Review
First question...did you make this song from scratch? 2nd question....how did you make that guitar sound like olden music? Okay so a peaceful baroque song. I like it, nothing wrong with it. You said you spent a looooooonnnnnng time making this song and the result is excellent. So a 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Oh wear headphones when listening to it.
yes i did make it from scratch
Review
Looks like you already got some advice from your previous review. Not sure how this fits in hip hop modern cause sounds kinda happy. I have advice to give you. Make a public profile so we can access your songs easier. So this song is a bit repetitive and doesn't seem that hard to make. You said you were having trouble with Fruity loops. Are you new to using the program? Everything takes time to learn so you will soon be able to master FL. So other suggestions are make song more busy...more harmonies. So a 5/5 vote to keep your score at the current 5/5 and a 8/10 review. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Wear HEADPHONES when listening to song. Okay bye for now
yes i am new to fruity loop!
thanks for the advice.
Uh oh
Good piano playing, but it isn't amazing when you play another person's song. I don't like Inuyasha anime either. :) So hard to grade you here since NG = music you made NOT posting music other people made. So again good piano skills which means you have knowledge about music which makes you one of the most talented musicians on NG. However this song blows when compared to other NG members who make songs, even crappy ones. So overall a 5/5 voting and 9/10 because I love the piano. Thank your piano because if it was any other instrument than......you don't want to know. Okay bye for now
A tribute to where you live
Tell your song exist to all the Englewood people so they can be proud of your song. I think the song is good but very strange. Is that someone hitting wine glasses? I have a hard time to tell when the song ends too so maybe make your ending more evident. Good ideas involved but needs more stuff to it. Make song more busy. 5/5 voting and umm can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Here is a tip to get people reviewing your songs. If you review theirs they will more likely review yours. You only have 1 review. Okay so bye for now
Interesting start
I missed what they were saying at the start of the song. Why the title forgot me? You mastered your song well, but it isn't diverse enough and that vox? is not fitting with the song. Has that mood in a video game where you visit the town square fair in the olden times. What is the vox saying? Please tell me. So umm has a bit of a happy feel to it which I like. Overall a 5/5 voting and a 9/10 review. Bye for now
Google Fairuz, classical Arab singer. I sampled her up to say, "They forgot me" (in Arabic).
Some happy stuff.
Can't believe your song hasn't been reviewed yet. Lol your vox is soo cheesy that it makes me feel happy. Good beat and a song for little children for sure. Happy tunes always !!! 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. No suggestions... cutesy music. Love it. Bye for now
Erm, I hope you're being ironical with the "song for little children" statement, since the lyrics are... Well, obscene. :D
It was just intended to be an energetic gut laugh of a song, not much else.
Description?
Of course it isn't your last song. Why would you say that unless it was your last song? Lots of energy blasts in this trance song. The ending is a bit wierd. Sounds industrial at the start of the song. This song seems basic on the leading synth. Than again I didn't think of it before you made it so must be complex. Sounds like a loop a bit, but this is trance so diversity 10/10. So suggestions are instead of using more effects to make song sweet, add more of your composition stuff on top. Eg. more harmonies. So overall a 5/5 voting and 10/10 review.
Industrial review
Ohh starts off with the whole panning thing going on. You have recently been making a whole bunch of industrial. Is that your favorite genre now? Weird distortion you got in one of your synths. Woah the song changes mood soo fast with those sweeping synths. I like it. I didn't like when you combined all the instruments together, but than again I'm not a big industrial fan. However, I'm not biased because of that. You got the whole working in a factory with huge gears circling around so I think you did a good job herel So umm suggestions for improvements? Well I'm not sure. I don't know enough about what makes a good industrial song. For all I know, maybe this is the best industrial song in the world. :) So I treat it like that and give you 10/10 review and 5/5 review. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Evil tuesday is coming!!! Blammer day :( Bye for now
haha. evil tuesday. :)
anyways, thanks for the review. i guess i've always had trouble choosing a category for the things i make, but with my newer stuff industrial is the best fit i can think of. so its not so much a matter of my favorite genre, as much a matter of how im composing at a certain point. i also really like the mood change, so thanks for noticing that. i'll be sure to check out your song in a bit, 'cos i cant at this moment. but hopefully by tommorow :).
so thanks again for the listen and the review!
Gate way 4
Making a series I see. Not bad. Starts dancy a bit. Your songs are unique because you always surprise me when you buildup your songs. They never go where I'm anticipating them to go. Original factor is high. Good clapping loop but I think it is a bit too overpowering over the other synths. It seems that the clapping loop is the show in this song rather than your composed stuff. This song is a gentle trance compared to other trances on NG. I like your style better. So umm fix up on your next song the suggestions I made and you get a 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" in miscellaneous section. (Note it is a mellow tune so if you hate that style than don't review or vote then) Okay bye for now
Thanks 4 ur reveiw and suggestions and when i was making the clap loops i was first experinmenting with them. Now i hav it under control.
Blues
Have not heard blues for a while. Good rhythm and that can't be you playing the saxophone cause that is crazy good stuff. This is your own composition using your music program right? Not someone else's music I hope. Wow you didn't sleep for 2 days to make this song. Lots of effort and sacrifice for us NG ppl. Your too kind. To repay for your act of kindness to me you get a 10/10 review and 5/5 review. Not much I can sayto improve this so good job.
I actualy got a HUGE loop collection by buying it online. The Saxaphone (not a trumpet) was made of like 30 something odd loops for this one.
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