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[The hero's theme]

The classic heavy metal style.

Nice guitars and drums. At 0:50 I like one of the guitar's that takes a obvious lead role. 1:20 a transition into something with a cool beat. Quite diverse for a heavy metal song. Ehh? Piano. Wish it were a longer piano part. I sense this song could work in a video game. It already got used in a flash so good job on that. 10 stars cause I like diverse stuff. I also like piano. Now the previous rev. said that the drums may need some working. I suppose the drums could have been more hardcore. Some quick cymbal clashes would have raised the excitement level. Besides that I liked everything else. 5 vote too. Bye for now.

Mrbungl3 responds:

Thanks for constructive feedback kind sir.. I agree on the drums, i wish i were better at that part. Cheers!

[Summer Funz]

Opps. Missed this one

Yah...ppl are clapping for you. The bass introduction is a bit wierd. Well there is alot of kick. Wow...really high screech in one of the happy synths. This song is much more happier than your other stuff but that screech you have to get rid of. Overall a fun song to listen to. The piano sounds good. Well one thing I learned today. Now I know what your possible real name is. Bye for now

Trunks responds:

Yeah in FL Studio I guess I accidentally layered that sound on twice, making it higher than the rest and when I copied the melody and moved it an octave it had the same thing... bu thanks for the review :)

And how would you know what my name is?

[Lifetime (Extended Mix)]

Cool. Long song.

Well I suppose the preset sounds nice, but it would be better if you made the sample. Anyway, I like the 1:30 part of the song. Nice music to relax to. The drums sounds rather bland here. The composition sounds unique. Not the usual pattern of notes which I like. The song is starting to drag on a bit. You remain in the calm mood for a long time. Try to vary your contrasts. Jump into something hardcore to surprise/excite the listener. The song gets creepy at 4:10. Good, haunting synth. Hip hop modern now? Okay now you really got to get the song moving. It feels too slow. Vox would have been perfect in this section. Sorry dude, but the last 2 minutes of the song just bored me. Now, overally a great song. It is not easy making a long song with decent amount of diversity. I'll definately give you a 10/10 on effort. Despite the effort, I think the song lacked energy to keep the listner's attention span intact. I'll give you a 9/10 rev. or 9 stars so to speak.

I'm actually almost finished a long song (around 7 minutes) so when it comes out (probably this week) can you lend me your opinion? Bye for now.

[\/:Technological Funny Bone:\/]

Sorry for the long wait.

I'm back on NG for a brief moment. Not posting songs on NG yet till voting system gets fixed. You got much better too. Techno seems to be the right theme. Nice instrument choices. Digital age and could be used in a flash. At 52 seconds in I love that added instrument. Lounge music possibly. You got that repetitive main theme going on which is catchy. Your drums play fast beats giving the adrenalin rush. Still needs more energy. You could change the drum pattern more often. I like more diversity in the composition too. Well done so I give you a 9/10 score. The looping gave a minus point. Do you still use the same music program? Anyway your getting better and that's all that really matters. Bye for now

[Zasyyt The Final Overture]

Yah. A rev. finally.

Will I've been on a long absence from NG and haven't reviewed any song. I feel kinda bad/selfish for not giving feed back in a while. Now that my practicum has finally ended I have more time until school starts again. So here is my review.

A nice intro to start the song. That familiar flute again. This version sounds more busy. A battle going on perhaps? Somewhat repetitive and the strange moment at 1:56 when the volume just boosts up. At 2:20 it gets really busy with the sound effects. Yeah sorry about the email stuff on yahoo. Been away from yahoo for a while too. Overall a trance with a adventure twist to it. I guess since this is the final you will be working on new themes so I'll end Zasyyt with a 10 star. Hmm I noticed NG fixed the star problem. Now I won't accidently give ppl 0 stars. Also heard about the 8 mb limit instead of 4 mb. Hmm. Maybe I can make a longer rave now. Bye for now and have fun making music.

[Heavenly Pads]

Cool :)

Honestly, a plain beat but happy so I like. You should expand on this rather than have it stuck to just a few instruments. Switch up on the beat once in a while and this could be a sweet happy song. Further, maybe put a tad bit of white noise to make the song not sound empty at some parts. Keep the happy tunes coming. My favorite. Bye

[man the cannons!]

! nice job

Why is this not in the top 5? This is a song that gets me excited and happy. Sure some of the rhythm sounds familiar, but no big deal. I like the percussion and the distorted guitars. Seems like this song likes to be in "steven and kyle" flash. I could see this in a mini commercial for like the x games. 5/5 vote. 10/10 rev. These songs make the audio portal look so much more better. Keep them coming.

Mrbungl3 responds:

Hey thanks a lot man! It's reviews like these that encourage me to make more..
btw i checked out/commented some of your stuff.. Neat!

[Jesus pranks Wendy's]

what the heck?

Umm okay so 2 prank calls got on the top 5. I like your comedy factor, but prank calls are just wrong. The woman's laugh is funny though. Anyway if this was on a prank portal site than I'd give you a good grade, but this is a place for actual music so umm 3/5 vote (the effort to make yourself look weird raised your vote) and a 5/10 rev. If I could give you a comedy factor than it would be 9/10. Anyway you remind me of bart simpson. Bye for now.

[(FW) Nightfall Trance]

cool 2 new songs by you

Looks like your producing more trancy songs now. Me too. :) Are you still getting logic? Right now I'm working on a rave, but am busily making my own samples from scratch. Goal: to make a professional rave (may take many months to complete) You want to help make awesome samples when you get logic so we can make a incredible rave? Anyway back to your song. I like the trance synths going on. The lacking part is the power/energy in this song which mine also lack. Has a mild energy tone, but that's as far as it goes. You can understand what I'm going for in my (possibly your next rave too) rave. I guess this song is repetitive but you did put it as a trance song. Hmm the gradual decrescendo to end the song. Oh well, it sounds good still. I like your description. Some reason I don't think Jesus would say that. :) Jesus is cool though. #1 :) I'm actually serious about that. Okay give me a PM if your interested. Oh that was close. Almost forgot to give you a rev. score again.

wolf-tech responds:

ya i'm still getting logic. monday i move to wisconsin and after i get it will be about a week until i get the mac. I'm up for the samples too. And yes Jesus is #1. Thanx for the rev.

[{dj-N} Orchestral Angels 2]

Make love not war...agreed

Well I like your music style cause you always or most of the time put some funky vox. I didn't like the loud fuzzy blasts. Makes it sound all messy. Quite a unique tune, I'll give you that. The drums seem too weak in this remix. I don't know if that was intentional, but in my opinion it would have been the better choice. The song gets real dancy later. All perky and jumpy. I like it. Well the ending could have been better. Overall I'll give you a 5/5 mainly for the effort to make your original song better for us NG ppl (hah you really do love us) and a 9/10. Still missing something to give me a woah feeling. Bye for now