Great story. I see it
Great way to show the business of life. Do you use garageband 3? cause I recognize one of the loops. Not a bad thing at all, well placed. I loved diversity songs so 10 on that and highly original. So why the overall 8? Well it isn't really a song I can dance to but that doesn't mean it sucks at all. Please make more of these songs. I will give you a 5/5 on the voting.
hey dude! thanks for your kind words! really appreciate it! i dont use garageband, i use Logic Pro 7, a more advance (and more fuckiong expensive) program from apple! and as it is from apple, they threw all the garage band audio loops and bits n pieces into the package as well as a bout a million other features! it really is a good bit of software!
thanks for the high ratings, the reason this isnt a tune to dance to is because, as it was a college project, we worked along side the girls on the dance course who were given a brief by their tutor to base a dance around one of four themes (my dancer got the theme of fashion) and then the dances came to us and told us what they wanted to do in their dance and how they wanted this portrayed in the music! it was a touch one but i got there in the end! only problem was, as i was working to a breif and a deadline: i A) didn't get to be completely creative on it
and
B) didn't have the time i would have liked to individually mix each drum sound and sample correctly!
i may come back to it eventually, but right now im glad to see the back of that assignment lol!
thanks again!
A decent song. Nice tune
I know that songs on NG must be downgraded in quality to fit 4000kb so yeah I think it had an affect on the clarity of the song. However that is not going to affect your score. What will is some of the sounds were imbalanced meaning some were louder than the others so I couldn't hear the quiter ones as well. The song is kinda short but a nice dance tune. Diversity is a bit lacking since same tune in entire song. Overall I liked it. More pros than cons. Good job. I will give you a 3/5 though you deserve a 3.5/5 which I can't give you. NG should fix that problem.. Can you review and vote for my songs especially the non dance songs since ppl aren't looking at those that much. Don't think the 2.5/5 score means it sucks. A blammer always gives me 0/5 on all my songs while another guy gives me a 5/5. Math says should equal 2.5/5. I DO NOT vote for myself ever since that's cheating.
i'm still trying out the mixing and such, your review has been very helpful.
Cool pop song
Out of all the pop songs on NG, yours is the best "lyrical" song. I actually ddl your song like months ago, but never had a NG account to review it. Very good song to here. Very cheery, happy, kinda like the songs made by the dixie chicks. Please make more. I did have trouble understanding some of the lyrics though. Eg. You start talking about marlene monroe but than it goes blurry. What were you trying to say?? Anyway, I will give you a 4.5/5 but since I can't I will round to 5/5. Great stuff
Yes, my friend Andee wrote these great lyrics and I was inspired to do this music. As a matter of fact this is her doing the singing as well... here are her lyrics:
V1:
I've been waiting in line
I've been left at the alter
But my blood tastes like wine
Though my chariots falter
And if this is my limit
I'll try for one more step
And once I step in it
I'll see I've got more left
C:
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and though life feels so stagnant
I can't turn the page
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and since life's coming slowly I'm young for my age
V2:
And work is a prison cell
We move through molasses
I tell me this isn't hell
Look through rose glasses
I've got to be going,
My clock's getting rusty
Even if i'm still growing
I feel a bit dusty
I'm average terminal mediocre, vague
Bridge:
Proto-typical, Mediocrity at best just like the rest
V3:
And when I live life to death
Did I make an impression?
Did I fill every breath
With a heartfelt confession?
If i meant every word i said
And loved everybody
Does it matter that now I'm broke,
Tired and muddy?
C:
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and though life feels so stagnant
I can't turn the page
I'm average terminal, mediocre, vague and since life's coming slowly I'm young for my age
young for my age, young for my age
Okay here is your review
Since you wanted a review badly, I will give you one. I have one request though..can you vote and review some of my songs too. Thanks. Okay so I'm hearing some good trance music at the start. Later in the middle of the song it switches to video game music with the whole gameboy sounds I hear. That made it a little ackward but still a good song overall. The clarity was a bit of a problem in some parts of the song. I was surprised at how many songs you have made. 9 pages!!! of songs. Wow that is impressive. Okay so I will give you a 4/5. Bye for now
Sigh... whatever happened to writing reviews just to tell the author that you liked the song? No, now its all about getting something in return... bleh.
"Game boy sounds"? I think you mean my square lead.
