Music-story's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stratodancer v2.0 (4min29sec)]

I review your, can you review mine?

Atmosphery feeling. I can sense a buildup coming. Uhh, wasn't expecting that. I think you did a good job with the bass. You tend to use the clapping loop, take it away, bring it back, take it away, etc. You should just let it keep on going. I see you have 2 stratodancers. Guess this one is your fixed version. Nice surprise with the fading out. I thought the song was over, but nope. 4 mins is a long song so you need alot of diversity to keep ppl's interest. I kinda got bored at the 3 min mark. I'm giving you a 9/10 review and a 5/5 voting . Get alot of variety or shorten your songs so they are better. So can you review my DEMO song (don't ddl it) and tell me something I should fix on for the final version. Not repeating what others have noticed already is also helpful. Bye for now

[im gonna miss you]

so gf still with you?

Techno ehh?? Oh okay there we go. The tune is nice but you just change the synths. It still is the same rhythm. The techno part is also quite brief. Insteresting use of drums. Maybe add some more diversity and this might be good. But heck who cares what I say. As long as your gf liked it, that is all that matters. 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Can you sample my demo song. (I only have 1 demo song so easy to find) I need some feedback to what I should do to it for the final version. Thanks.

[Kitty!]

hello again

Wow this is some really heavy stuff. Is that your voice? Kitty...give me a break. This is like a lion. lol Your voice must have been hurting after the song. I can't hear some of the words so it kinda gets annoying to hear the voice. Oh well...not my fav genre but you really showed the lion in the kitty. 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Can you sample my demo song (dance section) and give me tips on what I should improve to make the final version better? Thanks

jared-meyer responds:

yep... thats my voice, and I scream from my gut rather than my throat, so my voice doesnt hurt after i do that kind of stuff. I made this song in like 10 min, so its pretty good for that time. BUT THANKYA!!

[Nagging Noses]

Nice username

Nagging noses. Hmm trying to see the connection but I can't yet. I like the start but you dragged it on for too long. Finally there we go. Those are some funky synths. Good beat too. Uh oh. I think you made this section too long. Digital era now. I didn't like this part as much as the others cause kinda felt empty. Overall the song is good. What would make it great is if you transitioned into new stuff faster. I'm giving you a 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Note diversity I always give 10/10 on trance because that is trance, but still going overboard on the repetitiveness makes trance a bit boring. Can you review my demo song I made. Not sure if I should finish it or not. Tell me what needs improvements so the final version can be better. Thanks

DrRalf responds:

I tought the sound of a synth sounded like someone talking through their nose, try it some day.
Did you really think the start was too long, hmm I'll consider that.
You're absolutely right about that empty long part, but the problem is that the original song is twice as long, and in such contex it's okay to have such a longer empty part - at least that's what I think. You always encouter them at Vinyls too ;)
Thanks for a fair review, I'll be checking your demo song now.

-- Ralf

[The Theme Song]

Hello

Cool you use garageband. I used that to make all my songs up to "Heavens dancefloor" but I use logic express 7 now. Your song is kinda funny. A bit too many breaks instead of a nice flow. Good job with the limitations GB3 has. I however compare to other trances and this one is decent so a 7/10 review and 3/5 vote. Can you review my demo song (the most recent song I submitted) and tell me if I should continue with the track or scrap it. Also some tips to improve would be nice. I want a real good final version. Support is appreciated. Bye for now

Nopidam responds:

Thanks, It's just a demo, I already reviewed your song I beleive, but I'll check. My friend and I made it at like 12:00 at night. Thanks for the review and to evryone out there, keep them coming! Thanx dude.

-NOPIDAM

[get ya ice up remix]

Hey

I'm still relatively new to this genre of music. What instruments are you using at the beginning of the song? Sounds like shells hitting eachother. That is nice. Umm Nevermind. Ice is rustling around. LOL Very creative idea. I thought you were going to use some vox or something to add more variety. So the break down is 10/10 on originality. Great idea with the ice. A 9/10 on review (I compare to other hip hop artists and some used vox which really adds some spice to their songs. Vox in your next song?) and a 5/5 review. Can you review my song "Music story for you" please? Some other hip hop artist actually liked it which surprised me. Didn't know you guys liked my style of music. Okay bye for now

shrockoflame1 responds:

yeah good one to me to

[Deux froid]

Why the delay in submitting?

Starts calm. The drums kinda shift the song from the usual classical to modern. I like the minor keys your using, but I think 1 note was out of key. Your piano's fault maybe? What does deux froid mean? I think the song is a little bit too repetitive. Still you got the mood right. Can you review my song "Music story for you" please? I guess a classical maybe. I'll give you a 9/10 for such a well composed piece...the repetitiveness kinda killed the 10 and a 5/5 voting. Bye for now

[Remove Police]

Great

You did an awesome job on the vox. Are you sure this is miscellaneous section? This actually could fit in pop. You and your brother got some incredible talent compared to other NG users. Officially now my fav song that uses vox on NG. Hope you make more. Can you review my song "Music story for you" please. Thanks man. I'm ddl this one.

UltraSheriff responds:

Thank you, very happy with the mixing on the vox myself:). As for the genre, I wasn`t sure at all where to put it so i just went for misc...

[-INTERCOURSE-]

Yeah long time no submission

What kind of synth is this? Sounds like this might fit in heavy metal maybe. Okay here we go. The more nicer dancy tune, but sounds like a battle is going on rather than a dance. Crazy effects though. Maybe if you went softer on the synths and maybe didn't add that kinda in the bronx feel like a gang battle is coming. Not sure if hip hop modern. I don't know much hip hop stuff. Can you review my song "Music story for you" please. Like 50 times softer than yours. I'll give you the 9/10 for the distortion fest and a 5/5 review since everyone seems to have suffered from the blammer's wrath yesterday.

[My Chance]

Hey blammer is here

Hello again. Notice your score is 2.5/5 meaning the blammer has just blammed your song. He is doing it to all new submissions so none get on the weekly a-bot top 5 list. I'm going to five your song to counter him. Even if the blammer didn't blam your score I would still give you 5 cause you go hardcore on the hip hop style. You said modern is the fight style and you darn well got it perfect. Here is your 5/5

Platinum-Chrome responds:

thaxz mayn,who iz the blammer????e-mail me on N.G. MESSAGEZ..PEACE OUT