Music-story's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Konoha Village]

village ????

Is konoha a place on earth or some place in Naruto land? Quite ethnic with the bongos going. I feel like I'm watching a tribal dance ritual. 10/10 on originality because well this is definately a first tribal like dance on NG. Usually tribal dances get ppl in a trance so I guess I can't complain about diversity. Where did you get the inspiration to make this song? So 5/5 voting which keeps your score at 5/5. Favour to ask you....can you review my "journey to heaven" song plz. Thanks bye for now

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

konoha is in naruto land, thanx for asking! lol

[Electronic hiphop cabana dance]

bit too empty

Yep, I can feel a bit of hip hop. You should add more stuff to your song so it feels more dancy. That alien like fx was cool though. Your lead synth is too repetitive and finally changes when that kick sounding drum comes in. Choose better pads but more importantly add more compostion. Your first review and you seem to be a new NG audio submitter so I give good mark. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. bYE for now and enjoy making more music.

Noizaholic responds:

hey thanks!
Ill try but to be fair... this is one of my older songs anyways (^^)... but thanks for the [Good] review!

[the happy song]

...k

Sounds like music that would fit in diddy kong racing or something. Or like music where your like buying items in a video game. It is alot more happy than your other songs. The bubbles (I think) give that kiddy feeling. The bongos give the jungle feel and of course the "whoop" sound gives me a thought of monkeys. Airplane...airplane race like diddy. Fun. Lots of good effects. A little on the short side. Overal 5/5 voting. How did you get a 0 on review? That's a bit harsh. So 10/10 cause this song is pleasant and brought me back to the good ol N64 days when games weren't always about shooting...killing...blowing things up. :) Bye for now

wolf-tech responds:

YES! the good old n64 days. man i miss those days.

[New Creation]

rev.

Hey I got a favor to ask. Can you sample my preview song...it is the only techno song on my music profile so easy to find. I just need advice on whether rhythm is good. Not on the mastering since I didn't do any yet. So back to your song. Double personality song. Has that nice calm pad, but than the saw like synths make it more hardcore. Angry and calm at the same time. Nice twist. The beginning rhythm lasts a bit too long. Some chords shown which adds diversity, but than the calm sound returns back to the same pattern. I'm not sure if your just changing pads but keeping the same pattern. More diversity next time. Oh well I give all techno and trance and now hip hop 10/10 diversity. So 5/5 voting and thanks for the help. Bye for now

ZanyTaco responds:

Hey thanks for reviewing my song, i'm just learning how to master stuff now and some of my new songs seem better then this old stuff i submitted, i'll check out your song .

[M- Hollow Curcuit- Full]

interesting

This song is really strange. Do you mean circuit? What was the stupid mistake you did? Good drums but that wierd background noise got a little annoying. I like that guitar like sound. Some of your rhythm sounds familiar to other songs I've heard. Brings back memories. So 5/5 voting. Yeah so maybe more careful seleting your fx stuff. Can you give me feedback on my preview song (it is labelled under techno) Not sure if the rhythm is good. No I have not mastered anything yet and this is only like 1/3 of the song. Thanks...bye for now

BMC-Audio responds:

if strange is good, then thank you. yes i did mean "circuit" as my syruplord had already pointed out. sorry bout the bg noise, i just got carried away and didnt notice it while i was making it, but i also thought it added the industrial feeling i was somewhat looking for. thank you about the drums, i spent a while on them. i don't know which sound you were talking about when you said the "guitar" thing. ill check out youre stuff.

thx again,

mawkeetus

[Tribute to Music Story (RL cre]

I see a remix

I forgot who made the original. Classical...that's a first for you (wait no second for you) Not sure what that bass sound is doing in the background. Maybe my speakers are busted, but the song goes all weird. I can't hear the music. Funny maybe both of our speakers are screwed up. Okay I'm gonna download this song. Wow a 10 minute song? That's long. I fast forwarded past that weird part. I like that pad you add in that goes like loud than quiet over and over again. This seems a bit dragged on. You add some drums , but not much else. Okay now some new tune leading the song. Yep a bit dancy music. The piano does come back bringing the song back to classical. Lots of pads must of been in this song. Do I hear strings? Again the strings part kinda drags on. Heh, the song goes wierd for me again. At 8 minute mark and around 1 minute mark of song is when the song screws up. Sounds like fuzzy trumpets I guess. And the song ends. Hmm, do you also hear the messed up parts on your speakers? Maybe resubmit the song into NG after you figure out how to fix those 2 parts or until I can fix my speakers :) This is a very long music story. It's like a big book compared to my little notebook of music stories. Unique, but a quicker transition into new stuff would keep things going forward. Lots of effort must have been done to make such a long piece so 10/10 on that. I can't give you the 10/10 rev. cause those weird parts. Bye for now and enjoy making music.

[.Looking Back.]

Techno review

Happy techno :) Nice drums, but for some reason they don't match with the high pitch sound. Adding another pad over top. Ahh we got a buildup approaching. Uhh yeah no buildup? That was a bit disappointing. Nice piano by the way. I love the piano...my fav instrument. That background high pitch noise is getting a tad bit repetitious. I don't know if much composition was put into this song. Seems a whole bunch of the same stuff and the only major change is the introduction of the piano. Overall 5/5 voting cause I like happy hardcore too. 9/10 review. More effort composition wise in next song. Can you give me feedback to my preview techno song? (I only have one techno song in my profile and is my first attempt) Only feedback on the rhythm if it sucks. The pads and mastering have not worked out yet which I will fix for the final version. Thanks. (Hint it is the techno song right below your song in the new submission list) Bye for now

[Double Elf Homicide]

nice vox

this is a great song. A bit hip hop attitude until the girl's voice comes in. Like a double mood song. Not sure if the lyrics are typical of the usual vox music. Eating elf isn't cool. Fix the lyrics up but other than that nice song so 5/5 vote and 10/10 rev.

[Dont Leave Now]

cool stuff

A young band you guys are. The vox is a bit off tune. However having vox on any audio is like golden. So rare on NG. I got a name for your band. "One Voice" :) cause your the only one singing. Where are the other guys? Who ever is playing the guitar, kudos to him/her/them. The drums are well done to. If your doing the vox section, sorry bout just asking for that to improve. Anyway, without the vox this would be crap so just think like that. :) Keep your band working the beats and the voice box vibrating. 5/5 voting and congrats on top 5. It deserved top 5 for just having vox! Bye for now

packertim2 responds:

thanks, ya i play guitar, and know one else ereally can sing so, even though im not very good i do it lol

[AMbER Remix BOA]

rev.

First thing I thought when I saw the words BOA was you did a remix on the korean singer (girl) Obviously not. Yeah I here this beat which I think lots of ppl heard already. The original I think was a popular song. Some nice additions like the trance like pad. The drums were dancy. Sounds like workout music. Not sure if original was also workout music. Not much to say since a remix. Good choice of pads and synths and drums...and special effects. I noticed a sudden cutoff when the song ends. That may be the only fault. So 5/5 vote and 9/10. (If this was not a remix than 10/10 for sure) However kudos on a good revamped version. Bye for now

Paroxym responds:

Im glad u liked it