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[[The bridge g-R]]

G-rave

Have not heard your songs for a while so decided to take a listen. You were only gone for like a week and a bit. Of course we think your alive. This one is softer which I like better. The bridge....trying to see the connection. I give up, why you called it the bridge? This one seems one of your more repetitive ones. I think trance would have been a better place to put this song. This song does not sound techno-ish like the other techno songs. Short song, but you got some nice reverb going on. Some parts of the song I think I heard somewhere before. Probably your older songs :) Though song is softer feel, I think you made better ones. I'm going to give you 9/10 review and 5/5 review so your score will change a whole 0 points up. Good for you. Bye for now.

g-r4ve responds:

aheh. I just called it bridge cus that was the first thing that popped into my head lol

[Combat at Sea]

Ironic

I reviewed a song that has a combat at sea kind of story behind it. This song is more futuristic with the radar going. Your building the song nicely to add suspense. The typical marching tom drum of armies. You do quite well with getting your story across and I can see it in a submarine movie flick. Who knows, maybe it will be in the future. Good job and so a 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. I probably won't download this song since I can't really dance to it. :) Others might disagree. Bye for now

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

I was thinking of using those blips I had for a radar for days, but didn't get around to it until today. Thanks for the review!

[[TCM] Skytrail]

Happy music :)

Do I hear crickets? Nice sound effects. Kinda jumpy and cutesy mood. Like your choice of synths. The only problem is that isolated part you have in your song. Also a bit repetitive but you put song under trance so I guess diversity 10/10. 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. I love those mellow tunes.

MtMTheCandyMan responds:

Yeah I thought it was repetitive too. I noticed that all my songs were short, so my goal was to prolong the audio. It is REALLY hard to make the song long while keeping it new LoLz. (for me at least)

[Live for the Moment]

Fun

You still have that happy tune, but for some reason it sounds a bit like another song on NG (talking about the leading synth pattern. Your drums and bass are doing the same thing again and again. Funny the stuff that is not the drum N bass is changing and leading the song forward. LOL C A F D pattern you got going. Everyone likes that pattern. Okay so a 9/10 review and 5/5 voting. Maybe twist the drum N bass around more.

[I'm Alive]

Very late review

You made this song a while ago. Yah happy hardcore. This sounds like I'm at a carnarval a bit. Funny cause I'm posting a new song very soon called Carnaval charMS. You keep the happy mood going, and for some reason I don't think your repeating your rhythm because I want to feel happy more. The ending is a bit weird. Good song and mellow songs are the best songs on NG. Everyone knows that :)

[[DPS] - Xtreme Gateway]

Techno now

Fast pase. I love fast songs. Awesome way to start the song. Excellent drums and the guy's voice again. Opps felt empty when you were using lots of those special effects and plain drums. Okay so the drums come back but it is the same rhythm. Since you put this song under techno, I'm not so lenient on the diversity score. Listening to song again.....Yes I still love the start of the song. Yeah I still dond't like that empty part of the song. Yes, you definatly do return back to the same rhythm so 5/5 voting but a 9/10 review. (Thank your intro to giving you a 9. Bye for now

Dj-Powerstorm responds:

This was my first attempt at a hardcore track. U can't expect everyone 2 be perfect? Can u?

[[DPS] - Evolution Gateway]

I saw two gateways

Okay so you submitted two types of "gateway" songs back to back. I'll review both of them for you. Bouncy tune to start the song. Good special effects with guy's voice. Love the drums. Just as I though...trance. Repetitive song. You at least have a build up but you only add 1 more synth to it. I thought you were going to add many synths to make a big buildup. Your song kinda ends very quickly so I have a hard time whether I'm listening to song from the start again. Okay so one of the better ones I reviewed today. A 9/10 review and 5/5 voting. Note that I always give 10/10 for diversity on trance songs cause that is trance. K bye for now

Dj-Powerstorm responds:

This was actually a track tht was meant to be put on a long time ago, tht was when i didn't have much experience.

[TeleskopTittenTiffy]

I review and vote so no worry

If you want people to review and vote you yourself have to review other people's songs. Pop? Who the heck zeroed your song. Blammer is on today I guess. This doesn't sound like pop to me. Very hard sound with the loud basses going. LOL you put sonic the hedgehog music on this song of yours. Maybe instead of just changeing the synths and using the same pattern, maybe change the rhythm and the synth. Kinda gets repetitive. Some parts you do change but they are isolated from the other harmonies. Why is your song named teleskop? Okay so maybe if you put this song in drum N bass with an addition of drums to your song and it would be better. Also that sonic music didn't fit at all. So a 5/5 voting and 9/10 review cause the bass was good enough.

[Arvale Theme]

My review is much shorter

Yes...I am going on an adventure....on a ship...over the never ending seas. Make that dark seas. Pirate ship is coming. A battle...prepare the cannons. Steer the ship so parallel to enemy ship. Start firing guns and cannons. In comes the choir. Wait that didn't fit somewhere in the music story. Great song. Who are the pricks who gve your score a 3.33/5? Well I'm giving you a 5/5 voting. Good job showing the battle scene. I guess the choir pad was for a epic feeling. For some reason the rhythm sounds familiar. There are alot of songs in the world that kinda use your idea already. I'm not saying you did not make this song from scratch. So a 10/10 review too. Time to raise your score.

Diabolo-ical responds:

lol.

How do so many folks match my music to particular settings or film scenes, even I can't do that and I make the damn stuff!

Well anyway, thanks for your review and scores. A nice scene you built for my song :)

[Fairy Wings]

Hey this sounds connected

So part 2 ends with the guitar sounds. This one starts with the guitar sounds. A completely new tune with some techno voice effects. Okay now I recognize the sweep synth. Ehh?? Okay all the guns go bang bang bang. Is that your voice and why did you say that? It would be nice if you had better transition rather than instantly something new pops up. If your music program doesn't have any good transitions available than maybe hold the last note for a while and transition while holding that note. I liked the beginning of the song the best and your clapping loop made it sound like a dancy song. Also you isolated one part with the keyboardish sound near the beginning of the song which kinda didn't fit or did fit but felt too empty. I'm glad that your using more harmonies in your songs. You don't have too many that the sound gets muffled like what I tend to do all the time and not too little to not make the song bland cept that one part I described above. Okay so part 1 and 2 do connect which makes fairy wings a very long song. So a 9/10 (I liked your part 2 better) and 5/5 voting. Sorry if my review is a bit disordered. I listened to song 3 times and found some more stuff to comment you on so review order is all over the place.

DoobyTimePiece responds:

o.O wow, see now if other people did this id be rich. all they say is that its good to chill to.