Okay, before I wrote this review you had a 1.25/5. Seriously ppl shouldn't grade you if they don't like classical. The song was short so the repetition didn't bore me. But that still doesn't mean it was diverse. Pretty much the same stuff. I'm not sure if ppl understand what originality means too. I think your music was highly original. Anyway I will give you a 6 overall. It's good but compared to the other classical songs, ehh kinda behind them. I will give you the vote of 3/5. I see you got a couple of gold tracks too. Nice job. Okay bye for now
Well, I could post the best song in the world (not the Tenacious D one!) and I would get bad scores. I guess there just some people voting 0 all the time.. meh.
Great way to show the business of life. Do you use garageband 3? cause I recognize one of the loops. Not a bad thing at all, well placed. I loved diversity songs so 10 on that and highly original. So why the overall 8? Well it isn't really a song I can dance to but that doesn't mean it sucks at all. Please make more of these songs. I will give you a 5/5 on the voting.
hey dude! thanks for your kind words! really appreciate it! i dont use garageband, i use Logic Pro 7, a more advance (and more fuckiong expensive) program from apple! and as it is from apple, they threw all the garage band audio loops and bits n pieces into the package as well as a bout a million other features! it really is a good bit of software!
thanks for the high ratings, the reason this isnt a tune to dance to is because, as it was a college project, we worked along side the girls on the dance course who were given a brief by their tutor to base a dance around one of four themes (my dancer got the theme of fashion) and then the dances came to us and told us what they wanted to do in their dance and how they wanted this portrayed in the music! it was a touch one but i got there in the end! only problem was, as i was working to a breif and a deadline: i A) didn't get to be completely creative on it
and
B) didn't have the time i would have liked to individually mix each drum sound and sample correctly!
i may come back to it eventually, but right now im glad to see the back of that assignment lol!
I know that songs on NG must be downgraded in quality to fit 4000kb so yeah I think it had an affect on the clarity of the song. However that is not going to affect your score. What will is some of the sounds were imbalanced meaning some were louder than the others so I couldn't hear the quiter ones as well. The song is kinda short but a nice dance tune. Diversity is a bit lacking since same tune in entire song. Overall I liked it. More pros than cons. Good job. I will give you a 3/5 though you deserve a 3.5/5 which I can't give you. NG should fix that problem.. Can you review and vote for my songs especially the non dance songs since ppl aren't looking at those that much. Don't think the 2.5/5 score means it sucks. A blammer always gives me 0/5 on all my songs while another guy gives me a 5/5. Math says should equal 2.5/5. I DO NOT vote for myself ever since that's cheating.
Out of all the pop songs on NG, yours is the best "lyrical" song. I actually ddl your song like months ago, but never had a NG account to review it. Very good song to here. Very cheery, happy, kinda like the songs made by the dixie chicks. Please make more. I did have trouble understanding some of the lyrics though. Eg. You start talking about marlene monroe but than it goes blurry. What were you trying to say?? Anyway, I will give you a 4.5/5 but since I can't I will round to 5/5. Great stuff
Yes, my friend Andee wrote these great lyrics and I was inspired to do this music. As a matter of fact this is her doing the singing as well... here are her lyrics:
V1:
I've been waiting in line
I've been left at the alter
But my blood tastes like wine
Though my chariots falter
And if this is my limit
I'll try for one more step
And once I step in it
I'll see I've got more left
C:
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and though life feels so stagnant
I can't turn the page
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and since life's coming slowly I'm young for my age
V2:
And work is a prison cell
We move through molasses
I tell me this isn't hell
Look through rose glasses
I've got to be going,
My clock's getting rusty
Even if i'm still growing
I feel a bit dusty
I'm average terminal mediocre, vague
Bridge:
Proto-typical, Mediocrity at best just like the rest
V3:
And when I live life to death
Did I make an impression?
Did I fill every breath
With a heartfelt confession?
If i meant every word i said
And loved everybody
Does it matter that now I'm broke,
Tired and muddy?
C:
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and though life feels so stagnant
I can't turn the page
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and since life's coming slowly I'm young for my age
Since you wanted a review badly, I will give you one. I have one request though..can you vote and review some of my songs too. Thanks. Okay so I'm hearing some good trance music at the start. Later in the middle of the song it switches to video game music with the whole gameboy sounds I hear. That made it a little ackward but still a good song overall. The clarity was a bit of a problem in some parts of the song. I was surprised at how many songs you have made. 9 pages!!! of songs. Wow that is impressive. Okay so I will give you a 4/5. Bye for now
Sigh... whatever happened to writing reviews just to tell the author that you liked the song? No, now its all about getting something in return... bleh.
"Game boy sounds"? I think you mean my square lead.
And about the clarity... it would have been just fine if you told me what was making the clarity "a bit of a problem".
Well this song was...no is the strangest song I've ever heard on NG. At first I thought there was no song, just a guy talking. Eventually the song came, but I couldn't understand what the guy was saying. Why does the cat grin like that. Than a blurb I can't quite make out. Sometimes the guy says "It's a (?????) cat" I couldn't here that one either. Than a newcaster women comes in and now I'm lost. Do you love cats? I can't believe your at the top of miscellaneous section. 5/5 that's a good score. I will give you a 3/5 on the song so sorry you won't be a 5/5 anymore. I just can't see it as the Puuurrfect song lol. Excuse the pun.
This is the strangest type of techno I have heard. That is probably why I gave you a high originality score. I understand why you named it parallel. Good name. There are some parts in the beginning where there is too much breaking so for eg. a small tune comes out than silence for a few moments than another tune comes. I would be nice if there were no silence breaks. Your music is fun to play. Makes me feel happy. :) Interesting concept..I give you a 4/5. Can you review some of my songs? Just search for my user name and listen and vote please. Thanks alot
As usual, your amazing at making any dance songs. Out of all the dance artist on NG you are definitely #2. Sorry flashburn is incredible at making dance songs too. Please make more. Kinda hard for me to say since you already have a whole bunch :) It was a bit repetitive, but still the tune was great enough to not make that problem a biggie. This is my 2nd fav song of yours behind eternal flames. Good job and keep it up. Can you squeeze some music tips to me?
This song sounded like a solo song for an oboe? I liked the pace and it does give you a minor rush. If you added some drums/percussion to the main instrument it would have been more of a rush. I like music that builds up so this song would have been amazing if you did that. Why don't you resend a edited version so I can listen to it again? Good effort on the song. I will give you a 3/5. PM if you do send in a edited version. Thanks
hmm. that does sound like a good idea, ill put more work into the remix, i will call it Wired for eternity.
Thanyou for the review, the program i hae is kindof wierd untill you really get the hang of it, my song standed was when i got the hang of it.
The program is called buzz
I don't think this song anyone can dance too. More of a techno to me. Your title of the song seems appropriate :) I have read other reviews on your songs and I notice ppl saying yours songs repeat. Well, I think their right on that point. A little more diversity would help. 230 bpm doesn't sound really fast when I listened to it, but I don't really care about that. Good stuff and I see you have a platinum. That's awesome...good achievement. I will give you a 3/5 on this song. Bye for now
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