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[So Happy {DEMO}]

da dum dee dum

Happy stuff is always always good to my ears. I'm not particularly fond of the fuzzy synths/saw/pad thingy you used. However the fuzz does give a bit of a party feeling. I love this beat. Reminds me of the good ol trance style I heard on the radio way back then. Pretty long song for just a demo so should be almost finished. Don't make it a club mix if that's what your thinking. Those drag on too long. Not much else to say. I like most of the sound choices so for the final if you could break away from the main melody just 1 more time...then return back to it later... this would be great. Til next time when you have the final version, bye for now.

[Second Coming]

Okay review time

Well all your friends like it so really thats all that matters. For me this song doesn't get me dancing. Not even slow dancing. Your actually quite wrong about the ppl that 0 your songs so they can be at the top. Everyone essentially gets blammed. Some not right away but eventually they too get blammed. There will be a revamp to the audio portal in the near future (according to wade fulp). Till then we all gotta suffer being blammed. You get used to it pretty fast. Now I don't care about getting blammed, but before I did like you. So I don't really sense the europe style. This reminds me of a hip hop like song. Its well mastered but way too repetitive. That drum loop was used for too long. Next time keep things changing. This ain't the trance section nor I guess hip hop. Anyway like you said, none of your stuff deserves a low score of 2.5/5. I will give you a 5 but that doesn't mean the song is perfect. Have fun making more music...hopefully on NG still. Bye for now

[duh!!??]

Well hmm

Starts childish and happy. One of my fav. types. Like the trumpets. Flute is good too. That basic background beat is a bit lacking. Hah the fuzzy sound is a comedy factor. What's this? I like this pop like jazz stuff now. Love the diversity going on. Awesome stuff. This is very enjoyable. Looks like you just did a music story here. That's really cool. Since your first song I'll give you a 5/5 and 10/10 rev. Not perfect...a few flaws but quite nice overall. Bye for now

my-garbage responds:

Cut the joking NOW. You know that you helped me make this. No surprise you enjoyed it. XD I'll need some tips or I may suck in making music forever. Thanks for review though. See yah.

[Take You Away]

Welcome my good man

Good to see someone new visiting and contributing to the audio portal. Now about this song. I think you need to do a sound balance checkup. Lots of clipping going on. What program do you use? Anyway I suggest that whenever you make a song always check the volume bar. If it reaches red then you will likely get lots of clipping. Clarity is something I still have problems with but it is probably the biggest factor that makes a song good or bad. Now I'm not gonna be all harsh on you since this is your first time. I'm gonna list the good points. That happy pad/synth you used I really enjoyed. Some other bits were dreamy too. I can sense a good deal of diversity compared to other techno songs I've heard. As you can tell from my music, I love diversity and also respect ppl that go diverse with their stuff. Sign of a creative mind. Now I would like to see even more diversity, but if you like your style then by all means continue. I'm not here to change ppl style. My stuff isn't good so why would anyone want to copy me. :) I'll start you off with a 5/5 and a 10/10 review. Compared to my first song ever, this owns mine. Bye for now

dJViZ responds:

Thanks, I really enjoy your stuff especially your rave song MS override I think it was, well anyway... I'll be sure to a sound balance check up!...I am working on the song as we speak so we'll see how it turns out

[[F-777] Crystalised Trance]

Oh Ahh Yah Good

Reminds me of flashburn music because of that awesome sound you used at the beginning of the song. When that zipper like sound comes in that may be the not so good part. I think you use that sound alot in your other songs too. What plugin do you use to cause that delay sound to your instruments? I gotta learn how to do that with my program. I can only delay it so 1 note repeats. You made it so triplets came out. Lots of cool sounds used. Too bad song was short...short and sweet though so good job. Looks like lots of ppl enjoy this song from the amount of ddl. It deserves the # though. Not sure why you would post this in dance when you named your song "Trance" Well the dance section is too irresistable to leave so I'll probably never leave it for trance or techno. We (dance genre ppl) are getting badly out numbered by techno songs. +12000 techno songs. Long time before dance every reaches that mark. Keep them dance stuff coming. I will vote 5 since you seem to want it soo badly :) Bye for now

F-777 responds:

Thanks. And as for the delay thing, i make the triplets myself in piano roll. I use Fl studio so its not so hard but i make the triplets myself using copy and paste and stuff to put it were i want it and extending it and stuff.

Anyways ya the dance section is the most awesome section =D.

Thanks for the review!

