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[One More Shot *FinaL*]

Your last song on NG?

That's too bad if this is your last song. Has that suspenseful mood. Alot of hip hope artists tend to use the percussion you used. I guess that is hip hop percussion. You kind of slow down the song for a while. Not sure if you wanted to build the suspense, but it was a little bit repetitive. I like your use of piano and rarely do I see piano as the background support. At least your hip hop song isn't ridiculous like alot of others. Alot of the hip hop artist are cocky, but you seem to be the rare person. Yah I see your descriptions in your other songs. Blammers are everywhere on NG so nothing we can do. Just go by the reviews. Whatever you do, continue to make more music on NG or some other music site. Your good at this genre. Bye for now

Bleek989 responds:

yea im not sure if im done on here or not...ill prly stick round cuz i got sumthin to proove...but if i go out..its gona be wit a banga..i meen killah type shit cuz i dont do alot of that..well i do just dont post it on here :D but thx for the review man and the support...

~1~

[Piano Freestylin]

LOL

Okay, no offense but did you just start playing the piano? Not like you suck or anything. At least you can play the piano unlike some ppl on NG. I really don't know how to grade this cause doesn't sound like a song at all. Sorry for the low score, but I will raise your initial score of 2/5. Bye for now

BlackPlastic responds:

YO B I JUST DUN GUN TRICKED YOU DAT SHIT WAS FROODY LUPS.

[Waves of Sound]

Umm lol

Ruling all plastic says your profile. Umm this song is okay. I get the whole WAVES of sounds, but seems kinda boring after a while. I'm going to review another song of yours since I think you were playing around here and not taking it seriously. Oh well, so 7/10 on review, 4/5 voting, and 20/10 on fun factor. Bye for now

BlackPlastic responds:

Playing around. Never. >_>

[Alexandra's Tune]

PM me when you make songs

I missed alot of your songs. Tell me so I can review them. Lucky for you, I from time to time go sample all the 0/5 songs. Great lyrics. Loved them. Your best lyrical song soo far. Very dancy and cool. I thought the previous reviewer would vote for your song. Guess not. The only problem is near the ending which just didn't belong in the song. So you started strong and got a bit weaker near the end. If you maintained the dancy feel, than awesome song. Still great work. 5/5 voting cause it deserved the 5 and a 10/10 review. Maintain the sweet beat and you got yourself a platinum song. Bye for now

AlxEllis responds:

Thanks man i decided to chill it out at the end it sounded good a the time but not so good when i hear it now

[AlxEllis - Here With You]

Checking the songs

I'm checking out all the 0/5 songs since some are good. I think your song starts a bit dancy with that one vox going. Kinda strange how he keeps saying the same thing. Does match with your song title though. Seems like some lonely breaks are evident. Woah especially the part where the guy does a solo. I thought the song was over, I guess not. It would have been great if you kept ths song busy throughout. I may have told you already (not sure, I reviewed too many songs I don't remember) to keep things diverse. It is a bit repetitive, but I think this one is better than your other ones. 8/10 review and 5/5 voting to get others to know your song exists. Bye for now

AlxEllis responds:

thanx for the review sadly to say my other songsare over4000kb so i cant put them on newgrounds sorry all :(

[Superbass Rap Beets]

Popular song

What the. How did you get 37 ddl in like 10 mins? My first review of hip hop. Has the loud forceful sound, yep super bass. I like how you hip hop artists always use that funky language. :) Has that cray distorted sound so I think you got it almost perfect on the superbass idea. I like your atmospheric synths better though, but just my opinion. A bit repetitive but a short song so doesn't really get me bored. Well looks like you will get a golden record with the amount of ppl downloading your song so quickly. Bye for now

bdan3 responds:

good times

[I Like to Move it [Rave Mix]]

Do you mean remix?

Well I heard some remixes of this song. Yours is particularly the better ones. However, this song seems a bit out of tune in some places. Not sure if intentional to add some variety. I think you went overboard on the repetitiveness. I'm just hearing the same thing for 3mins or more. I do like your synths though. I also like your user name. :) Okay so this is what I'm going to give you. A 8/10 on review and a 5/5 voting to keep your score at 5/5. Just add some diversity and this would have been a great party song. bYE for now

Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

i just kinda wanted to make a remix of this song. it hasnt really been done before, or n one really htought to. i might add the vocals as synths, but taht seems kinda gay to do. im glad people like it so much =D its not the best song ever =P but its just... yea. nvm. yay my user name is teh cool. and yes i do mean remix +D fajdsfkljkl thx for th 5s!

[[Neckbreaker g-R]]

What another?

Thought you were retiring from music for months or years. Well 1 week doesn't count it. Has that very deep sound and you intentionally added that fuzzy effect. Cool. Umm about the voices, they are a bit weird. Did I hear a girl scream in your song? LOL that adds a comedy factor. This is a nice fast paced song. The ending is a bit weird too where the screams, robot voice, guys voice start going crazy. I think this song should be called nightmare or something like that. Not sure how neck breaker induces this much terror in the song. Great stuff...and are you now retiring from music for a month? Okay bye for now.

g-r4ve responds:

ye I have a few more songs I could submit, but im not gonna. Ill submit in a months time maybe

[Story of Conoroth]

Thanks

First question is..what is conoroth? 2nd question is this your first ever ambient song? I'm interested in why you used this type of music in dedication to me? Did you self compose the main synths? Quite an interesting tune to come out from you. I see you have the build up going and that kinda spacy synth for a bit. What instrument is that sound near the end. The organ? Your song is the 3rd ever ambient song I have listened to on NG and in life. I can't really review properly since I have no other songs to compare yours to. So like Karco ambient song, I will assume yours is one of the best ambient songs on NG. Okay bye for now.

Triented responds:

LOL that is probably the funniest review I have ever heard from you!
Yes it is my first ambient song, used it in dedication to you because ambient is my favorite type I can even come close to making.
Conoroth is my land. (in a fantasy dream)
Organ....yes the organ...
Plus I wanted to try something new instead of the same synth.
And yes... I self did every single thing on my songs.
I never ever use file formats I make then straight from scratch for originality.
Thanks for the review
Yours Truly,
T R ][ 3 /\/ T 3 ])