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[SpK*) - Walk of the Vagrant]

Okay I had to review

I've seen your spk trademark so many times on the new submissions that I'm just like I wonder how this guy's songs are like. SpK!!! Mellow ambient...uhhh no. This is no where near mellow. I can't imagine what hardcore would sound to you. Quite repetitive and the only real ambient sound is that low echo like sound. Drums aren't ambient nor is that fuzzy background support. Funny how you were inspired by a car commercial. Which one may I ask? Cars are nice, but too many good ones are expensive. We NG people are too poor to afford super cars. Mmmmm the caspita. Mmm ford GT concept. Mmmm audi quattro. Well I got a helicoptor like image to this song...not cars. Oh well. Short but unique so 5/5 vote keeping your score at 5 (not for long though cause blammer tuesdays!) and 8/10 review. SpK!!! :) Bye for now

Spikrodd responds:

true... true...
hardcore is very strange and distorted FYI.

Thanks!

[Hip Vibe]

so

Some really funky high pitch pad used. When the new stuff comes it, kinda sounds like a dark night in the city. A quite quick transition into some gloomy bass sound. The high pitch sounds seem to be looping. Yeah I guess hip hop modern, but not as much emotion packed into this as compared to other hip hop modern songs. Still very well done for your first so I'm interested in what future tracks you will come up with. 5/5 vote and since your first a 10/10 review. Bye for now and enjoy making more music.

[I Ain't Scared!]

Sweet okay I'll listen

The tiny piano solo at the start was a tad bit how should I say this childish, but when that fuzzy sound comes in the hip hop feel comes in. You used a reloading of a gun as a sound effect. Heck makes sense. Lots of people in america owns guns to feel safe. Sad, but true. Why can't we all just get along. :) When you changing your name to 1000 watz and why change it? I like your alias name and the pic on your profile. Keep it platinum! For a 13 year old pretty awesome stuff. You got many years to get better compared to the other hip hop artists on NG. Suggestion for your next single is to add maybe 1 more pad or more if you wish. With just 2 pads and 1 drum going it sounds lonely. Where the fighting spirit with just 3 instruments (not including the gun reloading sound). Go all crazy. :) I like it so 5/5 vote and 9/10. I like the effort your putting in to improve. Keep the beats coming and as always enjoy making music. Bye for now

Platinum-Chrome responds:

thanxz man...i am gittin good at thiz i csnt wait 2 turn 14 soon :).and we all should get along,i'm from L.A. So Its Hard Out Here
Peace

[You're In My Heart {Preview}]

ahh noo

That piano tune WAS gonna be used in my next song. You beat me too it. :( Anyway I love piano and plz keep it in the full version. So just a preview so not much stuff going on until that explosive jump where sounds a bit too crowded. However you probably didn't even master the track yet so that's a very good excuse. Couldn't wait to finish up. Well continue finishing it. The tune is great...if only I submitted my next song using that piano tune. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. And it isn't original cause I heard this piano tune before :)

DaGrahamCraka responds:

lol, thank you for teh 5zz.

:)

[VC#1 - Allegro giocoso]

yeah now this is better classical

Yah finally happy classical. I've been waiting a long time for a song like this. Well made and sounds like a concert song that mozart would make. His I guess would be better. No one is as good as mozart!!! cept beethoven. Lots of mood shifts in this song. Happy, mysterious, suspense, and other stuff. Love the plucking part. However now it doesn't sound fast. Allegro? Not to me anymore. Wait a sec, now that violin solo with the plucking sounds very familier. Hmm....were you influenced by the great composers? Lol the ending sounds very familiar too. Pretty good overall. More fast happy parts please. At least you had some so 5/5 and 10/10 review. Make more perky classicals...that's how they should all be :)

MusicalRocky responds:

Hahaha thanks for the review dude. Happy classical? I suppose it is VERY happy in comparison to the other two movements lol. People sure do compare this to Mozart! It's not that good.

I purposely had a lot of mood shifts in this piece as it is the finale, plus I just would've gone insane if it was completely happy 100% of the time.

Yeah the pizzicato part is not very fast at all (something like 80 I believe.) But the general movement is Allegro, much like the movement is in E major but there are lots of modulations. A familiar part to you, eh? I suppose I am influenced by the greats :D Who isn't?

Thanks for the review. I'll try to continue making good pieces, though not all will be joyful.

