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[NM_RORDFTDanceLoop_001]

Flash game?

Is your game going to be some kind of ddr with the keyboard style? That's my impression when I hear you say "rock" out rivals. Its a good loop with alot of fuzziness. Easily seen as intentional and gives a party feel. However if you extended this so that maybe it would loop after 30 secs rather than looping constantly right away...except for that brief slow down, then this beat wouldn't get annoying. Anyway I look forward to your game. Tell me whenever you make it. I'll give it a try. Bye for now

NeoMarine responds:

I would have released the game the other day except i'm limited to 2 songs per day and I believe I need all the tracks in the game uploaded here before I can upload the game because it's for a contest which requires crediting to the audio authors.

The game will be out tomorrow... I hope you like it, anyhow.

[C3 - Needs A Name (New Anthem)]

Title hmm

The song has a calm feeling to it and slowly picks up. Hmm then back to the calm stuff. Reminds me of a beautiful clear day where your cruising on the lonely streets under a full moon. Not sure what title can fit that description. Since just a demo, I'll leave my comments for the final version. Continue with it and maybe reach a climax. Your buildup doesn't really buildup to anything unless you intentionally want that feeling. Bye for now

C3NTAURI0N responds:

Hmm, Yeah maybe I could call it something peaceful. I was also thinking about re-classifying this track aswell to dance or something. Thanks for the feedback. Stay tuned for the full version.
C3

[_-={Solemn Stone}=-_]

Epic

Confused about this dreamshire thing. Your past reviewer's song which you remixed? Anyway it sounds like I'm watching gladiator. That movie was awesome. Again very epic. The strings are very emotional and the plucking of cello? fits ever so nicely. Brass, excellent choice. Works wonders for this gladiator style. Now that transition was really strange (the one before the crowd starts cheering). Sounds like a really messed up block that you rubbed a stick against. When I say strange I don't mean its bad. Very unique though. I was hoping for a dark bell somewhere in the song. Maybe there was but I didn't here one. Nice ending. Personally I like definate endings rather than the fade out (or is that fade in? always confuse between the two) Did you put vibrato/tremelo on the violin to make it dreamy? Overall a 5/5 and sure a 10/10. You got some nice talent with them classical songs.

MaestroRage responds:

hello Music-story!

This song was constructed for Dreamshire-Fire's character and story revolving around Orson Stonerule. It is not a remix per say, but a cue or piece depicting that story that he showed me.

The dark, battle, angry piece is the second part of this story. This is the daunting, and heroic entrace of the hero, before the defining battle to end all things.

I'm glad you liked the piece, I hope you will hear the second part, when it comes out :D. Thank you for the review ^^.

Also, it's not really a fade out, more a trailing cliff hanger, there were no tremelo, but vibrato was in excessive use here.

Once again, thanks ^^.

[Peace and Love]

Nice beat

Sounds like you put alot of "attack" on the piano. A more legato style rather than a hard bang of a few keys here and there would have made this song more beautiful. However you got the job done still. Its a lovable piece with some great composition. I suppose this can be a full....very short song. :) This song is alot better than the other songs that got the a-bot list this week. Believe it or not but this reminds me of christian music and anime music. Lyrics just pop up in my head. You could put lyrics into this song of yours and it be really awesome. I like the accompany of strings...violin. Overall I like this song so a 5/5 and 9/10 review. Hmm...I just recognized your previous song is based on anime. Was that your influence to make this song too? Bye for now

studio-nightbird responds:

yea. i like to lern an awsome song. than edit it to the point when its not that song any longer. i'll prob come back to this and make an instrumental mix a bit of techno (a little bit)

thanks for the comment

[{United Fire}]

Smiles on the description

Well only two songs so I suppose this is your best. Clarity has been improved alot. Now one more thing to add. Your timing of some of the notes is off ever so slightly yet noticeable. I like the crazy guitar. A few off key moments or maybe on key moment but not the proper mix. I can see what your doing with the whole buildup thing. Slowly add new instruments on top then make the guitar play a faster yet still similar beat. I wish you could have changed the fuzzy bass rhythm. Heh. The ending is funny. Thought you were going for a fade out but nope the clashing of cymbals. Not really the best ending but still a better ending than some other songs on NG. Despite me asking you for more diversity, it really isn't applicable to the trance genre. I just like diverse stuff more. Anyway great guitars with some awesome reverb or whatever you did to make them all atmosphery sounding. 5/5 and 9/10 rev. Your getting alot better...reason to smile. Bye for now

dJViZ responds:

<3 music story's reviews, help me a lot lol

[Rising Shadow]

What the heck?

