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[(FW) Nightfall Trance]

cool 2 new songs by you

Looks like your producing more trancy songs now. Me too. :) Are you still getting logic? Right now I'm working on a rave, but am busily making my own samples from scratch. Goal: to make a professional rave (may take many months to complete) You want to help make awesome samples when you get logic so we can make a incredible rave? Anyway back to your song. I like the trance synths going on. The lacking part is the power/energy in this song which mine also lack. Has a mild energy tone, but that's as far as it goes. You can understand what I'm going for in my (possibly your next rave too) rave. I guess this song is repetitive but you did put it as a trance song. Hmm the gradual decrescendo to end the song. Oh well, it sounds good still. I like your description. Some reason I don't think Jesus would say that. :) Jesus is cool though. #1 :) I'm actually serious about that. Okay give me a PM if your interested. Oh that was close. Almost forgot to give you a rev. score again.

wolf-tech responds:

ya i'm still getting logic. monday i move to wisconsin and after i get it will be about a week until i get the mac. I'm up for the samples too. And yes Jesus is #1. Thanx for the rev.

[(FW) Invasion 2]

Say number 2. Okay rev.

So some gun shots. Alot better or I guess more realistic gun sounds than I could ever do. Few alien like themes. Reminds me of my old Final showdown song. I see you recycled some of the synths. No biggie since a sequel. Hmm, this song is just yelling at me "Martin Mystery", that lame TV show. Always like listening to a song with a story. I wish ppl could start putting story songs like this in a flash. I can see soo many flash ideas with this. Overall very nice. In less than a day you already got lots of listens. Good job on that. 5/5 vote only once by me and a 10/10 review. A louder bang before the alarm came in would have been better. Nice wheels screeching effect. Where do you get all these effects?
At 2:17 a cool instrument comes in. Okay, that's all I have to say. Bye for now

wolf-tech responds:

I was kind of inspired by final showdown to do this song. where do i get my sound effects???? Random googles is the answer to that. Thanx for the rv.

[Flawed Porcelain.]

Good you like making music

Well who knew that there would be more blammers on NG than ppl that actually vote fairly. So many new submissions got way too low scores. As I speak your song is getting blammed. Just moved down to 1.76/5. Well this song may not be stellar. It is all over the place and the patterns feel too plain. The piano is really hurting this song. The instruments just stop instantly with out no fade out. The diversity is decent. Work on your transitions better so that the diversity will actually work in this song. I'll give you 4/5 vote and 7/10 rev. Anyway the one part I liked was that bass playing such a fun tune with the drums. Gets me all jumpy, but that's the only good stuff. You will get better especially since you are starting to like making music. Bye for now

FineAsFaux responds:

I love these technical reviews :]

The piano part does kinda stand out, now that you mention it.

But the more songs I make, the better I get with the programs I use. So in the future, I'll try to make sounds that blend more fluidly with the beats and what not.

Thanks for the review.

<3

[Opened Eyes]

Is this a remix?

Like the previous rev. awesome vocals. The guy's voice was a bit off tune, but that was the only bad thing about the vocals. The strings bring a oasis feeling. The small section of flute is nice too. Umm this song is not fully finished right? A quick ending gives me this feeling. Anyway if you made the lyrics and vox well than this could very well be the best classical song on NG. However if no, than I still think this remix is nice. And yeah I agree with you. The voting system is garbage. Who decided it would be cool to be able to vote daily? I'm not one that votes on anyones song more than once and I suspect you also do. I've taken a listen to a few of your previous work and you are a great asset for the AP. Too bad this voting system well not be able to differentiate good and crap artists anymore. Anyway you got one fan of your music if that's anything to be happy about. Keep up the good work. This song may not be your best stuff, but I know your capable of coming with a song that will totally rock. Bye for now. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review.

Bosa responds:

I can agree with everything you said thus far. This song isn't quite finished, yet this was mainly supposed to be a loop. The final version will be used in my upcoming flash, Quest of Eve.

I might make something else like this, but time will only tell.

Thanks for the review and interesting comments,
Bosa

[KO - Smiley!]

Good for a first

Well the whole oh I can vote on the same submission every day once is weird. I bet there are going to be ppl that keep 5iving their friend's songs daily. Can you still 5 your own songs? I really hope NG got rid of that feature. Who is O? I assume the K = karco. Well your friend seems to know fl much better than alot of other ppl that use fl. You must be a impressive teacher of electronic music. A bit repetitive at the start, but this song has alot of energy. Did you put alot of eq on or bass amp? Surprisingly no clipping heard in this song. Was expecting alot with the loud beats. This song has a happy tune. Yah :) I enjoyed the crossfade. Fluent and near perfect. The composition of the main lead doesn't seem uber difficulty to think up, but I tend to find often that the simple tunes are the best songs. Hmm the fade out to end the song. Oh well. I suppose first song for O? so I'll let it go. 5/5 for O and 5/5 for K being a good teacher. 10/10 rev....umm I mean 10 stars. Bye for now

