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[(FW) Invasion 2]

Say number 2. Okay rev.

So some gun shots. Alot better or I guess more realistic gun sounds than I could ever do. Few alien like themes. Reminds me of my old Final showdown song. I see you recycled some of the synths. No biggie since a sequel. Hmm, this song is just yelling at me "Martin Mystery", that lame TV show. Always like listening to a song with a story. I wish ppl could start putting story songs like this in a flash. I can see soo many flash ideas with this. Overall very nice. In less than a day you already got lots of listens. Good job on that. 5/5 vote only once by me and a 10/10 review. A louder bang before the alarm came in would have been better. Nice wheels screeching effect. Where do you get all these effects?
At 2:17 a cool instrument comes in. Okay, that's all I have to say. Bye for now

wolf-tech responds:

I was kind of inspired by final showdown to do this song. where do i get my sound effects???? Random googles is the answer to that. Thanx for the rv.

[*F-777* Chinese Dance Machine]

Did I rev. this song?

Because I can't easily check my revs. anymore I don't know if I reviewed this song. !!!!!! What? 10000 plus listens? 362 votes? Dude, with this much publicity in less than a week you could sell this song. I like the chinese theme. Must be influenced by them chinese ppl with you living there. Exotic dance...possibly. Something rare in the dance section. I can't really dance to this, but it makes me smile alot. I just picture chubby chinese ppl with their mustaches jumping up and down. Anyway nice job on this. 5/5 vote. 9/10 review and if I could give you a originality score I'd give you a 10/10. Short song I might add. Keep them future exotic stuff coming. Oh maybe make the ending less abrupt. Good explosion though. Bye for now.

[Dance Groove]

how the heck?

Okay give me a break. 51 ddl for a 2 second song? 4.57/5 score? Me thinks you voted 5/5 for yourself at least twice. Sorry for being cynical, but I just don't think this deserves #2 spot on dance. Short rev. for a short song. 3/5 vote (which is still very high for this song) and a 3/10 rev. A loop that just isn't dancy really hurt the score. Despite this I encourage you to continually make more music. Maybe a actual full length song next time? Bye for now

[Flawed Porcelain.]

Good you like making music

Well who knew that there would be more blammers on NG than ppl that actually vote fairly. So many new submissions got way too low scores. As I speak your song is getting blammed. Just moved down to 1.76/5. Well this song may not be stellar. It is all over the place and the patterns feel too plain. The piano is really hurting this song. The instruments just stop instantly with out no fade out. The diversity is decent. Work on your transitions better so that the diversity will actually work in this song. I'll give you 4/5 vote and 7/10 rev. Anyway the one part I liked was that bass playing such a fun tune with the drums. Gets me all jumpy, but that's the only good stuff. You will get better especially since you are starting to like making music. Bye for now

FineAsFaux responds:

I love these technical reviews :]

The piano part does kinda stand out, now that you mention it.

But the more songs I make, the better I get with the programs I use. So in the future, I'll try to make sounds that blend more fluidly with the beats and what not.

Thanks for the review.

<3

[ethereell]

Rev. again

Well I was almost finished my rev. to you and than my comp. crashed. Now I have to redo my entire rev. to you. Okay so a quicker summary. The beginning mellow part I'm not sure why you have it in this song. A buildup comes, but wasn't what I anticipated. At 1:30 the disco drums come in. I like it. Something I don't hear often in trance. (My personal experience) At 2:03 I like the boom and the gradual crescendo of the lead synth. I see that you intended to make the digital beeping the lead instrument by lowing the volume of the background stuff. Well a nice idea but leave the beeping as a side instrument or brief fx support. I like the bass going on. From 3:40 to end of the song, your transitions seem abrupt. Maybe slowly do a decrescendo of the drums instead of a quick cut out. Finally the bang at the very end of the song is a great way to finish, but it would have sounded better if you had the bang after the very last note was played.

Overall I like the diversity. Keeps me interested for the 4:15 long song. Needs a bit more order and maybe more energy. I'll give you a 5/5 vote only once and a 9/10 review. Bye for now

[Opened Eyes]

Is this a remix?

