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[!_-Lunar Eclipse-_!]

What's this?

Doesn't sound very trancy until 10 secs in. You got some good special effects and the bass comes in to signal a buildup. It doesn't really buildup to anything except a calm melody. I like calm stuff though so I'm not complaining. :) Yeah your song is unique compared to the other trances. Might be the first trance I heard on NG that is more relaxing rather than blasting at your ears kind of music. Good, but I get a bit bored later in the song. Probably using the same synths stretched out for long periods of time. So 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Besides the synths, maybe surprise me with something that gets me going. Too much relaxing makes me go to sleep. :) Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Wear HEADPHONES too.

[Rucklo: a Personal ode]

Umm wait huh?

Okay so song is fuzzing the whole time through. Meh I guess I have to download your song to listen to it. Give me some seconds.....Okay listening now. Umm what is so great about rucklo? He is just a guy like the rest of us on NG. You got a comedy factor with the phone call. Umm yes so umm of course Rucklo is going to give you 10/10 review for this song. Your hero worshipping him. :) Umm i don't know how great this Rucklo is. Maybe he is king in some foreign country...lol Okay so umm well good guitar playing at least. Your already a better musician than half the people on NG. Your vox though sucks, but I get the idea you did that on purpose. So umm why not 5/5 voting. Go Rucklo...whoever you are.

sonicmega responds:

Yeah, it was off the top of my head, so you have to improvise on the go. I'm glad you at least seemed to like it. I do need to work on my voice though. I'm not a singing kind of guy XD

[/||*Happy !!!!*/|\]

Sure okay easy review time

Not happy enough. Maybe the little sparkles at the end of the song might make the happy enough borderline. I guess I'm happy for your bro making decent song. Does he like happy music? Tell him to listen to my "carnaval charMS" So to start your bro off on a positive start a 10/10 review and 5/5 review. You seem experienced with making music so I will let you give him suggestions. Bye for now

[Sir Fugglegigget]

You have to finish this one up

Too short of a song, but it is looking to be a good future full length song if you decide to finish it. Please do. So since just a loop umm 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now

[Day Dream (Subterfuger)]

Say..goofing off..not bad

For just messing around with your music program...not a bad job at all. Has a nice calm beat to it and that cool effect where the sound switchs from speaker to speaker in a circle. What made you get into making audios now? This song is like a loop to me, but I give trance and techno all diversity of 10/10 because that is one of their properties. So improvements? For your 2nd song a nice job. Maybe make a buildup (yeah you got a mini one at the start, but a bigger one) and add some more synths and harmonies. If your intention was to keep song calm than I guess my advise is useless. I see you reviewed some of my songs but your reviewing my sucky songs when I only had garageband 3. Can you review and vote for my newest song "carnaval charMS" please? Blammer tuesday is coming so I need the votes quickly. My song already got blammed once. So 5/5 voting to you raising your score from 0/5 to 5/5. Bye for now.

Subterfuger13 responds:

i dont realy have an intending genre 4 my audioz, i just want it 3 be cool.

[~Never Forget~]

Deja vu?

Huh this sound familiar to your 1st dance song. Wait a sec...what's going on here? DId you remix this song to make that dance song of yours? Well some differences, but really only the special effects. Umm running out of music ideas? :) Two songs almost identical so umm yeah uhh identical scores I guess. Okay see my other review for more detail. Oh guessed D major in the dance song, but just a guess so could be in C major, G major, etc. Just keep the sharps and flats in check with your key in the dance song. Okay bye for now

DJ-DaVinster responds:

Thanks for the review.

Yeah, this was kind of a remix of Ravin' Love. But more of a detication to my dad.

I'm not that savvy with music, so you'll have to deal with that.

[DP03- {Untitled} [D]]

dance review

Well its a good first effort for dance. Umm are you playing DDDDDD CCCCCCC BBBBBBB CCCCCCC AT THE START? Okay so good so far but your next rhythm pattern sounds like in the minor key which doesn't belong. I could be wrong, but usually if you start song in major key, you should remain in major key. So what key did you use to make this song? D major? If so all the F and C should be the only ones sharped or something won't fit. So I guess when it is in the major kind of tune than it sounds dancy. Very repetitive too but since your first than 5/5 voting and well 10/10 review. Can you review and vote for my new track called "carnaval charMS". It is not a dance song nor any genre thus miscellaneous. Mellow song too so umm thanks. Bye for now.

DJ-DaVinster responds:

Thanks for the review!

-For the intro, I accually went with DFEF 4 times, then CFEF 4 times, BFEF 4 times and CFEF 4 times.
-I didn't really use a key, I just went with notes that sounded good together.

[Arvale Theme (v2)]

Review of remix

Okay this sounds different from the first one. Now I hear some familiar stuff. Battle scene is comoing. So what changed this song from classical to miscellaneous? Adventure sounding. Not really a battle this team...more of a lets go and look for treasure or explore new places kind of feel. Has a bit of battle scenes, not as much. To make this song in 4 hours is really fast. You obviously knew what you were doing when making this song. So umm still good song so 10/10 and 5/5 voting. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS". Mellow song for sure. Hope you like it.

Diabolo-ical responds:

Yeah, I accidentally uploaded it in the Misc. section. It is meant to be in the Classical genre but nevermind.

And yeah, I hear ya, it certainly isn't battle-ish but I agree it at least sounds adventurous. I think I screwed up the volumes though... oh well.

Thanks for your review, I'll go take a listen to your "carnaval charMS" now :)

[Revenge Is Back]

You got blammed.

Seems like the blammers are appearing more often on NG. So a 5/5 voting. Robotic voices and that marching kind of sound. Sounds like some chaotic battle is going on. I get a bit bored from the repetitiveness, but still a good song. So a 5/5 voting. Umm can you review and vote for my song (which got blammed too :( ) called carnaval charMS. Hope you like mellow songs.

DJRevenge responds:

ill go take a look. Yea some people are kinda lame like that.

[FXUEM- [ Speed Freak]]

Trance artist I see

Yeah a fast song. I've heard faster. Good melody and use of special effects. I guess some parts of the song can work as dance, but this is repetitive so more of a trance. So, only suggestion is make song more busy...more harmonies. Umm so 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. If you don't mind, can you review and vote for my song "carnarval charMS" which is a mellow song. If you hate those than don't review it I guess. Bye for now

Fxuem responds:

Yeah, ill get to reviewing your song. Thanks for the awesome review, the 10/10, and the 5/5.
Peace

FXUEM