Umm no comment about the last reviewer. This song sounds quite nice. Could work in a video game in a suspense scene. I'm just waiting for the laugh to come. I like the violins alot. This song repeats for a long time so that may be the only flaw. The piano matches nicely with the strings. I don't notice any orchestral drums later in the song where the piano and strings are just going at it. Lost its suspense a bit. Haha. The laugh is not the best but I like the comedy factor put in. This is a long song as you warned me in the description. Finally ends but rather abruptly. Overall I'll give you the 5/5 vote and 10/10 rev. The laugh boosted the score from 9 to 10 cause it is funny. :) Bye for now

Chrispington responds:

Yeah the repeating gets a bit much for me too, but it's meant for video game cutscene/BG music so it's good to have a strong repeating section for snipping out nice loops.
Thanks for the review.

[Insane Bumpin!]

Hey this is some cool stuff

Is that your voice and I suppose your friend's voice too? The lyrics change up alot so kudos to you for making the lyrics. I guess the background music is not really bumpy, but you say bumpin alot. This is a rare hip hop song I enjoyed on NG. Keep the lyrical music coming. It definately helps with the diversity cause the background music is looping all the time. I'll give you a 5/5 and 10/10 review. Not much else to say. Bye for now

JMaC5000 responds:

Thanks for the review man, means a lot. I'll keep the lyrical stuff coming to NG, don't worry.

[duh!!??]

Well hmm

Starts childish and happy. One of my fav. types. Like the trumpets. Flute is good too. That basic background beat is a bit lacking. Hah the fuzzy sound is a comedy factor. What's this? I like this pop like jazz stuff now. Love the diversity going on. Awesome stuff. This is very enjoyable. Looks like you just did a music story here. That's really cool. Since your first song I'll give you a 5/5 and 10/10 rev. Not perfect...a few flaws but quite nice overall. Bye for now

my-garbage responds:

Cut the joking NOW. You know that you helped me make this. No surprise you enjoyed it. XD I'll need some tips or I may suck in making music forever. Thanks for review though. See yah.

[Take You Away]

Welcome my good man

Good to see someone new visiting and contributing to the audio portal. Now about this song. I think you need to do a sound balance checkup. Lots of clipping going on. What program do you use? Anyway I suggest that whenever you make a song always check the volume bar. If it reaches red then you will likely get lots of clipping. Clarity is something I still have problems with but it is probably the biggest factor that makes a song good or bad. Now I'm not gonna be all harsh on you since this is your first time. I'm gonna list the good points. That happy pad/synth you used I really enjoyed. Some other bits were dreamy too. I can sense a good deal of diversity compared to other techno songs I've heard. As you can tell from my music, I love diversity and also respect ppl that go diverse with their stuff. Sign of a creative mind. Now I would like to see even more diversity, but if you like your style then by all means continue. I'm not here to change ppl style. My stuff isn't good so why would anyone want to copy me. :) I'll start you off with a 5/5 and a 10/10 review. Compared to my first song ever, this owns mine. Bye for now

dJViZ responds:

Thanks, I really enjoy your stuff especially your rave song MS override I think it was, well anyway... I'll be sure to a sound balance check up!...I am working on the song as we speak so we'll see how it turns out

[[F-777] Crystalised Trance]

Oh Ahh Yah Good

Reminds me of flashburn music because of that awesome sound you used at the beginning of the song. When that zipper like sound comes in that may be the not so good part. I think you use that sound alot in your other songs too. What plugin do you use to cause that delay sound to your instruments? I gotta learn how to do that with my program. I can only delay it so 1 note repeats. You made it so triplets came out. Lots of cool sounds used. Too bad song was short...short and sweet though so good job. Looks like lots of ppl enjoy this song from the amount of ddl. It deserves the # though. Not sure why you would post this in dance when you named your song "Trance" Well the dance section is too irresistable to leave so I'll probably never leave it for trance or techno. We (dance genre ppl) are getting badly out numbered by techno songs. +12000 techno songs. Long time before dance every reaches that mark. Keep them dance stuff coming. I will vote 5 since you seem to want it soo badly :) Bye for now

F-777 responds:

Thanks. And as for the delay thing, i make the triplets myself in piano roll. I use Fl studio so its not so hard but i make the triplets myself using copy and paste and stuff to put it were i want it and extending it and stuff.

Anyways ya the dance section is the most awesome section =D.

Thanks for the review!