Like the previous rev. awesome vocals. The guy's voice was a bit off tune, but that was the only bad thing about the vocals. The strings bring a oasis feeling. The small section of flute is nice too. Umm this song is not fully finished right? A quick ending gives me this feeling. Anyway if you made the lyrics and vox well than this could very well be the best classical song on NG. However if no, than I still think this remix is nice. And yeah I agree with you. The voting system is garbage. Who decided it would be cool to be able to vote daily? I'm not one that votes on anyones song more than once and I suspect you also do. I've taken a listen to a few of your previous work and you are a great asset for the AP. Too bad this voting system well not be able to differentiate good and crap artists anymore. Anyway you got one fan of your music if that's anything to be happy about. Keep up the good work. This song may not be your best stuff, but I know your capable of coming with a song that will totally rock. Bye for now. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review.

Bosa responds:

I can agree with everything you said thus far. This song isn't quite finished, yet this was mainly supposed to be a loop. The final version will be used in my upcoming flash, Quest of Eve.

I might make something else like this, but time will only tell.

Thanks for the review and interesting comments,
Bosa

[Another Place]

Hey how did I miss this one?

Well this song sure is up beat. However way too repetitive for me. I love that bell like lead synth. Anyway the background stuff is looping as well as the lead synth. Now looking at the date of submission for this song...I guess you didn't recycle your sounds. However your newer songs like universe city, speed of sound, etc. have some similar sounds. You need to change some sounds up cause its getting old. Overall this is by far your happiest song which I would say makes it my favourite of yours. Guitar is a great addition along with the awesome choir...my opinion the secret to making happy music. Fix the repetitiveness cause this song repeats more than trance songs. Have my 5/5 vote (voting system sucks right now) and a 9/10 rev. (review system sucks too) Bye for now

[Happy Hysteria (v.0.5)]

Well its good somewhat

Its a happy tune so I like that. It doesn't really go anywhere since you keep playing that same rhythm with the happy lead. I was hoping a buildup could occur. Sure you added instruments on top, but I was expecting a buildup to some new climax. It continually returned back to the original beat instead of building to something that the listener isn't expecting. Overall I love happy tunes and your clarity is nice. The drums are playful, but too repetitive. I'll give you a 5/5 vote and a 8/10 review.

[KO - Smiley!]

Good for a first

Well the whole oh I can vote on the same submission every day once is weird. I bet there are going to be ppl that keep 5iving their friend's songs daily. Can you still 5 your own songs? I really hope NG got rid of that feature. Who is O? I assume the K = karco. Well your friend seems to know fl much better than alot of other ppl that use fl. You must be a impressive teacher of electronic music. A bit repetitive at the start, but this song has alot of energy. Did you put alot of eq on or bass amp? Surprisingly no clipping heard in this song. Was expecting alot with the loud beats. This song has a happy tune. Yah :) I enjoyed the crossfade. Fluent and near perfect. The composition of the main lead doesn't seem uber difficulty to think up, but I tend to find often that the simple tunes are the best songs. Hmm the fade out to end the song. Oh well. I suppose first song for O? so I'll let it go. 5/5 for O and 5/5 for K being a good teacher. 10/10 rev....umm I mean 10 stars. Bye for now

Karco responds:

O is a good friend of mine who picked FL Studio up quite quickly. Not going to say more than that, though... :)

Heh, yeah, it's happy tune, I knew you would enjoy it. :D

Not much else to add, thanks for the review and the high ratings! My friend says thanks, too. We're glad you liked it. :)

[Cry For Me]

Hmm this is ify

Your score of 2.42/5 leads me to 2 conclusions. Either other hip hop artists really hate you or you didn't make this from scratch so ppl blammed you like crazy. This song is really well made. I would say professionally made. Yeah provocative lyrics, but the voice is excellent. The strings really bring out the mood. Maybe both my conclusions are wrong, so to be safe I will give you a 5/5 vote. I wonder why in all the new submissions none have a green or blue band to show a good or great score. Anyway the song sounded good to me so also 10 stars. If you didn't make this from scratch than I understand the blamming of your song. Nuff said. Bye for now

mattlandry responds:

It was made from scratch(except for the beat) I just think I been gettin bad ratings from hip-hop haters...Thanx for the feed man...