-Rocky

[Prelude no. 8 in C minor Lento]

no the minor key :)

Dang it.. this is a sad song. Why didn't you just name the song last snowfall instead of the fancy title. Beautiful seaon? Sounds like someone just died or something. Must have been a terrible season. Nice composition and I guess you purposely made the song really slow to get the mood right....however I think I'm interpretating the mood of the song different to what you expected. The high pitch notes seem to be a bit overpowering. Good way to finish song. Not too long of a song I might add. To sum everything up, you have done better. 5/5 vote and 8/10 rev. Shortness and the sometimes ear hurting high pitch notes took some of the luster away.

Winterwind-NS responds:

Hey

actually im getting this song taken down cuz i titled it wrong, its supposed to be "Un petit morceaux no. 1 in C minor Lento"

its sad, cuz winter is over, and wut would be snow, is now rain. No, it was an amazing season.

High pitched notes being moderately loud was intentional, but iono if it's ur ears being sensitive to high frequency pitches cuz i wouldnt say theyre overpowering. There's no other sounds to overpower actually.. personally, shortness duznt rid of a musical piece's luster lol and get ur ears checked.

thanks for taking the time.
try again

[H6 - Happy Days!]

happy hardcore

your submitting quite quickly. Stock up on songs or something? Kinda happy hardcore. More heaven synths needed and choir to make it really heaven like. The quick shift from trance to some mellow calm song caught me off guard. Adds some diverse effect to your piece. The quick introduction of the claps also caught me off guard. Like to surprise the listener I guess? Probably your happiest song so far but I've heard happier. :) I guess you like that fuzzy bass beat. Trance is supposed to repeat so I give diversity 10/10 but more diversity would help keep the interest going. Suggestions are maybe add more harmonies in the calm section. Seemed bland with just that soft sound going with the claps. The composition also is not very complex. You have basically two parts. The dancy part to start the song which repeats at the end too. I think you got drums, some dancy pad, and later add one more pad on top so not too much stuff. The mellow part well again not much going on with the composition. You have mastered your track well though. Good sound balance, no fuzz, and your beat is quite nice too. So 5/5 vote and 9/10 rev.

[H6 - Going Far Away]

Okay rev

So you say your new...okay. If you want future revs by me just PM me. From the way your alias name is, this song doesn't fit the heaven category. Interesting enough, I'm actually making a heaven song right now. :) Pretty good being your 3rd song. Some parts are a bit empty and yep that fuzzy bass line is evident. If you want to be unique than make a trance without that fuzzy bass sound. I don't think the leading pad is changing much, but I usually give 10/10 diversity on trance and techno anyways. Not sure if that calm sound is from a piano. Probably not...oh well sounds a bit like piano. Is Vanguard supposed to be better than fruity loops? I thought that was some kind of anti virus program :) Interesting title, but not sure how that fits. So suggestions are use more pads/synths cause gets boring when I'm listening to the same rhythm. (I think you have two real separate parts in the song where the rhythm changes a bit) If you had lots of variation with your few pads you used than I wouldn't have minded at all. Nice fade out by the way and the cymbal clashes were a good finishing touch. 5/5 vote and 9/10 rev. Bye for now

Heaven6 responds:

The piano thing was a plucked instrument. Vanguard is a plugin that I use for my synths, but Im still using Fl studio, to clarify your vanguard description =D Im still learning melodies and such, I'll probably upload a more advanced song. Thanks for the review!

Heaven6

[{GBD} The Good Dream]

question

What's audacity? Where do you get it? The piano part is funny. Not much of a beat, but at least piano is in the song. I think you should have chose different notes cause doesn't seem to match with background beat. Beachshore fx...? Ambience! Some industrial flavour to start the song off. For some wierd reason I can see this in a game where your sneaking across the high beams of an industrial site...near a beach :). That dreamy like pad is good. However only appears for a short time. Looks like your an industrial musician so keep the good work going. Again just fix that piano section. Bye for now. oh 5/5 vote and 9 rev.

DoobyTimePiece responds:

im sooooo clumsily about the piano but ill get the hang of it and thanx for the review!

[real slim santa]

wah? slim santa now

Oh my!!! This is like totally new lyrics! Awesome. I thought this was just gonna be messed up sounds with the same lyrics. This is like a whole new song! Who did the vox. Well some of the lyrics are a bit negative live no one wants a fat hubby and should get suction. Funny though. Who would have thought santa was such a bad a**. Santa is skinny too now. Fortunately I'm not what you would consider fat so no prob but for the lazy ones well they might be hurt by the song. All construction ppl aren't chubby either :). So umm 5/5 (that doesn't mean I support your lyrics, but cruel humor once in a while if fun) and 9/10 review. Bye for now. Oh and I think santa hates you now