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Quite the abrupt description you got there. Starts peaceful. Nice. Oh some humming going on. Great addition. Did you get these voices from your friends or is it yours or your music program's pre recorded voices? You should have not moved to the robot voice. I loved the initial voices. Yah the words are kinda cheesy but not many songs with lyrics on NG. Highly original. I'm going to 5/5 this one. Check out some of my recent stuff plz? Thanks Continue to make more music with vox.

LaymanLove responds:

Haha, I figured short and sweet would best get the point across. The female voice is a friend and the rest I sang with my good buddy Mr. Autotune. I kinda agree with you on the vocoder thing, but it's only by itself for a short while so I wasn't too bothered...the song is supposed to be somewhat cheeseball anyway.

Thanks for the great review. I'll check out some of your stuff sometime.

LL

Review time

Well I reviewed your "searching for the spacboy" a while ago. So now I listen to this song. Forgot the "e" though :) Quite spacy, but not quite dark enough to be considered a rave. Your profile is light though so I can't complain. Pretty good song to hear but some parts you leave kinda alone with one sound going which slows the action down. Also the siren part is a bit too long. I can understand why you used the siren to have that atmosphery feel/spacy feel to it, just a bit shorter or less on it would make the song better. 2.5/5 was the score before and I am assuming a blammer gave you 0/5 on purpose. I will balance that out with a 5/5 , but review wise I give you 8/10. More action or make more busy. Nevertheless good job. Bye for now.

Triented responds:

Well, you will see that I am starting a music series called Spaceboy. Its going to tell a story, I thought the song was very fast, in fact, It is the fastest of all my songs as of yet. Thanks for the review, and I do hate blamers. I thought I made a big mistake by adding the cymbal. It sounds more like Christmas bells. And I don't think the siren was too long. If you listen closely, you will hear the longest siren stops at the precise moment and time, the siren wouldn't be juicy without length. But the end could use a little bit of work. Thanks again!
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Good stuff but,

What's with the CCCCCCC GGGGGG AAAAAAA STOP? Would have been perfect if you ended with FFFFFF. Congrats on getting the top 3 spot. Kinda atmosphery and cheery trance song. I like this alot. I'm all for happy songs. Which part is the riff? 9/10 on review and a 5/5 voting!!!! Listen to some of my stuff too? Thanks

Stargame responds:

Eh, I didn't put much work into this song. Despite that, I still like it a lot. I can't fix the end, as I'm using the demo version of FL, so it's gonna stay like that. Glad you like it! Keep mixing :)

High volume check rdy

Ready to listen. Starts atmosphery. Waiting for that pendulum effect. When you mean pendulum you mean where the drums switch speakers back and forth? I heard a guy's voice that seemed raspy. Ravy style of song. This one started a bit more diverse than your other songs. Glad your adding more diversity now. Hmm it was really good, but near the end you repeat that same pattern too many times. I still liked it. Loved the pendulum. Yeah I sense a bit of hip hop too. Good stuff. 5/5. Bye for now.

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

Hi Music-story!
In this song i almost recreated perfectly the Pendulum Style drums..yay! =D

thank you for the feedback!!

Trying new stuff I see

Ambient now. Have not reviewed a single ambient song so yours is the first. Yeah starts quite calm. I can't really describe the synths you used. Very strange sounds. Woah, I heard some crazy distortion. That caught me off guard. I'm getting mixed ideas. The distortion part gives me the feeling of chaos, but the rest of the song gives me the feeling of calmness. Two things contradicting eachother. Kinda repetitive, but very interesting. Never heard of a song like this before. This song could work in a horror video game. Oh you do the fade out to finish the song. I guess that is suitable. Not sure how else to end this song. Since I never heard any other ambient songs, I can't really compare which is better so I'll think yours is the best ambient song on NG :) So 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now

Karco responds:

Wow, an honor, I guess. =P Yeah, I've been delving in quite a few styles as of late... Aster Revisited and this included.

Some of the effects I use in this song, especially the effects I introduce in the thirteenth measures (after the snare drum) are especially unique - I remember hearing them and thinking, "I HAVE to make a song out of these."

