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[_-={Wolven Shrine}=-_]

hello again

Is this your 1st submission to this updated NG? Ohh the wolves..duh. Good title name. Feels like I'm in the arctic. Again a dramatic song. I like the triplets going on. The umm piccolo? doesn't really match the drama of this song. Its too happy for this piece. How did you make the wolf howling sound....or where did you get it? It sounds so real. Overall another great song. Umm 5/5 and ohh now I can give stars. :) 10 stars. I love that choir too. Your my 1st review for this new ng update thing. Bye for now

MaestroRage responds:

Hello Music-Story!

The wolve howls are some sound effects I found on the internet. Sadly I do not recall where exactly as I just googled "Wolf Howls" and downloaded anything within a thirteen mile radius.

The howls were all compressed to 20kb/s and the static and muddy sound they had was painful. Through some equally painful equalizing and filtering later, I was able to isolate the main bulk of the howl and keep it's impact.

I'm proud to be your first new NG review! Thank you for that, i'm glad you liked the piece ^^.

[zabu dabu]

sounds plain

Well nothing spectacular going on with the same repeating stuff. However, it looks like you had so much fun making this. This is basically a buildup where you keep adding extra stuff on top of the piano. If the extra melodies weren't actually the same as the piano than maybe it could have been better. The drums sound home made so kudos on that. The whistling is quite nice. Something I have not heard on NG yet. I'll give you a 5/5 and 8/10 review since you have not submitted in like 3 months. Bye for now

gray1 responds:

ya i mixed some other stuff into it right after i submited it oh and i lost all of my music so thats why i haven't submited in a wile

[Final Chronicle--_--(3:21)]

Interesting

Nice bells to start the song. Sounds dramatic to me than goes all evil like. An increase in tempo? Well I like the transition of speed. Now its like some action packed horror combat scene. I just think alien vs predator. Hey cool use of strings. Yep your right...it has a epic taste. You got the gloomy drums going...I gotta make some drums like yours. :( Takes forever to make drums though. My favorite part of this song is the sharp staccato parts. I still love them bells too. Bits of this song also remind me of hip hop modern. You like to build up alot. Well it works...who doesn't like build up music. :) The ending is good. A little wierd, but I'm sure you wanted the weird creepy feeling. 5/5. Pretty good for making songs amazingly fast. Bye for now.

PERVOK responds:

Seems like everyone's still amazed at how fast I make music :P You just gotta set your mind to it.

Thanks for the review!

[That Which We Call Rose]

Has a video game feel

I imagine f-zero racing before you put the vox in. Is that your vocals? The drums are okay. Could have been better. Though it is always good to have vocals in any song on NG, the vox is lacking excitement. The music has good enery. These two contrasts don't match all too well. Anyway your vocals are way better then I could ever do. Why did you name this song "that which we call rose"? I think it's cool that your making an album. Hope if goes well. By the way...nice guitar. 5/5...wow only a 2.67/5 score? Your score will go up. Bye for now.

[watch outttt]

Hmm well

No one helped you out with the demo...no comments. :( Well I guess you ended up doing the final version with no extra help. Ppl are selfish. :) j/k for the most part. Now to your song. It has a atmosphery space feel. Highly repetitive with you playing down the scale many many times. The drums were okay but your drum transitions seemed miss timed. Never really builds up to anything. Like the fx sounds. You really didn't have to do the crappy vox at the beginning. It is funny though. If you were trying to give the impression that after the explosion the listener is to feel lost in the destruction...well kudos cause that is what I felt. However the transition was too abrupt into the new theme. Overall a good song and gets a 5/5. The creativity helped change the 4 to a 5. There needs to be more action. Ppl flag me on my songs of lacking bass. I think yours also suffered the same problem. For your 3rd song, you are improving at a fast rate. Reason to smile and gl with your future songs. Need reviews? Well just pm me. Also a bunch of guys from the dance section love to rev. too. We dance ppl like to give feedback. Bye for now

Nyth-Pinank responds:

Yeah, after the explosion I tried to make it feel that way. I guess it worked :)
Yeah I kinda see it getting repetitive with the scale. Next time I will def put bass in.

Thanks so much for review and I will def pm you, if needed. If you need me to review just pm me too. I also like dance music, so I will be reviewing.
Thanks again.

[(FW) Chill-o-Matic]

Here are my thoughts

Yeah the drum into at 8 secs in worked good. I've heard this drum loop pattern alot but first from you so still good. The hi hat is nice but sounds like your hitting a hard wood block that stops too quickly giving the unnatural feel. The tune is good to I guess chill to. At 1:00 the piano playing is nice. However I think your velo on some notes may be too hard. Usually its the high pitch ones for this song. (Is that the 2nd piano causing the overpowering piano stabs?) I like the piano playing from 1:48 to 2:02. Yeah the reintroduction of the piano staccatos with the velo problem. Oh that one sound to finish the song was really nice. Overall a bit loopy, but you can't chill to diverse music so I'll still give you a 10 on diversity. A good relaxing feel I got from this. This could work for lounge music. Another good house track. Blammed, well I guess it was gonna happen sooner or later. Til next time...bye for now.

wolf-tech responds:

ya it got blammed alright, ATTENTION ALL BLAMMERS, READ MY PROFILE MESSAGE!!!!!!!!!!!

[AznPB - Ramp!]

Yeah nice profile pic

I'm guessing you love the good ol capcom vs snk 2 game. I don't like that character though. All about ken masters. To the song...has a happy tune. The bass is good but may need some more reverb or atmosphery feel to it. Very short loop that could work in a video game. Short review for a short song. One more thing. It is difficult to hear the background atmosphery support. The main lead overpowers it. I hate lowering ppl score so 5/5 vote and a 8/10 review. Bye for now

AznPB responds:

It's because there is no backround atmoshphery support. ;) It's just the lead and some drums.

Go ahead and lower the score if you like. There's nothing wrong with being brutally honest.

[Scars Of Time Cover (Sample)]

Rev.

Oh the good ol video game music for the age of knights, kings, etc. Not much is given in this sample to really decide whether something good is going to happen. One thing I can say is that I hope after the 50 secs you change the tune around. It gets boring quickly. Charming song though. Anyone say rpg music. :) GL with the final version. Like the intro of this sample. Okay no song like this deserves a 3/5 so I'll 5/5 vote and 8/10 rev. Til next time...bye for now

Sir-Panda responds:

Oh don't worry about the change buddy ..After these first 50 seconds or so, the song speeds up and gets a little more powerful.

Thanks for the review ^^

[Random Improvisation]

Not bad at all

Your microphone may not be the best which hurts the clarity of your playing. Has a decent tune. Good job on the playing of the instrument...banjo? steel guitar? not sure. The song begins to drag on. This style could work in a wedding reception....when everyone is eating their dinner. Not much else to say. 5/5 for being unique and making a blues song. 9/10 rev. . Minus 1 for the clarity and the draging feeling. Bye for now

Mp3-Lock responds:

lol its just 3 chords repeated forever so yhea it drags on, it wasn't really a song, just something I could improvise over
=)

And its electric guitar.