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[The Lab]

Something new for me

I barely review industrial music. Sorry in advance for a crappy review. The song doesn't remind me of a lab. Lots of cool industrial sounds. A bit fuzzy...not sure if you purposely made it fuzzy. To me it sounds like a mini boss battle...in a factory. :) Those drums go crazy sometimes. It was getting a bit repetitive but you changed into something quite calm. Too bad its soo short. I thought you were entering into a new theme. I actually liked this industrial song better than "Helix" industrial song. Yours isn't all distorted sounding, but then I have no clue what is good industrial and bad. Just go by what I think sounds good to my ears. So to be safe on the marking I'll give you a 5/5 and 9/10. That fuzziness kinda bothered me but everything is good. A tad more diversity too would be nice. Bye for now

Sephora responds:

Some industrial can be distorted, and mostly I do lean towards it. Although, too much distortion can sometimes be overkill to the ears. It's just a matter of opinion, but I appreciate the comment.

[i Aint scared fuck DJ-DatMix]

hello again

Ppl giving you a hard time? Its always nice to see two guys resolve their issues peacefully. So I'm assuming no more hate songs to this DJ DatMIX?....which I think is a cool alias name. Not too much is going on here. The clapping loop with the shakers, few hits of the tom tom drums and whatever that lead instrument you used pretty much sums up this song. I can see this song working great with lyrics. You got some lyrics coming soon in your next projects? It would really make this song stand out alot. However without the lyrics its a decent loop. It's well mastered in clarity so good job on that. Not sure if you like dance music but can you sample my latest? Okay so till next time, bye for now. 5 and 8/10 rev.

Platinum-Chrome responds:

tHANKZ MAYN

[SPF-Everything]

2 new songs?

Since you asked for comments I give you some. Great playing with the electric guitars. Bit fuzzy but sounds still great. However when the vox came in the song died. Sorry whoever in your band did the vox. Your voice needs to mature more before it sounds good. Give it maybe 4-5 more years. Too childish of a voice. Despite this all I'm impressed that you and your band took the time to put vox in a song. To think up lyrics is also a chore so kudos. Overall I'll give you a 5 and a 9/10. I need comments too :) Oh a tip...don't 5 your own songs. Bye for now

packertim3 responds:

ya my friend in the band did the vox, we dont wanna wait 5 years to play though

[Orkestra]

I don't know what to say

You said you used just samples from your previous reviewer. Instead of just putting a bunch of samples into one song, save them up for a song that can accompany your composed (meaning you play your own rhythm on the keyboard) stuff. This song sounds really empty. I'm sure you could put more stuff on top of the samples to make it more lively. I can't be nice on the effort. You've been making music longer than I have on NG so no excuse for coming up with this. 7/10 and a 4. You made so many songs so I know you can do better than this. Bye for now

[Dawn of GuitarZ]

Hmm sure I guess

Just a demo I know that, but you have like one guitar super loud and the other one so quiet in the background. I'm not sure if you wanted that one guitar to be the main show, but even if you did want that you don't have to increase the volume that much. Your title says guitarz...guitarS so I was expecting a chorus of guitars. You could also increase the drum level a bit if you want. Good melody but plain sounding. Still feels too empty. GL on the final version. Bye for now

[(FW) Journey's End]

:) Makes me feel are fuzzy

Yeah sure I've heard some tune similar to this in a video game....maybe mario tennis? I forgot. Anyway its new from you so good originality. Its very happy I might add. Hopefully ppl will download this song. No one seems to like happy music. Hopefully yours and my new song...which you already know about will change the common view on happy songs. I don't know how to describe the beginning. Its awesome yet familiar. I see you rushed the description. !!1 Forgot the shift key on the last one. Somewhat of a short song, but gets the job done nicely. I can see you put lots of effort in. Almost a months work of thinking. It annoys me how overrated some ppl are on NG. You are definately underrated on this site. Oh well, their loss for not visiting your music stuff. So far out of all the new ppl on NG that I hoped would rapidly grow in musical talent; you are truly one that I believe has proven my expectations. Keep it up. I like being right. :) Thanks for proving me right. 5 and 10 on such intriguing instrument choices. You got my download too. Bye for now

wolf-tech responds:

thanx alot. i wasn't trying to make it sound like any other tune but once i finished it i noticed it sounded kinda familar. it kinda reminds me of one of the mario themes and a little bit of final fantasy. and fyi i did rush the description. ttyl and keep the reviews coming.