And about the clarity... it would have been just fine if you told me what was making the clarity "a bit of a problem".
Umm.. okay you love cats?
Well this song was...no is the strangest song I've ever heard on NG. At first I thought there was no song, just a guy talking. Eventually the song came, but I couldn't understand what the guy was saying. Why does the cat grin like that. Than a blurb I can't quite make out. Sometimes the guy says "It's a (?????) cat" I couldn't here that one either. Than a newcaster women comes in and now I'm lost. Do you love cats? I can't believe your at the top of miscellaneous section. 5/5 that's a good score. I will give you a 3/5 on the song so sorry you won't be a 5/5 anymore. I just can't see it as the Puuurrfect song lol. Excuse the pun.
It was a clip fom alice in wonderland ---"why does you cat grin like that" "its a chesher cat" said the duchess "thats why, pig"---
Where is the supporting sounds?
This song sounded like a solo song for an oboe? I liked the pace and it does give you a minor rush. If you added some drums/percussion to the main instrument it would have been more of a rush. I like music that builds up so this song would have been amazing if you did that. Why don't you resend a edited version so I can listen to it again? Good effort on the song. I will give you a 3/5. PM if you do send in a edited version. Thanks
hmm. that does sound like a good idea, ill put more work into the remix, i will call it Wired for eternity.
Thanyou for the review, the program i hae is kindof wierd untill you really get the hang of it, my song standed was when i got the hang of it.
The program is called buzz
Music for a game?
At the start I enjoyed the buildup. I'm picturing myself in a video game going through the dark corridors like DOOM and something can pop out any second. The next part of the song you speed things up but you keep that dark feel. Good job on that. I think your song suites a title like dark dungeons...cheesy yeah but I don't picture a storm. Anyway, I liked your song so keep making more. You will get a 4/5 by me.
Yeah, I guess I can imagine this in a game. It could suit a dark dungeon, though towards the end of the song (when I reintroduce the low violin thingy and a bunch of other harmonies) I was trying to give the image of an unpredictable, tossing, dark and stormy sea. Oh well, everyone gets a different image, right? =) Thanks for reviewing! =D
Why called blue stars?
I enjoyed the heavenly feeling to trance. It is rare to hear a calm song on trance. Usually fast paced and busy. Not sure why you called this song blue stars? Maybe "a chorus of the stars" might be better. This song isn't loud at all. All your adding sounds are balanced nicely in volume. The only problem may be some areas that cut of the heaven sound right into the drums and clapping. Kinda sounds ackward. Great job and I love your user name :) You deserve a 4.5/5 by me, but since I can't give you a 4.5 than I will round up to 5. Bye for now.
i wanted to call the song raining stars but i liked blue stars cuz blue is my favorite colour. everything in the song was done manly out of bordom.
Amazing song nuff said
You deserve to be at the top in the pop genre on NG. Yours is like 2 times better than 2nd place and I have no idea why your song isn't getting ddl alot. You should be almost gold track by now if ppl knew what talent was. Good stuff and good user name too. Can you review and vote for my audio submissions? Just search for my user name in author search bar and listen too some of my songs plz...except ignore "Life of a jukebox" and "ups/downs" I edited life of a jukebox to a jukebox life which is much better. Thanks 5/5 on this song with no hesitation.
Oh, how especially kind of you to say. Of course, I'd be happy to review some of your work! I don't mind that I don't have so many downloads - I'm glad people like you enjoy my stuff!
Thanks for your review!
Video game music indeed
Superb track you made. I can definitely see it in a game. The only problem may be balancing the sound volume. Some parts the sound effects blare loud so I slowly turn my speakers down. Than it is too quiet so I have to raise the volume. I may have heard this tune before..don't remember right now. Anyway, a great song to listen to with or without a video game and I hope to hear more from you. PM me when you come out with new songs. I want to hear more. Also can you review and vote for my music tracks. Just search for my name with the author search bar. Ignore the 2 songs "Life of a jukebox" and "ups/down" cause I messed up on those two. Overall I would have given you 4.5/5 but I can't so rounding up..a 5/5.
YEah, i noticed the volume changes to but i didn't think anything of it till you just mentioned it. As for the tune, my goal is to always try to write something that people can identify with.
Thx for the review and i'll be sure to pm you when i come out with more stuff. I'll also be checking out your music so keep an eye out for my reviews. :)
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