Music-story's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drumsketch]

Haha

That's some messed up profile pick of your cat? with a red light on it? Why would you do that? This is like james bond feeling. That's quite ironic which I won't tell you why. This doesn't sound like techno or maybe it is techno but not the fast kind. Its cool that you were able to use almost tribal like drums for this song. I never use those ethnic kind of drums cause it's so hard to fit appropriately in dance/trance/techno but you did it. I wouldn't say the composition is out of this world. Could use a bit more complexity. Your right...mostly drums. Some sections of the song has the drums making this weird airy sound at the end of it. A perfect example is right after you finish playing that other instrument(the james bond one) Is that some kinda special reverb you put on the drums? Oh well...simple review so have fun making music. 5/5 votee and 8/10 review. Bye for now

[(F-777) Believe You Can Be]

oh!?????

Some prick decided to have fun and ddl your song. I can't believe ppl actually waste their time doing this. Your sis has a good I suppose childish voice. She is only 11. In a world where we always say believe in the possible/realistic...well this song is encouraging that we can believe whatever we want and we will achieve it. Wish life were really like that. Now that you have the chorus done, I was hoping for 1 or 2 separate sections away from the chorus. Your first vox song so its good that your trying something new. I want to make a pop song, but I have no vox. :( That's the main reason why I decided to make music stories so I wouldn't bore ppl listening to music with no vox.
Okay so the ending could have been better, but I'm gonna give you a great score cause your sis is only 11. Very good for that age. Kudos to her and of course to your accompanying music. Bye for now

[B.R.A.M. is Taking Over]

Creepy stuff

This is a screwed up song. What's with the chipmunk voices? The song has a fast beat...I'll give you that but this isn't dancy music. Maybe could work in a video game where your fighting really screwed up aliens or something. Sorry, I didn't like this too much. It does have a humor factor so kudos on that. I'll give you a 4/5 and 8/10 review. Anyways thanks for helping out the dance section. Bye for now.

[Zasyyt The Flute Player #2]

Another Trance

Surprised you actually did a heavy metal song. Anyway does have the trance like theme to it. Lots of spacy flute and its quite powerful. The background trancy part is almost overpowered by the flute. I suppose its all about the flute player. I think you could have mixed up the drums. The kick and clap drums are good but no transition to fast drums to get the trancy feeling (aka head bobbing :) ) Back to the beginning. The flute with that one other instrument accompanying it...based on the other instrument (not the flute) it is off tune or maybe it is in tune but the note you chose didn't fit with flute. Hmm hard to explain but you know how you have 3 notes accompanying flute. Plays one note for a bit (call it A) than go down a pitch (call it B) and up a pitch or two (call it C). I'm talking about part A. That note didn't fit. There we go. Hope you understood.

On to the flute. Your playing a bunch of notes which is good for the difficulty factor. It changes up a bit and returns back to the same pattern. Typical of trance. Usually I don't mind the repetition in trance, but because you got a overpowering flute, hearing it hit those high pitch notes over and over again gets noxious to the ears. The solution to this while maintaing the flute player theme would be to change up the flute. Say use the spacy flute your using then switch up to say a pop flute, than a muted flute, etc.. Besides that I think you did a good composition. You went all crazy with the flute....maybe a little too much. Need to go more crazy with the drums. The synths and pads got you this time. This rarely happens to you; all your songs seem to have awesome sound choices but this one got you. Hope my review helped you. I also hope you see this as helpful advice rather than my whiny complaints. :) Good luck with your next song and have fun with it. Bye for now

DoobyTimePiece responds:

A B C? ok i believe you talking about the rythem melody the accompaniment with the flute about 45 seconds into the song? well i dont know it sounds ok over here. that or the bass line either way they went really changed. the melody was to be more technical but there were a few riffs that had been layered with a phaser twice. and it sounded like a hollow metal tube when u hit the higher notes. this is why i want FL when i get how to use that then my troubles will be over for the moment. the only worthy part of this song was its initial structure there for i give my self a smack for not spending more time in the finalizations. oh well till next time MS Peace.

[==(Lucid Dream)==]

Frank D Young Nev. Heard

This voice sounds like it would fit in music of the 1960s during the beginning of experimentation with synthesizers. Kinda creeps me out. It also reminds me of panzer dragoon orta (stage 6 I think). If you played the game you will understand what I'm talking about. Lots of mystery involved. This sounds like it could fit in indie too. You got a very unique style so its good your bringing something new to NG...well to me it's something new. I probably won't ddl this song...just not my taste. I'm not sure if you used a trancy synth in a small section of the song. I like the tapping of the bell thingy and the atmospheric heaven pad. I recognize one of the sweeps you used. I don't know what program you use, but I have the exact same sweep as you. Not much to say, not much knowledge in the ambient style. Have fun making more music. Bye for now

[[Trance Mix 2 g-R]]

LOL Now this song?

