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Messed up

This flash messed up my eyes a bit. A interesting concept. Your song fit well in this flash. Must of took some time to get the transitions of the colors. Good job with the first flash. Make something more interactive in your 2nd flash if you want.

5/5

Bye for now

InvisibleObserver responds:

Thanks for another review, glad you liked it. I'm thinking of doing something interactive a fair bit down the road, I'm still getting a grasp of animating, I'm not too big on scripting. If anything is interactive, it most likely won't be in a game format.

Flash rev.

Wow! So many madness flashes on NG for madness day. I've sampled a few of the other madness flashes and yours fits somewhere in the top 30%. I like how you decided to use Jamaica as your location. Here is my summary:

Good:
-characters and themes are very madness like (I don't remember a doctor in the madness series so that is new for me)
-mercy (some of the guys got a beating by fists, but never the gun shot to the body or head...a rare mercy scene)
-somewhat of a comedy factor when the doctor decides what button to press (I would have chosen the pizza :) )

Some more work:
-lack of realism (What I mean is when a guy is getting shot his body remains motionless and a red blood dot appears on him)
-to be continued! ( well I would have liked a conclusion...the next one better be awesome...doctor vs main character)
-lack of weapons used (the main character just likes weak weapons and the odd sword? I wanted him to pick up the shot gun when he killed that zombie)
-lastly maybe it is just my computer, but the frames skip (eg sword battle where main character runs out of bullets. The sword guy instantly appears next to him)

Overall a nice flash. Better than me...I can't even make flash. Good luck with your sequel. I'll vote 5 and a 8 review.

PlatinumX9 responds:

Thanks for the review. I like it when people put real effort into good reviews. As far as the lack of realism, thats just the madness style. my style might be a bit more drastic. sorry it was so short, the second one will be much longer. and when the jump when he runs out of bullets, i don't know whats up with that, it wasn't like that when i made it.

thanks,

~PX9

Ha ha fun

The credits were the best part of the movie! Pretty good flash too though the old nintendo sprites did take away from the graphics. Bored of making flash? Funny. We seem to be in opposite circumstances. We can switch. :) I'll start making flash and you start making music...if you stop playing WoW first. I'll give you and your collab partner a 9 star. I seen those dragonball z ripoffs with mario and friends in them and they are a little better than this one. I'm wondering what your next episode will be. I'm assuming the mushrooms and the marios (why don't you call them mario and luigi?) will win the battle cause the good guys always win. Surprise me with a twist in the next one when you decide to get back to flash. Bye for now.

Trunks responds:

Thanks for the review man :) I'll keep you in mind when I animate the sequel :)

Nice vox and plot

Your flash reminds me of borat for some funny reason. This is well made. Sure the graphics aren't stellar but, the story line is more important. The voice is hilarious especially when bjorn starts swearing a whole bunch. Why is he blue though? I like how you purposely never show some of the characters faces...quite common in the mystery based stories. Maybe instead of stick arms for the murders, try arms that well aren't sticks. In the credits you said you did the voices. How the heck did you do the girl impersonation? That must have been funny to watch you speak like a girl. :) So 5/5 for sure and 9/10 rev. Keep the flash coming.

ChrisNosal responds:

There....isn't a girls voice in the episode.

As for the faces, yeah, though to be honest, I didn't show some faces mostly because I didn't want to have to think up what they'd look like. But also think it works well for the style of this episode as you said.

Thanks.

Jermosseu @Music-story

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