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[ROOTS (cover w/vocals)]

Makes me laugh

The beat is so mean it scares me. I love it when you yell rooooooooooooooooooooooottttttttss. :) The common voice by bad man incorp. I know that whenever you make music or collab with something I'm going to hear vocals. I turned the speakers up real loud. Almost blew my ears up. Evil guitars...real bad. Better lyrics would have made this song better. Also if the ending had more vocals...no vocals for a while before the song ends. Well I'm done. 10 stars and 10/10 on the comedy factor of roots. Good job CreepingDan on the music. 5 vote too.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Haha, thanks a lot, man. Glad you enjoyed it. I did forget to mention that this was a song originally done by Sepultura. You can youtube it. Pretty sweet. Thanks for the awesome review and vote!\m/

[[Dj-U] {Frozen}]

Cool

The beginning was pretty poor. Very simple pattern was used, however, the song jumps into something with more energy. The simple pattern continues, but at least you got a cool sample playing now. I don't know if it is one of the basses or the kick, but sometimes one just blurts out too loudly that distortion occurs. Maybe it's my bad computer that is doing it. Overall a nice trance to listen to. I like the panorama going on. I'll give you a 9 star rate and a 5/5 vote cause this was a 2 person effort. Tell jala-fox to come visit my audio page. I recently posted a new 7 min. song. Oh and if you want, you can check it out too. Bye for now and good job.

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

YAY! A MUSIC-STORY REVIEW! heh thanks for the review. yeah i didn't like the just the bass in the beginning, but it did work out alright. The distortion was the fruity free filter on the kick, heh it's not your computer, surprised you heard that, it was kind of subtle :-P Thanks for teh 5 =)

I'll definatly tell jalafox to give you a listen, and i will too :P
Thanks again for the review, Dj-unknown

[==(Carousel)==]

Oh did I?

Well I'm glad I could be of "indirect" help to you. Not sure if this is like wedding music. Maybe for a reception, but song is too long to dance too. Well the song repeats for a long time. Somehow even if it repeats, (and I tend not to be too fond of repetitive songs) the song sounds very calm...almost like it has to repeat to get you in a soothing mood. I don't think this song is happier, just more relaxing. Kinda like your other ambient songs. I like the exotic percussion you used very rarely in this song. (not talking about the drums and cymbals) . The drum pattern is nice. I like how you put 2 cymbal clashes at the end of the drum loop. At 1:43 the drums remain the same except no 2 cymbal clashes anymore. Was that something you intentionally did as a way to indicate a near ending of the drums and into a new section? The bright bass sounds a bit funny. A very long ending to this song. That last instrument that ends the song sounds eerie. Good long ambient song. Some extra themes would be better. This song reminds me of ice caverns. 9 stars and 5 vote. Bye for now.

Buoy responds:

It's not lots of wedding music but the dancy organ thingy made it sound like that to me. And ya, I know what you mean with the exotic thing, I use it through the whole song, though it isn't too present in the main part. I know the ending is pretty long, I need to change that sometime. Thanks for the review!

[(skyline)]

Yeah now this is fun

Lots of heaven stuff at the start. Song calms done and has again a happy instrument leading. Maybe you stretched out the calm part too long. Not much changed happened there. The last section of the song seems to be now a combination of the beginning section and the calm part. May need some extra musical themes, but I like the energy and happy feeling listening to this. I actually checked this song after seeing a rev. you made to another to check out your stuff. Likewise I'll do the same. Check out my new song and listen to whole thing. Bye for now and good job to dagraham and telenova.

Nyth-Pinank responds:

Ya man, I am glad you liked how it went from being happy to slow and then happy again. I tried to make it as much repetitive as possible. But then I was thinking of combing the beginning piano solo towards the end of the song, to put it all together. I appreciate that you actually read another review of mine and reviewed my song. That means a lot to me. I will def check out your song.

Take care =)

[{In Your Arms}]

I'll rev. this one

HHC yep. Like the piano. The bass trance sounds rather generic. At 0:42 that synth sounds generic too. I think "twilight techno" and cormandbean's song used that one before. Lots of energy in this which I like. I'm not tired listening to this music. 1:45 a nice bass n kick. The composition sounds rather basic here. Still love that piano...I think you have choir backing up the piano? A decent ending. I give you 9/10 rev. cause I think you could have done better with the instrument modifications. 5/5 vote of course. Need your opinion for a new song of mine. Listen to whole thing. Bye for now.

dj-skeetskeet-69 responds:

Tell Music-story what you think of his review!

I think: "lol."

[Carnival of Lost Prophecy =WB=]

Happy carnival style.

Good piano playing. An impressive composition indeed. The flute is nice too. The piano gets really repetitive. Maybe change it up more. The trumpet seems to be overpowered by the piano and flute. Overall I like happy stuff so a 5/5 vote and 9/10 stars. Bye for now.

WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, I haven't changed the piano at all throughout the song, so that's why I added the trumpet to fill out the bass a bit. Also, the piano has a syncopation that really makes the song what it is, so I kept it above the rumpets, but I wanted the flute to stand out heaps, as it carried the melody. The trumpets don't really change at all, so I didn't find it necessary to highlight that.
Thanks for the 5/5, 9/10 and review.

[*- Flabbergast -*]

Umm..

No comment except I must be fair in rating. 8/10 on the start...song got better later so I raise to 9/10. Song went downhill near end so 8/10. Needs a bit more organization...nah alot more. Funny song to listen to though. Your song has a higher score than my new song so well done. :) Bye for now.

Jebbal responds:

lol It wasn't supposed to be organized! It was supposed to be completely random and flabbergasting! 8/10 is probably more than I'd have given it though, so thanks. =) Above anything else, it was only meant to be good for a laugh.

Greedy Aptitude is amazing dude, just need to say that again! It very much deserves a higher score!

[The hero's theme]

The classic heavy metal style.

Nice guitars and drums. At 0:50 I like one of the guitar's that takes a obvious lead role. 1:20 a transition into something with a cool beat. Quite diverse for a heavy metal song. Ehh? Piano. Wish it were a longer piano part. I sense this song could work in a video game. It already got used in a flash so good job on that. 10 stars cause I like diverse stuff. I also like piano. Now the previous rev. said that the drums may need some working. I suppose the drums could have been more hardcore. Some quick cymbal clashes would have raised the excitement level. Besides that I liked everything else. 5 vote too. Bye for now.

Mrbungl3 responds:

Thanks for constructive feedback kind sir.. I agree on the drums, i wish i were better at that part. Cheers!

[Summer Funz]

Opps. Missed this one

Yah...ppl are clapping for you. The bass introduction is a bit wierd. Well there is alot of kick. Wow...really high screech in one of the happy synths. This song is much more happier than your other stuff but that screech you have to get rid of. Overall a fun song to listen to. The piano sounds good. Well one thing I learned today. Now I know what your possible real name is. Bye for now

Trunks responds:

Yeah in FL Studio I guess I accidentally layered that sound on twice, making it higher than the rest and when I copied the melody and moved it an octave it had the same thing... bu thanks for the review :)

And how would you know what my name is?

[man the cannons!]

! nice job

Why is this not in the top 5? This is a song that gets me excited and happy. Sure some of the rhythm sounds familiar, but no big deal. I like the percussion and the distorted guitars. Seems like this song likes to be in "steven and kyle" flash. I could see this in a mini commercial for like the x games. 5/5 vote. 10/10 rev. These songs make the audio portal look so much more better. Keep them coming.

Mrbungl3 responds:

Hey thanks a lot man! It's reviews like these that encourage me to make more..
btw i checked out/commented some of your stuff.. Neat!