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traditional dance?

Well since dance can mean so many things, this song sounds a bit traditional except when the whole drums come in. Still using GB3? Your song is very unique since it has some interesting sounds which I don't recognize. Using world instruments with electronics is quite a strange mix. I kinda sense some quick transitions, not the gradual ones. I got hammered by ppl telling me to work on transitions, but GB3 has the suckiest percussion backing ever. I can see your in the same dilemma. So I will give you a 8/10 review and 4/5 voting. Two parts to your song makes this audio too long.

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

i agree with you. GB3's beats are not all that great, but whatevs. at least i can make the different synths and beats and etc go together nicely. please check out "japanamation" okay. peace! :)

Quite a loud song

You said a party, so I guess being loud on the synths does make sense. You added a few bits of vox so a big plus. I sometimes can't hear what the voices are saying, but oh well. Kinda repetitive, but some good party music. You say this song is not your best which means you made more...post your other songs on NG. Good for a first submission and I'm usually nice on ppl's first song couple of songs. So a 9/10 on review and a 5/5 on score. Bye for now.

AlxEllis responds:

Thanks im adding some more aswell and some my cousin made but ill give him the credit for it thanx for the vote

You really like this tune

This one is similar to your aluminium one...well some of the synths and some rhythm. I like it, but not really enough differences to fully make this a completely new song. Still I love those bubbles alot. So again you keep that mystery flavour to your songs which is great. Kinda repetitive (which you heard from me from before) but overall your putting more effort in each song adding more special effects here and there. So review is 8/10 and 5/5 on voting. Can't downgrade those wonderful bubbles. Bye for now

Infinnion responds:

thanx 4 ur bubbling review :)

Review

Looks like you took a very long break from making your next song. Okay I think I hear piano but it is off key a bit. Are you mixing major with minor scales? I like the percussion section...it's alot better than mine. Umm, I'm glad that you danced to your song but I'm not dancing. If you didn't have that ackward piano minor sound it would have been quite dancy. The percussion is telling me to dance but the piano is saying don't :) Okay so I hate to lower ppl score and you have a 5/5 which means.....okay so a 8/10 on review (fix that piano) and a 5/5 voting.

Grn-Drgn responds:

Thanks for your honesty and for score lowering whit me, I don't mind, give it the score you think it deserves, that's why it's there, and what I said about the dancing thigny is just about the style, I didn't knew wut style it was so it was just a way to say that I guessed it a dance song XD, oh well, I'm still a novice, but I'll get really good one day, I swear... Anyways, thanks for voting and reviewing, and also, your songs aren't that bad, keep up the good work! :D

Hello there

Sweet both our songs got on the same portal submission. :) Well I like your song alot. I like the voices alot. I think the song cuts off a bit near the beginning but than the song really gets going. I like it...I like it alot. Here you go a 10/10 on review and 5/5 voting. Review my heavens danceloor now :) Thanks

dj-Nate responds:

Sure, no problem. Thanks for reviewin'.

techno to dance?

Umm I think you should have left this song in techno like your first one. I'm going to grade it like it was in the techno section. Okay so very techno type so that's a plus. It has that kinda fast leading synth so your hands must have been tired playing that on the keyboard. I'm not sure if techno bases itself on repetitiveness like trance cause this song is quite repetitive. My lack of techno knowledge is making this review crap. Ahh what the heck. 9/10 on review and 5/5 on voting. There I'm done. Bye for now

mistahmoo responds:

Thanks for the review :D Lol ok, i dont have a lot of experience with any electronic music, and i thought this was dancable,so i put dance. Whatever, apparantly i dont know what drum n bass is either XD Well, I'm glad you liked it. Oh, and I use fruity loops. I have no idea how to play keyboard, lol. But some of the guitar in my other songs is me, i do play that. This is a long response. Bye.

Hmm

I heard some parts of this somewhere. Did you expand on the "Calm dance"? I like the calm feel but gets abrupted quickly with percussion. A gradual change would have been nice. What music program do you use? Okay so a good song, just work on transitions (yeah I have to also in my songs..I suck at them) better and this song would have been really good. So 9/10 on review and what the heck...5/5 voting cause I feel like it. :)

Review by Music story

I was laughing when I saw someone write a paper review. Mine isn't going to me nearly as long. Okay so song starts with buildup. I love buildup. That and cheery songs are the first 2 features I look for in any song. Yeah your song isn't cheery but you got multiple buildups. That airy buildup sound I love soo much. I heard that synth in another song on NG and I wish I had it. What program do you use? I use this cheap garageband 3 program which comes free with macs so yeah a $0 program. Not the best. So this is your general pattern. Buildup --> speed mix --> buildup --> speed mix etc. It kinda gets chaotic near the end of the song. Too much stuff is going on. I can see you put alot of effort in this song. Oh you even end with a buildup too. You really like that. So the breakdown is you get a 9/10 (the chaotic part had a bit of mushy sounds by the overlapping of synths) and a 5/5 on voting because you have outdone yourself in the art of building up. :) Bye for now

Karco responds:

Hah, yeah... SBB really overdid it with that review. =P

That's true that my song isn't cheery - it isn't supposed to be. It's supposed to be high energy levels leading to higher. XD Darn it, I love buildups and you can't stop me from making them! =D

All of the synths in this song, with a few exceptions, I got from joor.com. It's a great website which has hundreds of synths, literally - recently I downloaded the drums there, it's likely you'll see them in my next song. The airy buildup sound you're describing is a pad, though I'm not sure whether you're talking about the one I start the song with or the one I continue the first buildup with and stay consistent with throughout the song... hmm. Let's talk about it via PM sometime. One I got from joor.com, the other from another website.

I use FL Studio 6 - find out about it at www.fruityloops.com. It's generally known as a program that's easy to use and good for newcomers to intermediate music artists, so if you're interested, go there. There are four versions, three of which are worth buying - the Express edition, ($50) which is pretty much a drumkit from what I've heard, the FruityLoops edition, ($100) which I have, and is a stripped down version of the third, the Producer Edition, ($150)which is the best you an get. The fourth, XXL, ($361) is the Producer Edition with a bunch of plugins together.

Yeah, I've said this what feels like 101 times and I'll say it again: mixing was a big problem with this song. Thankfully, it's not that big of one, as this song still has a perfect score of 5... and you made that 5 even stronger. Thanks a lot for the rating and the review, it means a lot to me. I hope you find this very long response worthwhile. XD

LOL a 4/5 wha??

I have no clue how this song got 4/5 and is in the top dance songs. Oh well. There are alot of problems on the NG audio portal so I'm going to play along too....ahem awesome song. The best dance song by far. Your music makes the best artists on NG sound like neewbs. So umm yeah 6/5...but I can't so 5/5. LOL :)

DaGrahamCraka responds:

lol.

Two happy songs :)

Wow! two happy song submissions on the same day. I must be in heaven j/k. No surprise what score I'm giving you. I'm all for happy songs. Another great song. Your on a roll.

dj-padman1 responds:

as much as its nice to hear from you, some feedback about a couple of aspects of the track would be appreciated. ;P

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