And it got blammed already. The blammer must be watching his/her computer screen for the next new submission to zero. Okay fine I'll review this one too. Help score up 5/5. Some parts are a bit messy due to too much reverb. Still gives that cool spacy feeling. Ugh...that chord progression down the scale sucked badly. Off key bits I hear to. It's cool to hear off key bits maybe once or twice in a song to add a new kind of feeling but to consistantly do it...hmm doesn't fit. Your previous songs had much better selection of drums. SoO plain with just the kick going. I know your soo much better than this g-r4ve. Anyway like your previous song it also has that spacy like feel which again I say is cool. Keep making more music. Tough luck posting music on the day the blammer is here. Oh well happens to us all at least once. Bye for now

g-r4ve responds:

your reviews suck

[[Trance Mix 1 g-R]]

The blammer on high alert

Wow the blammer got your song already? This guy wants to really get every 5/5 song today before...tick tick 30 minutes before the a-bot chooses. Hah..I'll help your pathetic score. I say pathetic cause it doesn't deserve a 3.33. 5/5. Okay so I like this because I don't recognize any of the synths/instruments/pads so that is origina. Yeah it isn't your best but it's not that bad. The warbly sound effect is weird. Anyway your score will go up. Hey can you actually review one of my songs???? preferably the latest one "Mission Statement" I review so much of your work. Oh and zero bass has a new song out so check that out too. Bye for now

[(F-777) Dark Crystal]

Okay gl

Today is a-bot day so if your score stays at 5 by 12:00am according to NG clock than you will get at least one of the top spots on a-bot list. Now you have to somehow hide your song so the blammer don't see your song. :) Anyway like I said with all your other songs I like the crazy synths. However now that I've heard them in alot of your songs I think a change would be nice. 5 hours??? You must of had this melody all down pat in your mind before starting to put this in your music program. 5 hours is a very quick speed to finish a song. I can see the relation your making with crystal and the song. Maybe white crystal would be more fitting since this is actually quite happy...unless dark crystals are happy? Hmm crystals don't have emotions..what am I talking about.

Quick step review. Builds up for a bit before gets going. Returns back to the beginning and builds up yet again. I like how you put glide to transition to the quiet calm part...where you build up quickly again. (My program glide = rising feeling of a instrument) So a bunch of build ups. I like the song but you need to revamp your synths cause this sounds all familiar. Keep making music and stay creative. 5/5 and 10/10. Bye for now

[*-_Dependancy_-*]

Xenogenocide?

Is this guy a person on NG or a professional musician? Anyway thanks for the lyrics on the first review. Now I know exactly what your saying. Clarity 10 :) Singing with the gut ehh??? This is strange to my ears...the gut singing. Your voice though sounds quite good. Good instruments used and boo using the fade out. :) Oh well. I like most of the song and its good that you often bring music with lyrics. What's your inspiration to come up with such strange but unique lyrics? Anyway today is a-bot day so gl not getting zeroed by the blammer. I'll keep your score at 5 and umm 9/10. Sorry the gut singing really didn't fit with me well. Still awesome stuff. Bye for now

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Yeah, Xeno is a metal music maker here on NG! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1047089&sub=83247

Some awesome music there!
Yeah, the fade out was Xenos, as he wrote, composed and performed all the music. I probably would have went with the fade out as well, as it brings the song full circle...(it faded in). I tossed around the idea of fading out the "ba ba ba's". But ..Yeah, gutteral, throaty vocals.;) Every sub genre of metal has a different style. These are my favorite, although I really like screamo too. I can do a few other styles..but these fit this song well.

Its cool to know that people like the vocals in tunes, here. The portal was created way back when, for the flash artists to get free loops and shit. Anyways man, glad you liked it overall. Stay tuned for other styles of metal too. :D haha. As for lyrics, I don't know where my twisted mind comes up with them. hahaha. Thanks again, man!\m/

[Agitated]

what have I missed!

You make music now for the madness series flash? So many madness flash coming soo quickly it's awesome. I like the bunny kill series the best. I'm so proud of you man. How could I have missed you developing into a great musician. The last time I remembered you were making lots of hip hop modern. Now techno. Wow where have I been. Dang it. I wish I could have been there where you started to advance in techno. Oh well. I can definately see this in a madness flash...heck it already is used in a flash. Nice job. Keep the techno coming. Bye for now

tomfitz responds:

thanks music-story. Glad to see your still here and you can expect more techno from me soon.
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