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[[Dance Mix 4 g-R]]

huh g-r4ve?

Did you make yourself another account? How many do you have now? I only listened to your dance mix 1 and 2. Maybe I'll check up on 3. You do like hard dance. That high pitch sound is funky. Well placed and some insane modulation and reverb to finish the song. The drums are typical of trance. One of your pads sound like from neckbreaker (assuming you are the actual g-r4ve. As usual a nice job so 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. I finally made a rave like song so can you check it out for me. (Sorry bout the ending, the drums have that clashing sound but maybe it was too heavy and gave it the distortion feeling.) Thanks. Bye for now

on1x responds:

I submitted this under the wrong account lol...

[Sintin]

Hah like your profile message

Hah used garageband loops I see....I recognize that loop. Also the guitar for some funny reason. Loved the organ appreggio..funny way to finish it off. Well sintin must off been some interesting imaginary friend. Can you review and vote for my song "system override" please!? So 5/5 and your new to posting music on NG so I give you a good score. 10/10 review. Now what's my prize? :)

thequackattack responds:

lol! okay. HERE'S YOUR PRIZE: THANK YOU!!!! And something else that is not words!

[~EnV~Cellular]

nice beat

Happy somewhat. I liked that start , but not sure about the small fuzzy section. The harmonies seem to play nicely. That same base line tune is good, but it played for the entire song. I thought it would change up or something. The drums are good. I like the part where the song just deeps. Nice effect there. The fade out was good, but usually having a final ending is the better way. Okay so 5/5 voting and 10/10 review cause it is a bit happy and anything happy like...well I like. :) Can you review and vote for my song "system override" please. Thanks

Envy responds:

I made this song on a happy-high from getting the new drum packs just as an expiriment. I didn't spend too long into thinking the organization of the song and stuff! But thanks for the review!

[TAA-IDMish lol]

Starts with a bang

Gets right into the beat. I wouldn't say dancy beat. More trancy like beat. The funny swallowing like sounds give it a bit of techno like style. The drums are quite unique. A lil bit too much looping on one part of the song. Actually little bit too much repetiting. You need to change up the drums. They are the same for a long time. Can you review my new song "System override" please? So my suggestions are more stuff. So add more composition note wise. They have a simple pattern. Besides that a well done job. So 5/5 voting and 9/10 review.

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

Yes, I'm thinking this was a little repetitive as well. Thanks for the advice.

[Trance Experimentation #2]

Wierd

Strange digital stuff in the back. Very different so that's a cool thing. 10/10 originality. A little bit empty in some parts. Maybe add more melodies on top as well as pads. I like that leading fuzzy pad. Sounds so goofy that it's great in a strange way. Lots of special effects you used in this song and they fit well. So that's my only suggestion. The empty bits are kinda boring. Can you review my dance song system override please. Oh 5/5 voting. Good try on the experimental. 9/10 review cause it so unique. Bye for now

kilder responds:

thanks for the great review.

[DJR - Running Lullaby]

Rev.

Since you rev. my song...I will return the favour. This reminds me of mario 64 in the desert level. Quite interesting for a DNB. Is that really bass? The drums are nice, don't change much though. Than this is a short song so not a big deal I guess. School project? You have to make music for a class? What kind of class is this? Has a somewhat happy feel to it which I like. Composition wise (the notes making) seems very easy to make since it is like a loop. Overall a 5/5 and a 8/10 review. You can master your songs like 10 times better than me...now just make the composition more complex like the classical artists on NG. Quite a feat to accomplish but with good mastering and composition than we got ourselves golden stuff all the time or most of the time. Bye for now. Oh PM is you use logic express 7. I really need your help on mastering issues.

[R-VeeBee - Righteous Rumble]

evil trance?

First time hearing that. I wouldn't say the treble isn't that bad since I like high pitch sounds but that is just my opinion. This is quite repetitive but fortunately this is trance so 10/10 diversity. There is a bit more change in the 2nd part of the song, but same synths and pads basically throughout. This song reminds me of a ritornello. That's like a mini like solo than back to the normal beat, new solo, back to main beat, etc. except I guess your solos are like duet instead. For your very first song on NG I usually start ppl of on a great start so 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Bye for now.

R-VeeBee responds:

Thanks for your comment! But ehrrr.. this is not my first track on NG.. This is my second account for better tracks. My other tracks are on my 'Rubbertje' account.. Hehe :P

Glad you like the track.. but I'm not quite pleased with the mixing and stuff.. but okay, I lost the file and it's one of my old tracks. BUT STILL GLAD YOU LIKE IT! :)

Cya!

[Old Metal #2]

More heavy here

Now this is more heavy stuff. The electric guitar plucking away quite quickly. I loved the part where both guitars made that whiny sound to transition into the fast beat. The drums play a back role giving the guitar the show. Nice job on that. This song you used alot more pitch changes adding to the diverse factor. Still I think it loops eventually. The sudden ending is a smart choice too. Heightens the contrast from heavy to silence. Really brings out the song. The only problem I think was when the drum starting doing that sound that sounds like your hitting against a wooden block (or the side of the snare drum). The rest of the drums was good. So 5/5 and a higher diversity score. Originality is really hard to get on heavy metal since so much has been done....very hard to come with something completely original. Bye for now

[Old Metal #1]

metal series?

Good guitar playing. Lots of reverb you put on it...at least that's what it sounds like. The cymbals match nicely. I can feel a buildup coming soon...or should. The light cymbals and the slow guitar beat gave me the impression that you were gonna go all crazy on the guitar. Oh well, maybe in your metal 02 you will do that. Well placed guitar supporting the leading guitar. Correct on this being in heavy metal. I'll rev. your other metal song. Not much to say here cept was expecting a more heavier tune to come at the end of song. Bye for now Fived

[madness massacre]

dang some crazy anger

Yes you are mad!! :) Not quite a massacre but it feels like some some crazy dude is like trying to hunt someone down and the person is like screaming for his/her life. You already got blammed too!! That sucks. I like that one sound you use which I can't explain. Basically the high pitch scratching sound thing. Mood is great. Always like those evil fight like music scenarios? It's your style so keep up with it. Suggestions is maybe less fuzzy saw pad. Besides that , techno is supposed to repeat so no faults on diversity though I would like more. So 5/5 voting and can you sample my preview song (only techno song I have so far)? Any suggestions on what I should add to the song? I'm stuck right now. I already got tons of feedback what to fix instrument wise so I'm good on that. (whaa? my songs on NG?...yep well that site I told you about seems to be stalled forever....so now I have no site cept NG to post my songs on again. )Bye for now