First time reviewing jazz
I just finished doing jazz dance in my dancing class in school. So I'm like why not listen to some jazz music. Yours was top on the list so I choose your song. Has that jazzy feel but the song is soo short. I like the composition. Well done and a good mixture of instruments. Is that a recording of you playing? Why did you call it tiny fire on the mountain jam? Okay so a overall good one. Longer will make it better so 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now
Its called Tiny fire on the mountain jam because its from Fire on the Mountain - The Grateful Dead =) I just did my ow little jam. Seasons has one too, but I dont think he tried as hard.
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This is not really your stuff. I have heard brahms songs before and they are good, but not my fav. Great job playing the piano, but I thought NG audio portal was for your own music? I don't know how to grade you for this song. It really isn't a remix, but a replica of the original. Hmm. Okay well I'll still vote you a 5, but my review may be a bit more critical. So effort is good, but the effort to make a new song is really not there. Originality...well the song has already been made so not really original. Diversity..well brahms is an amazing composer so he deserves the diversity score to be off the charts. Clarity. You got a good microphone to record your music. Overall a 8/10. Keep the classicals coming. You already have more talent than most of the NG artist here. However, I think my sister and I played this song when we were still in piano lessons. I quit though. Hated memorizing other peoples' music. Bye for now
Hmm...that was my concern...the whole "This is only a recording" thing...
I noticed winterwind posted a recording of his a while ago, so I thought "What the heck? I spent so long learning this, why not?" I agree that reviewing this kinda thing is hard...lol...so just do what winterwind did and give all 10s! XD
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Nice job composing this song. Could work in a melodrama, but for some reason I've heard a song similar to this. Yeah I know this is your own authentic composition, but soo many melodrama songs have been made there is hardly any room for new stuff. This fact won't affect your grade I give you at all. Just pointing it out to you. So the emotion...check, the skill to compose song from scratch...check, being able to compose a song that actually requires talent rather than a crap load of special effects to make song good ....check, experienced musician....check, made my day sad...check. So overall I give you a 10/10 and a 5/5. Suggestions is maybe add something more original. I'm still giving you a 10 on originality because it is something new on NG, not the wrld wide music though. Sounds similar to other sad songs. Bye for now
Okay than
I didn't wear headphones and put the music volume to the max cause everyone knows the louder the volume the better the song sounds. BUT a good song is interesting to hear even when quiet. Sounds ethnic, not really dancy. Maybe should have put this song in a different genre. Still as a first attempt to do a dance song, you faired quite well. Maybe make it more dancy and maybe better clarity cause I hear alot of fuzzies in the loud parts of your song. You also loop your song twice rather than changing stuff around. I guess this song can be a dance party in a foreign country. I'm giving you a good score since your first dance submission so bye for now.
LOl your joking?
Well you made me listen to your song 4 times now!!! I'm also a bit full on the hot chocolate and cookies. Do I get something else :) Umm this song isn't original anymore. I think it will be funny messing with ppl who don't know how many versions of this song you have. Let's make four revelations in the top 10 dance section. Wait maybe 3 cause your original gots a 3.5/5. Oh nice title variation. 2 stars now instead of 1 on both sides of revelation. Okay I don't see much of a difference between the supposedly final version and the umm final version type 2. LOL Funny how ppl are still downloading all your revelation songs. How do you do it? I bet you'll get people downloading all your revelation songs even if you posted 10 versions. I'm not downloading this one. I already downloaded your "OTHER" ones. I don't need more revelation. So I hope this is my last review for revelation and glad you finally submitted the song. I guess submitting a song on NG is harder than making a song lol. Not making fun of you. Just kidding around. Nothing much else to say. Bye for now Oh did you see your diversity score. Now it is 9 Later dude
Okay, here's what happened! I save the song as an mp3 in FL Studio everytime I add anything new, so I have about 20 Revelations on my computer. I named them all like "Revelation new" "Revelation Newer" "Revelation New Version" "Revelation New Sound" lol So can you see how I accidentally uploaded the wrong one? The file I uploaded under "*-Revelation-*(Final Version)" was an older save I had, and I meant to upload the most recent one.
I've double checked, and this time I DID upload the right file, and I will NOT be uploading another version of Revelation. It's over. On to the next song. ;)
Thanks for writing yet another review lol
Hmmmm... have a pancake and a Sprite Spritzer. xD
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somethings wrong with this song. No sound. Wait. Don't worry about your grade. I'm not dumb like some other people who give a 0. I will ddl the song and it will work. Ahh there we go. I hear stuff. That is some crazy fuzzy synth sound you have. Nevermind. The next synth is even more weird. I see you managed to have 2 harmonies going. Wow, you already matched the skill level of most NG artist. How long have you been playing piano or any instrument? You seem to understand the basics in composing more difficult songs. Luckily you know how to create some funky synths sounds which I suck in so it keeps the interest going. You got quite a bit of diversity going on. I just wished you transitioned into the new stuff faster so I wouldn't hear the same stuff for a good 30 secs. Other than that, I'm giving you a good score cause you utilized some of your musician instincts which I'm so glad you have some unlike...well I stop there. Okay so a 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. You said some more are coming out soon. I'll take a listen to those too whenever they come out. Bye for now
yah i know i don't know what the hell happened but at least the download works.
i played the trombone for 5-6 years and 4 years of tuba 1 year music theory.
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Must be a remix since you said linkin park. Did you play that on the piano? Pretty good but not sure if you already have the sheet music and your just playing it with a microphone on you. You got some good piano skills which is rare to see on NG so you know your stuff. If you made this song rather than linkin park that would make this song amazing. I'm going to give you a 9/10 review and a 5/5 voting for your piano talent. Okay bye for now.
Hehehe ^^! Thank you ! YEp, I've play it on the piano, used a microphone and I've done it by ear, not with a sheet music. Also thanks for apreciatting the way I play the piano ! :)
Okay lets see how this goes
Definitely techno. Lots of distortion. I'm hearing some really crazy stuff. What's with adding the dubbing effect on the song so they sound like alvin and the chipmunks? I like your choice of synths, but I'm a bit confused where the song is going. It kinda end quickly rather than fade out. I'm going to give you a 8/10 review and a 5/5 voting but maybe putting some order to your song cause it seems chaotic. Bye for now
thanks for the advice just finshed 2 songs i think their better please tell me wat u think of 'um
Huh? April. May. June next?
Nice modifications to your synths (Not talking about the piano riff, but the other one) Let me guess. Are you playing around CCCCCC GGGGGG (or is it AAAAAA?) DDDDDD or something like that? Of course with the alternation with B? You have shown me that you can do soo much with the beautiful C key or whatever key you used.Okay so yeah a 5/5 .. Bye for now
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Tiny Fire on the Mountain Jam