Music-story's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-A Death in the Snow-]

Church bells?

Well I think I found a NG musician who is the most original on NG. Now a song with church bells? What's next in your next song? I can't even think of one. You are very creative in making music. No brainer..orginality a 10/10. Diversity..well it is repetitous, but the song was short so it was not annoying to hear the bells again and again. Would have been if it was a 5 min song. Clarity...those bells made the mood of the song depressing. You were bang on your description. Should be in a war movie where it shows the terrible results of war. Overall an 8/10. I like the cheerier songs more, but that is just my opinion. Your making songs quite quickly. I actually just submitted one too. It's called loneliness..anger..sadness and I thought that song was depressing. Yours beats mine on the depressing factor. So I will give you a 4/5 fair enough?

MastaBrad responds:

thank you, even though i'm orignal i suppose i still feel like i need to find my style. I didnt realize this song would get quite the attention. I make a lot of trance songs, everyone is like, yea that sounds cool. then when i make these kind of songs, it seems to reach out more to people and i get quite a lot of feedback. thanks again ill check out your song.

[Happy hour]

Unique tune

Out of all the 4 types of music genre you listed..this one is dominantly trance. Very repetitous. I was a bit ify on diversity because if this was in the trance section I would give you a higher diversity since that is what trance is...repetition. The clarity was good. Effort..well it was pretty much the same throughout with a few tweaks here and there so an avg. effort. Overall good job. I was a bit surprised how near the end of the song all of a sudden there is a big drop in volume. Gradually becoming quieter instead of quiet all at once would make this song better. I would have given you 3/5 on this submission, but since if this song was in the trance section...I would have given higher so for the benefit of the doubt you will get a 4/5 by me. Can you review and vote for my songs too? Just find the author jerrims (me duh) and listen to my songs except for "life of a jukebox" and "ups/downs" cause I messed up on those ones badly. Thanks

Tanooki-John responds:

Well, thanks for sharing all of that with me. I will check out your stuff later in the future. Oh, and sorry about the gener. I usualy screw up sometimes. Well, im glad you liked it.

[Aim (ClubEdit) (DEMO)]

A good start for a demo

I was surprised about the clarity. It was not bad at all even though you said it was. I have a few suggestions before you make the final version. The beginning is good but try to move more quickly into when the beat picks cause the whole percussion part at the start is a little too excessive. From there on the song is just amazing. You even add a piano in there. Love that feature. Your songs is long for a demo!! PM me when you post the final version. I want to here it. In the mean time can you review and vote for my submissions..."A jukebox's life (volume up)", "testing" and my latest "lonliness...anger...sadness" Thanks.

Pulstate responds:

Thank you so much mate!

[-Shootout-]

Good sound effects

Okay so I see your description saying a shootout and I'm thinking you mean a hockey shootout? LOL So anyway I hear the car starting and than gunshots, windows breaking, cops coming and I'm just like what the heck is going on. Than comes in your little melody and I'm like okay here we go. Good stuff coming cause the beginning was just nonsense. By the end of the song I hear a boom and I'm like OHHHH okay I get it. A shootout...some guy in a car trying to escape the cops and later goes boom. Now I get it. The beginning so pointless as I thought. You successfully portrayed a story in your music. I am really really really impressed. Good song..probably one of the best miscellaneous songs I've heard, but than that genre of music isn't my favorite so really my score is a bit biased. I really tried to not be biased at all, but I just can't force myself to like something as much as other genres. Very good song anyway. Plz give me a written review on "A jukebox life (volume up)" which is a dance song. Not sure if you like dance so some bias may occur to..but just give a fair review. I need your support cause on the dance genre there is a blammer who keeps giving all new dance submissions a big fat 0/5 for no reason. He is an absolute jerk so I need your honest review so I can improve on stuff. We can both make suggestions to help eachother make better songs in the future.

MastaBrad responds:

heh, wow. I'm speechless to see such a large review.

The original name was going to be "A Bad Day" but that would make no sense either. Yea, sorry about the random start there, I tried to build up the sounds, starting with a car then ending in a car chase thing... anyways.

I'll give you support, but boosting people is not my specialty. I dont rank myself either like I have noticed some people do, they give themselves fives on fresh submissions.

Thanks for the review, it is a rare to see reviews containing over 3 lined paragraphs.

[Euphorium]

Great music I know why you got a low grade I think

Hey this is a great song. Just as good as zerobass songs. I think I might know why your grade is 3.6/5. You don't deserve that grade at all. First reason is I post songs too. I get good reviews like you, so why the low grade? Some idiot on NG is purposely giving 0/5 scores for every new submission..including your when it was new. He probably didn't even listen to your song. How would I know? Cause I had 2 songs submitted at once. One of them I accidently sent in had no sound. Obviously my bad and a deserving 0/5. What's funny is the other song that actually had sound...he gave me a 0/5 too!!! That doesn't make sense at all meaning he doesn't even sample the music before giving everyone a 0 grade. I really hope to catch this guy who is doing it to every new submission. I wonder why zero bass music is always top 15??????hmm I wonder.....

EON responds:

:P It's a CONSPIRACY! And yeah, people do generally 0 songs for some reason, probably to give them selves a pathetic false sense of self-power at the expense of someone else’s credibility. I've just learnt to ignore it and go by reviews and downloads. That's the only real indicator.
Thanks for the review.

[Eightbit Allstar - Check Out]

good stuff

Well a good song and it does sound like video game music. Not sure about what game it would be in since it has the kiddy tune yet has that rough feel to it for grownups. For originality..well I think I heard a tune similar to this one somewhere (the kiddy part of the song with the higher pitch). The song is a bit repetitious but this is trance so I didn't grade you based on that. I couldn't fully hear what the male voice was saying. Other than that, good job. Make more songs.

DJ-Ravecore responds:

I recorded my voice with a crappy microphone and added a Bitcrusher-effect in it, maybe that's the problem!

Thx 4 ya review! =)