Music-story's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[C- Silver Canvas]

As promised a review

I recognize the fuzzy tune somewhere before. You add some stuff here and there. So far sounding good. Some weird low noise comes in which kinda doesn't fit with the song. You should add the robotic sound with the low noise together more often rather than as separate entities. Your background tune (fuzzy one) changes very briefly than returns back to normal. Your fuzzy tune is probably the best part of the song since it has that trancy feel to it. As a first song, it was good but kinda sparse on the diversity and synths. Maybe more than just 3 different sounds might make the song better. Still I'm glad I listened to your song and I'm sure in the near future your songs are gonna be amazing. 8/10 on review and since first attempt on full length song I'll give you a 5/5 voting raising your score from 4.67/5 to ?????? well whatever. After I finish this review I'll give you the 5. Bye for now. END

Cinnabonmon responds:

ok thanks check out demented paradise, its kinda grungy (=

[Japanamation]

Okay another review

I see you like anime alot. I know a really good anime site but NG admin don't like advertising other ppl sites so I won't say nothing. Okay this is different to your japanamation into beat. You even have vox. Where did you get a decent vox on GB3? Your voice just masked? I don't know what the vox is saying, but it sure makes your song unique. Quite repetitive but I like this one much better than the intro beat. I will give you a 9/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now.

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

i was mumbling so that's why the voices made no sense.

[Urban Ninja]

Okay here is the review

Got back..kinda pissed. I disrespect chinese referees now cause they all suck. Anyway, so the song starts with that weird sound and you have percussion...yah GB3:) I'm confused for a sec where your song is going but that wierd sound comes back. It kinda sounds like the track repeats itself. Kinda like weird sound --> cymbals with weird sound --> just percussion loop --> back to weird sound --> repeat. Hmm okay so finally some new rhythm comes but I heard that tune somewhere before. Lol, I'm beginning to see the crappy percussion again..sigh GB3 fault. I think if you added more to the song instead of the coupling of the weird sound and the percussion loop as the biggest buildup in the song. Since I know the lacking of GB3 I will keep that in mind in your score. You get a 8/10 on review and 4/5 on song. Your score was 3/5 before I voted so I raised it.

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

yeah, well f**k you! i like using GB3. if you have a problem with it, too f**king bad!

[And So This Story Goes]

Organ?

So your attempt to make a happy song. Okay so kinda starts really dark. I'm anticipating a happy moment anytime soon. Ahh there is your buildup. Piano comes in and now more sad than dark. Did your year (2006) suck or something? :) This is an emotional depressing song. You said it would be happy. Well at least it isn't mainly a dark song. I'm surprised you made this song before NOVA. You also got a review from Zero-bass which is a real compliment. I like the song, but too sad for me. Arg! I have a midterm tomorrow. Hope I'm not this said after I do the midterm. Okay so I think you put alot of effort to master the organ and piano. Quite a rare occurance to see organ in any electronic song. Originality...very good because of that. Good clarity. So umm that means 10/10 straight out. Only suggestion...make it more happy. This is totally opposite to happy. Okay bye for now.

Karco responds:

Yeah, that year didn't go well at times. Mind you, there were good parts to it - this isn't a song of the year overall, but rather I was focusing on the story from its beginning (January 2006) to the latest significant event in that story, in December 2006. Know that's not the ENTIRE story... I'm very likely to continue on this someday. Likely within the month.

This song was originally intended to be a depressing song, which is probably why you think it is one... but the song - on its own, actually - turned into what is in my opinion an uplifting one. I just couldn't stick to my original idea... but if you think I did, okay. Sure, ok. =P It was mostly the piano... I can see why you think it's sad-sounding, though towards the end I think it sounds definitely more uplifting. Hmmm.

So you're surprised that I made it before Nova... you think it's better? I can see why you would.

Yeah, ZB reviewed this song... it was because I asked him to, but it's definitely flaterring nevertheless. =D There's actually no organ in this song... I guess it's just the sound of the instruments combined. Hmm.

