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[Higher Force (ClubMix)]

Review

A very long song. Takes quite a long time just to get going. Like a minute of the song is the slow buildup. This is one of your calmer trance songs. Now that I listened to this song, I think my new song (have not posted yet) isn't really trance. Oh well I post in trance soon anyway. :) You've got some nice sounding synths. I still gotta learn how to make good ones. So overall a good song but maybe a tad bit too long. It is soothing to hear though. I could use this song for study music. Opps, ack got a midterm in 2 days. Gotta go study now. :) 5/5 voting. Bye for now.

Pulstate responds:

Hey, thanks. It's long because it's a club mix.

The radioedit is much shorter and to the point.

Cheers.

[This mind o mine (Subterfuger)]

Review time

You missed school for this? School is more important. :) Okay so I think I heard one of the synths before but I don't care. You went all crazy on the special effects so that must have took effort. It gets happier later in the song. A good diversity factor. I'm so used to listening to your loops that I feel like this song is long. Interesting how you use that gunshot to transition. Well I don't know if it is a gunshot but sounds like it. I like it when you use those revving like synth sounds. Suggestions are well don't post your song on tuesdays cause blammer will 0 your song right away. He comes to blam a bit on wednesday too somtimes. I had a battle with him yesterday :) This trance song is more gentle compared to the faster more louder trance songs which I don't mind, but if you want others to like it more I guess make song faster and louder or just post your song on a different site where people appreciate this kind of trance. Bye for now and 5/5 voting.

[Gearbox Dreams (Demo)]

Okay tips

Weird your score is 3.67/5 and no one left you ideas. Selfish losers. :) Starts like a dream but not like a gearbox dream. I actually don't know how a gearbox would dream. I think I heard one of the synths you used before when the song starts to buildup. I can see what your trying to do to get the gear sound....It's a little too peaceful to be a trance song. You also don't use very techno like synths. This song could work in miscellaneous section I guess. I like the song so far, but I think most people on NG will hate this because it isn't fast and has crazy effects so characteristic of techno. So your choice to continue. I'll enjoy the final version cause calm mellow songs is my style, just not the most popular style on NG. I'm not sure what to suggest. I don't want you to add any synths to that calm area of the song. It is good like that. When you build up maybe add some effects so more people will like it. Okay so 5/5 voting and I'll wait for your future song. Oh if you do switch genres than add some new harmonies to add diversity, but if still in techno than no more harmonies is necessary. Bye for now

DoobyTimePiece responds:

actually! the heavenly snyth is new! it was something i dug out under the pile. but im going to make this one harder then softer at the end. that snyth is more or less like err diminished second i think c5# or maby just c5.

[Dust]

Woah lots of 5/5 songs

This is a nice melodic tune. Sounds peaceful. Great synth sound you add. Fits perfectly. This song would be perfect just to relax and look at the stars at night. I definately don't look down on you. You got some good stuff right here so I'm gonna 5/5 it keeping score at 5/5. Hmm well yours might not stick out from the sea of 5ives I sea in the miscellaneous section. Lol Oh well. Bye for now

[Burst Feeling]

Hey pretty good

Dancy yep. Club yep. Vox check. You have been making music for a long time I see. I wish the vox was saying more words. It feels like the vox isn't even the lead of the song but just some background support. You got a nice atmosphery feel to song. Good buildups and great drums. Thankfully for the little bits of vox the song doesn't sound that repetitive. So umm 5/5 voting raising your score from 4/5 to 4.5/5 maybe? We will see. So suggestion is actually make the person say a lot more words so it sounds like a poop song. Bye for now

[Kheni - Good times]

Carnaval music!!!!!!!

Dude, listen to my "carnaval charMS" song with headphones. Ironic that two carnaval like songs be posted soo close together. So I can't say I hate this or I hate my own song which I don't. I love happy tunes. The good times are definately portrayed in this song. Maybe not what you are thinking as the good times. Not sure what your referring to when you say "remember". So obviously some happy stuff with the twinkling going on and the jumpy drums. Only suggestion is I wish you added more harmonies to this song cause with the drums and that leading synth and the rare bell sound sounds a little empty. So umm yeah review and vote for my carnaval song too. Glad someone loves carnaval like music like me. 5/5 voting. 10/10 review. Love the piano and the composition. Bye for now

[Beat is Coming RMX]

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I recognize the vox. Yeah might not be the same words I think but same tone. Umm I think if you used a real person voice instead of that masked altered voice. I sometimes can't hear what she? is saying. A good background rhythm though. There is one part of the song where the fuzzies really start coming. Not sure why you dropped the volume down and built up. Usually the vox remains loud throughout a pop song so we can hear what the voice is saying. At least your song has vox which adds a originality factor on NG. So umm 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. So those are my suggestions to keep in mind for your next song. Since you put hard work into this song you get 10/10 effort. Okay bye for now.

EchozAurora responds:

I can hear the words... but it might be these headphones...
Well, I plan to make more like this in the future, so I'll keep those ideas in mind.

[Robo Rapper (Subterfuger)]

I heard this song before

I heard this song before so umm not new to me. Don't use this loop in your next song cause your gonna get blammed by those more critical reviewers. So umm 5/5 and 8/10 review. Can you review and vote for my new song "carnaval charMS" please??????

[Secure (Subterfuger)]

This one has potential

Yeah it is a cool synth. Combine this with your other techno song and we got a song beginning to form. So umm yeah is your next submission going to be a song? I hope it is. You got too many loops you should use them for something better.

[Ambush (Subterfuger)]

Hey not bad

Has that jungle feel to it. I know a more stupid title. "Am Bush" So umm like usual a 8/10 review and 5/5 voting.