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[Emo Sucks]

some great stuff

I like that electric guitar..or is that bass. Anyway, the voices are screaming crazily. This can almost be heavy metal. Just a louder more distorted guitar and there we go. Not much lyrics though. I was expecting more. Not sure what your saying. Oh well still sounds cool. So 5/5 voting and 10/10 cause barely anyone makes punk. Okay bye for now

[Para-Noid (MAC7 Loop)]

...so how many

How many loops are you submitting for this competition? I like this one better than your hip hop one. Not much to say cause just a loop so I'll stop. 5/5 vote and 8/10. I only give 8 as highest score for any loop. Check out my new songs and leave a review. Bye for now

Para-Noid responds:

The most you can submit is only 2 which I did but something screwed up and it was put on there twice.

Para-Noid

[Paper Cuts!]

yes gb3

Happy music typical of ska. I love ska so much. Even has the school kid voice. Awesome. Lyrics are great. Kudos to your friend. LOL screaming is just ridiculous. I love this song soo much. I'm downloading this one. You have the most talent with gb3. GB3 is so limited too. The lyrics are changing all the time. Yes paper cuts do hurt. :) Yes 10/5 voting (if that was possible) and 20/10 review. Genius. Make more ska. Unbelievable song. I'm not joking. Way better than my music. Bye for now

[*Flying High* (ZeRo BaSs)]

Yeah diamond

I think I heard this song a while back when I didn't have a NG account. I've decided to review a old song of yours. I like the start with the cheer going. Good synths and pads used. A bit long before your start adding some new harmony. They work together quite well. It kind of repeats for a while. I like the guy screaming ever so softly..funny that contradicts. Similar stuff I like your heart of sword song better cause more diverse. Anyway not sure when this track got diamond but congrats on that. The ending of the song is cool and is really different from the heaven like style. Making a song in progress? or studying for finals? I'm doing the latter. What am I doing?! Got to get back to studying. So 5/5 voting which hopefully will change your score significantly (which I doubt) and 10/10 cause you made the dance section popular and that's cool. Everyone would hate the dance section if it wasn't for you, eon, and flashburn. Bye for now

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

thank you MS!!!!!!

[F-777 Dark Shire Dance Mix]

what's this? new song...review

well I found out you posted a new song so I'll review this too. The starting happy synth is funky. The song starts slow but when the bass comes in than much better stuff. I see your using harmonies and they are playing different stuff. That's good stuff. I guess kudos to your friend for the composition and a clap to you for making it sound much better. Just piano might have been a tad boring to hear. The song is quite clear...at least to my speakers. Suggestions...hmm well hard to say. I like the atmosphere synths. Maybe the start of the song could have used some improvement. Transition quicker to the action stuff with the bass. So 5/5 voting raising your score..yah and 10/10 review. Hope my suggestion helped you out. I'm easy to please so I lack criticism usually. Oh and effort is still good, but not a 10 since you didn't make the song from scratch..your friend started it for you. Bye for now

F-777 responds:

Thank you so much for the comment!

[messin with a g-tar]

hah

sounds a lil ethnic. Some fast guitar playing so effort is 10/10 but I don't think the melody is really dancy. You need some other stuff going on. Maybe add drums and lower the pitch of the guitar and you got yourself a DnB. I'm not sure why you posted another guitar song in reverse. Hmm oh well so umm 5/5 voting but 9/10 review. A really nice score since your new to the audio portal. Bye for now and have fun on NG.

[Break-My First DnB]

Review time

I like the panning effect with the drums. I'm not sure where the bass is though. I can sense a small fuzzy like sound playing in the background only in a few spots. Not sure if that is the bass part. Besides that this DNB repeats a lil too much. However you seem to know how to use your music program quite well. Just work on the composition more. Maybe more audible bass if there is any and a change in drums once in a while. So since your first song I'll give you a 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. DNB artist I see your concentrating on. Better than me cause I don't even make DNB. Bye for now

[-Sweet Dreams-]

Hi...

Were you the one who reviewed my song "life of a jukebox" a long time ago? Well can you review my new song "system override" plz? It has piano like yours. I love the piano and yes your song is peaceful. Not sure if the piano is playing the same thing over and over again. Wait...yah it actually is. Hmm I would have liked some crazy piano stuff besides the same pattern. Fortunately you made a song I particularly like. I love calm songs for one and piano is my fav instrument. So this means 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Now my suggestions are add more rhythm changes. You did a good job keeping as few pads as possible in this song. Good idea for calm songs. Other than that I have no more suggestions. Keep making music. Your almost at 50 tracks. Bye for now

[Bloody Tears ROX!]

I am the 10% :)

Video game synths and pads....check
video game tune.....check
video game song title.....check
Looks like we got ourselves a video game song. Too bad this style is the old consoles way. No video game company today will want this music for xbox 360 ps3....maybe wii. It's quite a clear song you got hear. I like how your drums do a crescendo and decrescendo near beginning of song. What's rox? I'm surprised with the diversity you put in this song. You return back to the chorus keeping things organized. Everything seems to fit perfectly. Even the slow down in the tempo fit nicely. The only problem is the end of the song. I don't think you should have put that messed up modulation. So 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Rev my "system override" song now. :) I actually review songs because I want to, but I just want to see if your one of the 10%. Okay bye for now

paradiddlesjosh responds:

It's okay. I did that as a joke since I see more and more of those lousy statistics in people's signatures.

That messed up modulation is actually feedback from the simulated guitar (who'd have thunk!? I'm still using synths despite the fact that I can record live with decent quality!)

I'll give "System Override" a look as soon as I can. Thank you for your very detailed review.

[Go (A Techno Theme)]

3...2...1...go

I heard that 3 2 1 phrase before. Heck I actually used it in my "system override" song but this time a female vox. Can you review it plz? That lead synth sounds quite happy. The contrast of mood in this song is some what of a ride. When the song gets serious it reminds me of hip hop modern for a bit. I do like the rhythm of that pitchy hook. What would make the song better is more bass action at the start. The bass is playing 1 note every 1 second....too slow. More harmonies too would be nice. The hip hop feeling part had a harmony so good job on that area. 5/5 vote and a 9/10 review. Wait only your 3rd song on NG. Hmm I'm impressed so 10/10 review. Bye for now P.S. the ending needs improving too.

nal1200 responds:

Thank you for the feedback! Well, this song was the first I had ever made, I will probably remix it later on, but until now, check out some of my later stuff. Thanks!