The distortion... what? That was unintentional, though I think it's the bass that plays sixteenth-notes... for some reason it was messing with the clarity/bass and I didn't know how to get it to stop. =(

A horror video game? Where'd you get that idea? That actually wasn't what I was trying to get at all. I was aiming for a quieter, calmer song, (compared to the two before it, at least) at the image of walking in a snowy field, or something like that. But if that's the image you get, then if you say so...=\

The BEST Ambient on NG? Certainly not! XD Go listen to some artists who actually are FAMOUS here for their ambient! Hah!

...mind you, I wish it were. =D

Either way, thanks for reviewing and glad you like it. Much appreciated.

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What does Aster mean? End of the world....feels like a song in metroid prime with those alien dudes invading the planet. Video game maybe? Very dark yet surprisely not sad or depressing. Those alien/zombie sounds kinda get a bit too frequent and overlap too much. Gets very distorted later in the song. Yep, now bigger aliens are attacking the planet. :) Fades out and yep the world is toast. So your first attempt at DNB. Quite a good attempt. This song sounds alot like g-r4ve songs. I'm not really a big fan of the undead sounds, but still quite creative putting them in. Originality is no problem. Looks like it took you 5 days to make this song so the effort is there too. Overall I will give you a 9/10 on review...ahh nah, 10/10 because everyone hates the 9 :). and a 5/5 on review. Reviewing your other new song right now.

Karco responds:

Aah, about time someone asked! I'll explain at the end of the response, to be sure you (and any other readers of this, hah) read the entire thing.

Yeah, a few of these synths are from the last song, Project -Aster-, making a comeback. They're the laser synth (I tinkered with that one a bit) the Roswel Landing synth (FL users should recognize that 3x0sc synth, it's one of my favorites for this style of song) and I used a sawtooth, but a different one from the last song, which I felt fit the idea more.

My drums are much more complex, so yeah, bigger aliens definitely are attacking our Earth. What I especially love is the hit I have playing every fourth measure (or every other measure at times) which certainly gives it that apocalyptic feel. I'm very proud of that choice there.

All right, so my reasoning behind Aster... there's a couple reasons, actually. Aster is the root word (Greek, I think) for DISaster, and the reasoning behind that is fairly obvious. Note the word sounds like star... this is because at the time they felt disasters came from/were the doing of the stars. And since this song is based around alien invasions, it felt only too fitting I named it Aster.

So I hope my explanation answered all your questions... thanks for reviewing! On to responding to your other review...

No keep going :)

I finally got logic express and it took frickin 3 hours just to figure how to get sound on the program. Ahhh my head is hurting. See that what happens when you make music too fast. You run out of ideas. This song is fast paced. I like those.. Ahh whatever 5/5. I just want to make a song now.....bye for now.

g-r4ve responds:

read the manual. Lol

Sure I'll review

Kinda the metropolitan music style. Feel like I'm in the dark city streets of a busy city. That vox sounds familiar. I kinda like this song. That really dancy but I like the mood of the song. I'm not sure what suggestions to make. Not sure what kind of dance music your interested in. Keep up with the vox. Maybe try a guy's voice in the next some to add something new? So a 5/5 voting. Bye for now

AlxEllis responds:

thanx i just make music the way i feel when im making it thats y if im hapy it will be happy i made a nother song but its too big for newgrounds

You suck g-R :)

You hate macs? What?? Macs are awesome. Yeah window did come out with a computer that is $5000 so that would be sweet but who can afford that? Me too poor. So your new style.. new style?? still ravy to me. Yes if only static electricity could make these sounds. Well a song a static...what's next? Fire cavern? Heh sorry making fun of your song titles. :) The only suggustion is make your name so it is g-D (D=dance) We have soo many raves on NG. Okay wellgood song so you know what I will give you. Bye for now.

g-r4ve responds:

lolol it'll be platinum waterfall next rofl

Wow so many songs

You posted alot of songs in just 3 days!!! Glad your spending most of your time adding to the dance section. My fav section. About the title, well I'm not really dancing...maybe just a little. The bongos really kinda killed the dance. Did I hear a voice in there? Always good to add some voices even if it lasts very briefly. The 2nd half of the song gets more up beat but quite repetitive. Ahh the bongos come back again...that doesn't fit very well. Okay a good song, just add more diversity and more dancier instruments. I will give you a 4/5 voting and 8/10 on review. Keep making more dance songs. We gotta catch up to the techno song count. :) Bye for now.

AlxEllis responds:

thanx i will add more voices like you said im adding 2 more songs every day ok so keep lookin :)

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