever is mass downloading your song is a loser. So why the 9/10. Well the song is good, but I wish you had more stuff going. Change things up more rather than the silent treatment and than buildup to the same stuff again. The off key part also had a little bit effect on your score. Still 9 is a good score...well for me. Bye for now

[Waking Up]

A jazz artist

Yes the good ol 80s organ. Matches with the jazzy feel. The piano part has that jumpy feel to it. Your good with the piano considering you made this song from scratch. Who is your influence? Reminds me of foxtrot for some funny reason. So well done on this piece of music. Glad your adding to the jazz section which doesn't have enough songs yet. 5/5 vote and umm sure 10/10 review. Your finger okay when sliding it across the piano keys? :) Bye for now

JohnWE responds:

Well, it's actually an electric piano, but I see places I could have made it sound more like an EP. My uncle is the top jazz pianist in New Mexico, so I listen to his stuff a bit. I also like Frank Klepacki and most any song that is well orchestrated or has a good keyboard solo in it.

And yeah, I have callouses on the Back of my fingers where I do those runs. When I get on a harder-keyed keyboard or piano I have to watch myself because I have ripped up my fingers before.

[{GBD} The Strange Dream]

Hello

Heh..don't know what to say when the song starts. Okay so when that bell like sound comes it...makes me feel at a carnaval. This is funny stuff. I like that fuzzy bass sound and that voice. LOL. The drums a little bit too loud. Surprising not repetitive. Not sure if you use piano later. !!CPR . I feel like I'm at a hospital now. Something bad must of happened at the carnaval. Yes your dream is really screwed up. I never heard stuff this weird except for the carnaval bits. I don't know what else to critique you on. I guess 5/5 for being a strange song. I wouldn't call this listening music in the car, home, or anywhere. It is nice though to here once and see how creative ppl are. :) So umm to be safe in marking I give you 10/10. I just submitted a song called "guitar here". Can you check that out for me? Thanks

DoobyTimePiece responds:

hell yah, polka!! thats the first time i did my own voice work, normaly i buy the royleties to the voice thing (costs like a $1.00 or somthing) but it worked out glad you liked it. ill check you stuff out later.