A midterm? Good luck! I hope you do well on it. If you're reading this response, you're better off studying! >=( Close that window! Now! XD

I definitely should try harder to make a happier song one day. It's likely it won't happen for a long time, unfortunately, as my subconsious is really the thing in control over the attitude of my songs and I've been in this style for more than a month now... but I'll try. =) Thanks for reviewing!

[[The world is ending g-R]]

Sweetcho

RAVY dance again. Typical of you but you do a great job with raves. This has that dancy yet techno kind of sound to it. You make songs way too quick. I have midterms :( Have you heard good thing about logic pro music program? I want to buy it so I can add some cool effects and synths to my songs like yours. I give you 5/5 voting wise. Any tips...well make less repetitive but well done song. Bye for now

g-r4ve responds:

Yeh im too lazy to make a super good song, so I just let it repeat. Havent tried logic pro, but id recommend it based on what ive heard... good luck

[Japanamation Intro Beat]

traditional dance?

Well since dance can mean so many things, this song sounds a bit traditional except when the whole drums come in. Still using GB3? Your song is very unique since it has some interesting sounds which I don't recognize. Using world instruments with electronics is quite a strange mix. I kinda sense some quick transitions, not the gradual ones. I got hammered by ppl telling me to work on transitions, but GB3 has the suckiest percussion backing ever. I can see your in the same dilemma. So I will give you a 8/10 review and 4/5 voting. Two parts to your song makes this audio too long.

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

i agree with you. GB3's beats are not all that great, but whatevs. at least i can make the different synths and beats and etc go together nicely. please check out "japanamation" okay. peace! :)

[Come On Let's Have A Party]

Quite a loud song

You said a party, so I guess being loud on the synths does make sense. You added a few bits of vox so a big plus. I sometimes can't hear what the voices are saying, but oh well. Kinda repetitive, but some good party music. You say this song is not your best which means you made more...post your other songs on NG. Good for a first submission and I'm usually nice on ppl's first song couple of songs. So a 9/10 on review and a 5/5 on score. Bye for now.

AlxEllis responds:

Thanks im adding some more aswell and some my cousin made but ill give him the credit for it thanx for the vote

[Infinnion - Nickel]

You really like this tune

This one is similar to your aluminium one...well some of the synths and some rhythm. I like it, but not really enough differences to fully make this a completely new song. Still I love those bubbles alot. So again you keep that mystery flavour to your songs which is great. Kinda repetitive (which you heard from me from before) but overall your putting more effort in each song adding more special effects here and there. So review is 8/10 and 5/5 on voting. Can't downgrade those wonderful bubbles. Bye for now

Infinnion responds:

thanx 4 ur bubbling review :)

[Time Thrill]

Review

Looks like you took a very long break from making your next song. Okay I think I hear piano but it is off key a bit. Are you mixing major with minor scales? I like the percussion section...it's alot better than mine. Umm, I'm glad that you danced to your song but I'm not dancing. If you didn't have that ackward piano minor sound it would have been quite dancy. The percussion is telling me to dance but the piano is saying don't :) Okay so I hate to lower ppl score and you have a 5/5 which means.....okay so a 8/10 on review (fix that piano) and a 5/5 voting.

Grn-Drgn responds:

Thanks for your honesty and for score lowering whit me, I don't mind, give it the score you think it deserves, that's why it's there, and what I said about the dancing thigny is just about the style, I didn't knew wut style it was so it was just a way to say that I guessed it a dance song XD, oh well, I'm still a novice, but I'll get really good one day, I swear... Anyways, thanks for voting and reviewing, and also, your songs aren't that bad, keep up the good work! :D

[{dj-N} Journey Into Sound]

Hello there

Sweet both our songs got on the same portal submission. :) Well I like your song alot. I like the voices alot. I think the song cuts off a bit near the beginning but than the song really gets going. I like it...I like it alot. Here you go a 10/10 on review and 5/5 voting. Review my heavens danceloor now :) Thanks

dj-Nate responds:

Sure, no problem. Thanks for reviewin'.