[{GBD} Below the Atmosphere]

Fun

Below the atmosphere meaning right where we are. Funky and bit fuzzy trancy sounds. Has some suspense feeling to it. What instruments did you use? Some sound like flutes or maybe more like a piccolo. Maybe if you had some darker synths this song could then fit in a scary scene in a video game. However as it is, maybe a night scene at a twisted carnaval could work. Clowns are annoying. Again a really messed up song which makes the originality perfect. You should have used the choir more. Really gives the spooky feel. I'm not sure if the song is diverse. I am preoccupied with thinking about clowns that I don't even pay attention to diversity. I'll leave it at that. Unique as always and a fair ending. (My english sucks...past tense and present tense alternations) Bye for now. 5

P.S. I'm not afraid of clowns...I punch them clown bean bags. I'll sleep fine tonight. :)

DoobyTimePiece responds:

i wanted to call it fantasy dark but my gf said this was the better name so eaiter way its all good. its very hard and i gotit to build greatly now i just need to perfect it.

[Luminescent Beast]

Classic rev.

Well the piano sounds real. Good to get away from electronic music once in a while...unless the piano sounds are electronically made from your music program? This song is packed with chords and more chords. Not sure what made you think this song gives an impression of a beast. You could have added some nice harmonies on top. Maybe electronically add a whole orchestra to make your song more powerful. Overall I like the composition. If you made it then I'm happy for you. Well thought of and original. However if not well its still good enough to get a 5/5 vote and 8/10 rev. I will assume you made it all from your mind so 5/5 vote and 9/10 rev. Bye for now

[The Purest of Winters]

Hah your joking right?

I read one of your responses to a review in the "Stop Motion Symphone" So this MUST be a remix. Since you can't read theory and like MJTTOMB said, you don't know what a symphony means...I'm really impressed how you can still come up with something like this just by listening to the original. Your real potential will come out when you take the time to learn piano and theory. It shouldn't be too hard for you since alot of theory requires a good ear. Anyway to bring unoriginal classicals to NG is soo nice of you. I can listen to them for free..of course your instrument version but still gets the job done. I heard this song in a movie and as usual forgot which movie. I've always wondered why you called yourself milk man? The only downfall with this song is the ending. Was not the best but everything else is good. 5/5 and 9/10 rev. (Remixes don't get a 10 by me...unless you actually made the original and it got onto the movie I forgot....but that would be impossible if you can't play piano or do theory..unless your lying :) )

MilkMan-Dan responds:

Hello all, I was passing through and I noticed this Gem of a review.

Honestly... I'm not entirely sure what your saying here mate.

This song is 100% Original... a fact which will be confirmed over the years since I'm sure no one will ever find a song like it. If you believe you heard it in a movie once, I would imagine it only sounded similar, but thats about it.

"Anyway to bring unoriginal classicals to NG is soo nice of you."

I smell sarcasm sir... and I'm no stranger to it.

"but that would be impossible if you can't play piano or do theory"

Ahem... I play the piano... very well I might add... however I do not know nor write theory. 13 Straight years of playing the piano night after night by ear... has given me the great ability to simply play what I want in my mind and translate it to the piano with ease.

Your review is rather insulting... and I figrued I'd take the chance to correct you.

When I return... and I will return folks... you are not going to know what hit you guys.

[Myth277 - Dance!!]

Lez see...

Your alias name got my attention. Are you a myth tfl fan (bungie game)? Umm for this song you need to add alot more stuff. For only a hour it's a great attempt but compared to other trance songs well its not quite there yet. It does have a haunting feeling to it so it doesn't make me dance. Nice strings use. Like you said..this song is just ok. Since your score is too low I'll give you a 5/5 and a 8/10 rev. Glad you had fun. Bye for now

myth277 responds:

Ya dude i dont know its just a name ive been usin for a while. Ya i know i could have done better but i was bein lazy that day....but thx for the review dude. Ill try and make it better and post the new version.

[Novas]

Has a journey kind of feel

To me it sounds like I'm travelling into space. A fun ride but too many stops. Some parts just didn't match too good. There isn't too much rhythm change but a crazy cool guitar. I was expecting a real journey, but I just got a small sample. If you changed the theme more often (you only have 1 theme in this song!) then it would have felt like a full fledge journey. Oh well...I enjoyed it while it lasted. Next time make sure your crazy sounds remain in key...especially that weird high pitch noise. Maybe add more divere patterns too. Besides that a great job for only your second. 5/5 and 9/10 rev. Bye for now

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

Thanks for the review! Yea, It does make a lot of stops, following a rev kick, but i tried to make it all flow well, instead of an abrupt melody change. I'll be sure to watch out for that.
Dj Unknown