Music-story's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Confusion - 3:33]

This is different

Usually your reviewing my song. Now it's the reverse...Finally. :) Not sure what your angry with and confused about. This song is distorted enough that I feel all confused myself. I see you used some vox. Is that your voice? Your use of the kick clap loop reminds me of mgrac3 music. Interesting...the song transitions into something almost hip hop modern like. Your special effects are nice, especially the ones near the end of the song. There is one particular fx that I want. That fx near beginning of song that sounds like 2 knives rubbing against eachother. Did you ever listen to Jebbal's "Revelation" song? He uses that fx alot and I love it. So overall the song is good. The hip hop part did drag on for a bit. Finally a dance song I can 5/5 that actually deserves it. All the other songs like "messin with a g-tar, goo3, etc. I fived for fun. You like the real dark dance stuff so keep them coming. Oh and I see your changing alot of the melodies around just like a story. :) Bye for now

Trunks responds:

Heh, yeah it's been a while :D

Ehh, life just hasn't been going my way lately ^_-*

Anyways, that's why I named the song like that. And it's my voice layered on top of a sample so it sounds unique, so in other words it's not *really* me.
Hip hop modern? Never thought of that, but looking back, it does sound a bit like that.

Thanks for the review ^_^ :D

[How Do I Change My NG Pass??]

Okay here is how

Go to your "private" profile. Scroll to bottom where it says password and confirm password. This is where you put your new password. So for eg. if original pswd is 123 and you want to change it to 345 than in the password box put 345 and 345 also in confirm password. There the pswd is changed. Your song is okay. Quite simple. Not much to say and I'm lazy today so yeah 5/5 voting and 8/10 review. Hope the info helped you out.

[==(Climbing The Glacier)=]

new review?

Looks like alot of comments are already made from your previous reviews. I may repeat some stuff they said in this review. Well the song gives the glacier cavern feel to it with all the echos going on. The only time I feel like I'm climbing the glacier is when you make that one pad go up half a scale...well I think it's half a scale. One of the effects sound almost industrial to me. A little bit repetitive on that echo synth. 4 mins is a long song. The digital sounding pad is nice. Adds something new to the song. The ending of the song sounds like a baby lullaby. Well your use of shakers worked fine. I like how you kept the shakers, drums, and other special effects quiet. Gives that calm feeling which you probably were intending. It's rare to see any song on NG using the old organ. That will bring up your originality score. Other than that, the song is relaxing, but repeats a bit too much. 5/5 voting and 10/10 review.

[G R een Hill ..]

woah

This is some crazy stuff. Love the vox. Sounds so digital...almost robotic like. The transition to the piano is very sudden so maybe a smoother transition next time. Okay so the song is now calm and groovy. Feels like the disco age all over again. Hah this is cool. I like the piano stabs how they sound off key, but strangly fit. That background siren like sound you used too often in the song. I like the sound of it when it crescendos but when it fades out...that whiny sound is annoying. So your song is very unique from the other trances. Overall a 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. Keep making crazy tunes like this. Bye for now

[Forest People]

say hmm

This is you at 10:00 am? 10:00 am isn't early. I'm wide awake by that time, but it looks like your half asleep still. I could see this song in a video game where you explore the congo jungle and the tribal guys start dancing. I'm not fond of this type of music. However since this is still a tribal like dance sure than good job. I like how you use contrasts of high pitch and low pitch sounds. It repeats alot though so add more tribal beats. I don't know...like a tambourine and shakers. So 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Okay bye for now.

Noizaholic responds:

You see the Tribal Guys Dancing too!?
I thought I was just psyco...

Thanks for the review!

[Toki O Koeru Omoi [FINAL]]

Review

What does the name of the song mean? Okay the beginning of the song is kinda boring, but when the epic stuff comes in..well the song is quite nice. I like that piano tune you used with more quiet piano playing in the background. I think I heard a tune similar to this. Maybe I listened to your unfinal version, but forgot I did. The transition is somewhat nice. I noticed a slight gap in the transition, but still a nice flowing song. This song can work in a drama where some guy or girl is lost and another person is trying desperately to find him/her to well make love. Cheesy but that's what I feel. Overall a very nice piece. What the? How come no one is reviewing your song? Classical is a popular genre but I guess lots of ppl don't like this kind of music. So 5/5 review and 10/10. Continue with the classical drama. Bye for now

studio-nightbird responds:

wow thanks. I'll keep that in mind. I'll stick to classic. thanks for the great review ;)

[Planet Trance]

ok than

I suppose the song is cool. Something is missing though. I can barely hear that quiet background synth you used. The main lead pads are basically playing the same stuff. Yeah this song repeats a lot. Way too much. I got bored of the song half way through. Maybe change around the pads rather than the same pads throughtout entire song. Yeah the beat starts to bug me. That high whiny pad sounds ackward when you alternate between two notes. I know your going up the scale with it and that is fine...but the alternating note part I'm talking about. Not sure why you used those lyrics. Okay so those are my suggestions. I'm only saying them cause you said you wanted to get better. So 5/5 voting keeping your score at 5 and a 8/10 review. Can you check out my "system override" song plz. Thanks. Bye for now

[Evilcookies - Trancesation]

help is here :)

I guess the song starts with a good buildup. The synths and pads used are commonly used already. Do anything to make them sound different cause the originality isn't here. So a nice beat so far. The added synths to the main base line isn't changing rhythm. This is a big problem for diversity. Sure I give trance all 10/10 diversity, but effort won't be good at all. Change the rhythm of at least one of the harmonies. I like the clarity of the song. You got good sound balance. No blaring of one sound. Just a lil bit more power on the kick clap loop you use. Besides that I'll wait for the final. Hopefully new beats/rhythm will come in. Mix things up. Okay hope this helps. 5/5 vote and whoever lowered your score to 3.5 is messed up. He/she could have at least left you a review. Bye for now

[Polyurethane Smile]

hmm weird lyrics

Well I guess it has a pop like flavour. The lyrics are really messed up though. This sounds more of a parody of a pop song rather than a real pop song. I like the beat. The vox is nice for voice tone. No warbly voice. Oh well, this one is for laughs. Interesting how you used an organ in the beat. So kudos to the instrument players and the vocalist. Not so much whoever made the lyrics. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. Your whistles aren't synchronized too, but it sounded peaceful. Bye for now

juttman responds:

I agree that my lyric writing isn't too good. I would have put this under a different section (maybe comedy) but there isn't a comedy section for newgrounds.
BTW: I am the instrument player and vocalist.

[Light Rain]

okay your first review

Umm yeah your profile message is weird. Naruto = just a anime. Pixelated characters....not fun to has pixels as a wife. :) So back to your song. I guess good piano playing. I think you put too much sustain on some of the notes. I hear someone talking in the background. LOL. Is that your sister or mom talking? Your mic kinda sucks. Lots of fuzz. You will need to buy a better one. Short song, and the composition doesn't seem that hard to me. So overall you get a 5/5 vote and a 9/10 review because this is your first song. I'm always nice on a 1st anything. Bye for now and enjoy making more music.