Beautifully done
This one has a depressing feeling. Did something bad happen to you? That piano sounds really nice. Do I hear a breathing fx drum sound? It starts at around 26 seconds in. You proven to me and I think to many others on NG that you are one of the best classical musicians here. I'm more fond of happier music, but a lot of your music shows strong emotion which is very important. Keep producing classicals for NG. Bye for now.
Really cool
For just a loop and being DnB which I'm mildly fond of, this song is great. It got me interested right way. You have to expand on this. Jump into a chorus full of basses with some awesome DnB drums. Don't chose the generic drums that is common in a lot of DnB songs here and you got an amazing song. Oh some fx added would be good too.
The title seems wierd so change that too. :) Up to you if you wanna expand on this, but I think you should. Bye for now.
The fond memories.
Dang it. When I was that young I was making 5-10 minute classical songs, but once I got the electronic music program I forgot all my compositions by head. Your lucky to still have your old stuff still remembered. Heck your lucky to still make somewhat classical stuff with the general and classic rock. I can't make classicals anymore. Well its no surprise that you improved very fast when joining NG. Seems like you already had piano lessons growing up. I'm not sure how to grade this. A good song for a 13 year old, but compared to your other stuff today this may be lacking. Pretty poor sound, but at least its the real instrument and not a sample. The mic is causing a weird fuzz. So I'll give you a score based on if you were still 13. I like the use of sustain. It's quite smooth and not jerky like what most young pianist do with the pedal. Maybe more balance with the volume. The staccatos seem to be mashed hard on the keys. Were your hands big enough to reach an octave at 13? Inspiration from mozart? The beginning tune sounded familiar. 5 vote and 10 for a good performance when you were 13. Bye for now.
Ahh sugar happy!
Be the first to respond to my rev to you. I like this version better. More action involved and still happy. Love those synths though I think you used some of them already. 1:35 yeah some energy. It doesn't last long though. :( I think your going diverse in this song. A return back to the main theme. I really love them fx you used. Very well done. Take away that bass near the end of the song. Too generic. Use a better bass. Besides that this one has some nice beats. If your making a 3rd one you will need to change the lead instrument so it doesn't sound like the same song. Put more of the energetic parts in and for longer. 10 stars and 5 vote. I have more voting power now. :) Bye for now.
Thanks man for the awesome review. And yes this is the first one i responded too. And yes i see what you mean, third one im going to try to make much different but still have that same Electronic feel from number 1. Anyways thanks for your time to review this song =D.
Cool ambiance
Well since your pretty new to submitting music I'll be extra nice. As a tip try and use less prerecorded garageband 3 loops/logic express prerec. loops/logic pro prerec. loops. You made a nice mix with the loops so I'll give you a 9 stars and 5 vote. No comments cause I love apple loops except transition more into your own compositional stuff. Bye for now
Thanks and I'll take that on board.
Anime
I never liked trigun because it had really messed up characters. That doesn't mean I hate the music too. Version 2.1? So the song tends to loop, but your version sounds better than the original. I like that bass. Makes the song all come together. Is there a old 80s keyboard in this song? At 37 seconds is when I hear it. Sounds quite nice. Whenever you play the high pitch guitar solo I just picture you raising a guitar above your head and playing. A short song so a short review. I'm gonna have to take a star off for lack of originality since a remix. Besides that a 9 star rating and 5 vote for some awesome hot strings.
... if you compare this version to the 2 others, you'll realise that this one is the best version. Thanks for the review.
Opps... completely forgot to rev.
Okay a nice lead instrument. Good fx used. Song starts rather slow, but burst into something like happy mediumcore if that's a word. I like the use of crescendos, but I'm expecting a bigger climax. Drums are good. I'm assuming you made this song to relax to. Somewhat repetitive, but very charming. I'm sure younger kids would like this. I don't see stars in this song, just a happy dancing kid jumping around. There aren't too many songs for the younger audience on NG (except for ska which has a lot of them...I like that genre). Anyway, maybe use some panning...or if you did make it more obvious cause I couldn't tell. At 1: 46 I notice some quick thumping in the background. What kind of percussion is that? Overall a 10 rev. cause I see improvement in your musical projects so I like the effort. I'll match the good rev. score with a good vote of 5. Bye for now.
happy medium core haha yeah I understand what you mean - as for the title , that was rushed i was listening to a song called the moon - italo bros and i like their style so i just named mine the stars haha. Yeah I didn't use panning... at 1:46 that thumping sound almost like tapping a desk isnt percusion well it is but it came from filter editing (i guess something happend with the out and fx filters and it just made that noise I couldnt fix that...) thanks for the review, check your email :[]
Well quite a distorted journey
The beginning is a tad bit boring, but the song jumps quickly into something crazy distorted. Sounds pretty interesting. The drums sound good, but a bit overused since I've heard them in other DnB songs. 1:57 I love that lead bass. 2:11 some nice energy gets the song moving. 2:54 the bass is good, but sounds off key. I was hoping for a climax to end the song...none came. Overall, a fun song to listen to. One of the better DnB songs on NG for sure so your doing something right. 10 stars for the effort and keeping me interested for most of the long song. 5 vote too.
Hey very nice demo.
Finally a hip hop song that someone made from scratch with decent vocals. So many hip hop songs on NG are good, but lack vocals or I should say good non cheesy vocals. Your very fortunate to have a good voice. I can't wait for the final version. You might be the first person on NG that I download a hip hop song. I'm not downloading this one since unfinished. Keep the great stuff coming. 5 vote and 9 stars cause demo. Gotta leave room for my 10 star for the final. Bye for now
Yeah, I get told that I sound like a lot of people in the industry. It just so happens that I also battle rap on streets and shit like that, so I gotta sound the way I do. Thanks for listening. The final version will most likely better equalized, and the 3rd verse is my and my boy going back and forth with the lyrics.
Oh SBB would be proud I think
You should ask him to rev. this song. This song is quite mellow. The guitar is old school bringing back fond memories. Sax too! You even got the twinkle instrument which I don't know the name of. Could this be a oasis song? The ending is wierd since even with the fade out the song doesn't feel like it should end yet. Those are some unique drums you used. Never heard anything like them until now. My computer is no good right now. Every song on NG fuzzes so I'm buying a new computer soon. Good job on this. Classical and general rock seems to be your forte. 10 stars and 5 vote. Bye for now.
I couldn't figure out an ending so as i say when all else fails FADE. I didn't think the drums where that diverse. Everything on ng fuzzes on the pc or mac. It might just be the soundcard since you use it so damn much;) If you just get a new soundcard it would save you a whole lot of money. My forte huh..... I would belive that if i got a crap load more reviews on my rock songs and higher scores. so far my Chill-o-Matic song has 10 revs and a 4.45 or something score, so by going off of that i would think house is my forte. But i could be wrong. Thanx for the rev.
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