Karco responds:

O is a good friend of mine who picked FL Studio up quite quickly. Not going to say more than that, though... :)

Heh, yeah, it's happy tune, I knew you would enjoy it. :D

Not much else to add, thanks for the review and the high ratings! My friend says thanks, too. We're glad you liked it. :)

[Cry For Me]

Hmm this is ify

Your score of 2.42/5 leads me to 2 conclusions. Either other hip hop artists really hate you or you didn't make this from scratch so ppl blammed you like crazy. This song is really well made. I would say professionally made. Yeah provocative lyrics, but the voice is excellent. The strings really bring out the mood. Maybe both my conclusions are wrong, so to be safe I will give you a 5/5 vote. I wonder why in all the new submissions none have a green or blue band to show a good or great score. Anyway the song sounded good to me so also 10 stars. If you didn't make this from scratch than I understand the blamming of your song. Nuff said. Bye for now

mattlandry responds:

It was made from scratch(except for the beat) I just think I been gettin bad ratings from hip-hop haters...Thanx for the feed man...

[_-={Wolven Shrine}=-_]

hello again

Is this your 1st submission to this updated NG? Ohh the wolves..duh. Good title name. Feels like I'm in the arctic. Again a dramatic song. I like the triplets going on. The umm piccolo? doesn't really match the drama of this song. Its too happy for this piece. How did you make the wolf howling sound....or where did you get it? It sounds so real. Overall another great song. Umm 5/5 and ohh now I can give stars. :) 10 stars. I love that choir too. Your my 1st review for this new ng update thing. Bye for now

MaestroRage responds:

Hello Music-Story!

The wolve howls are some sound effects I found on the internet. Sadly I do not recall where exactly as I just googled "Wolf Howls" and downloaded anything within a thirteen mile radius.

The howls were all compressed to 20kb/s and the static and muddy sound they had was painful. Through some equally painful equalizing and filtering later, I was able to isolate the main bulk of the howl and keep it's impact.

I'm proud to be your first new NG review! Thank you for that, i'm glad you liked the piece ^^.

[zabu dabu]

sounds plain

Well nothing spectacular going on with the same repeating stuff. However, it looks like you had so much fun making this. This is basically a buildup where you keep adding extra stuff on top of the piano. If the extra melodies weren't actually the same as the piano than maybe it could have been better. The drums sound home made so kudos on that. The whistling is quite nice. Something I have not heard on NG yet. I'll give you a 5/5 and 8/10 review since you have not submitted in like 3 months. Bye for now

gray1 responds:

ya i mixed some other stuff into it right after i submited it oh and i lost all of my music so thats why i haven't submited in a wile

[Final Chronicle--_--(3:21)]

Interesting

Nice bells to start the song. Sounds dramatic to me than goes all evil like. An increase in tempo? Well I like the transition of speed. Now its like some action packed horror combat scene. I just think alien vs predator. Hey cool use of strings. Yep your right...it has a epic taste. You got the gloomy drums going...I gotta make some drums like yours. :( Takes forever to make drums though. My favorite part of this song is the sharp staccato parts. I still love them bells too. Bits of this song also remind me of hip hop modern. You like to build up alot. Well it works...who doesn't like build up music. :) The ending is good. A little wierd, but I'm sure you wanted the weird creepy feeling. 5/5. Pretty good for making songs amazingly fast. Bye for now.

PERVOK responds:

Seems like everyone's still amazed at how fast I make music :P You just gotta set your mind to it.

Thanks for the review!

[watch outttt]

Hmm well

No one helped you out with the demo...no comments. :( Well I guess you ended up doing the final version with no extra help. Ppl are selfish. :) j/k for the most part. Now to your song. It has a atmosphery space feel. Highly repetitive with you playing down the scale many many times. The drums were okay but your drum transitions seemed miss timed. Never really builds up to anything. Like the fx sounds. You really didn't have to do the crappy vox at the beginning. It is funny though. If you were trying to give the impression that after the explosion the listener is to feel lost in the destruction...well kudos cause that is what I felt. However the transition was too abrupt into the new theme. Overall a good song and gets a 5/5. The creativity helped change the 4 to a 5. There needs to be more action. Ppl flag me on my songs of lacking bass. I think yours also suffered the same problem. For your 3rd song, you are improving at a fast rate. Reason to smile and gl with your future songs. Need reviews? Well just pm me. Also a bunch of guys from the dance section love to rev. too. We dance ppl like to give feedback. Bye for now

Nyth-Pinank responds:

Yeah, after the explosion I tried to make it feel that way. I guess it worked :)
Yeah I kinda see it getting repetitive with the scale. Next time I will def put bass in.

Thanks so much for review and I will def pm you, if needed. If you need me to review just pm me too. I also like dance music, so I will be reviewing.
Thanks again.