[{F-777} Dream Addiction]

Good idea F-777

This is what I've been waiting from you. Its good that you took more patience in making your songs. They sound so much better when you spend many hours. ZB spends like a month making his music...no wonder his are usually really good. I'm trying to follow his example. Catchy stuff is hard to come by in those songs ppl make in like 2 hours. Your 18 hours has produced a catchy beat. I hope all your future songs take a long time to make. Lez see....18 hours in two days? You must of been really dedicated to finishing this song. I can sense your moving more toward the "NG" trance with that typical trance bass and drums that like so many fruity loopers use. Ehh oh well. First time I heard it from you so its all good. I really like the spacy trancy synths you used. I like anything that sounds atmosphery so you can have my 5. Have fun making music. Bye for now.

F-777 responds:

Thanks! And no im not really moving towards the trance i try a million different styles all the time. Most just dont end up especially good so i dont post them. =D

And yes i will definately be spending more time on my songs in the future.

Thanks for the 5!

[{GBD} Foreign Space]

Late rev.

Techno? Well sure I guess. This feels quite warm and fuzzy. It only lasts for a bit though when the more serious sounds come in. I don't see foreign space theme but what I see is some kind of mysterious planet scene. Time to explore some messed up planet I guess. I think this song lacks the energy of the more common techno, but there is a lil story going on. Nice job on that. I don't know how you made that weird sound (you also finish the song with that sound). I'm not sure why the guy says "must be something with the music"? unless you thought this song is strange too. Again another unique song no doubt. Too bad ppl on NG don't like new ideas. Good overall but not some commmon music to listen too. Very indie like and possibly video gamish. Bye for now and continue to keep your music style. Nice to hear new things once in a while on NG.
P.S. At the VERY beginning of the song with that raising up sound...it felt like I was watching the "Dolby Sound" logo at a movie theatre. :)

DoobyTimePiece responds:

err. the sound at the end.... hmmm i gota lesion to here this. hmm i think your talking about the melody after the bridge. i think its a vox or a wind snyth. i tryed to build up on this but it just kept being mellow. -pouts- ohwell i did work hard to get the riffs to sound good in genrel i worked harder on this than i worked on the 2nd zasyyt song. (I just might get a guy to do a music video for zasyyt) but hehe dolby... i make all theast GBD songs when i start making flash for the CLock Crew. well maby not directly for but i enjoy the clock concept so i wanted to act on it. Loved it when i was youngerwhen NG'sdident have the audio Portail. mwhahahai lovemy voice effects guy. "There must be somthing in the music" its great. yes this was a verry difrent song i like it. shit Music ME and you. we will rule the world with out music. Light/dark Evil/richious
mwhahahaha colab? then we shall ries!!!

[Your The One (OriginalMix)]

Fun

Very very very hard? You sound like the looney tunes guy that keeps wanting to kill bugs bunny. :)
You better know what I'm talking about cause that show is a classic. Well I have read a past review saying this song is repetitive. Meh I'll embrace that. So does original mix mean you made it or is this another remix? What is with the ending???? You made such a huge echo with too much reverb? or whatever you did to drag it on. You like the calming trances. I wouldn't say the drums are quite unique. One of the synths reminds me of the power of "Sculpture" Do you use that program too? So I suppose your gonna release this song to the public. Hope that goes well with you. Do I get 10% j/k Have fun with music making/remixing and bye for now.
P.S. Blammer = bad = everyone blammed gets 5/5 votee by me.

Pulstate responds:

Thanks mate, i wanted a long ending for dj's mixing it in the clubs. :)