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[Wait a minute]

Strange description love?

Fell in love with what? Well I don't know what to say. This song is quite funky. Reminds me of happy aliens. Do you still use the same music program? I really don't know how to critique funk. To me this is all strange but all funk sounds unique and weird...but that's just my opinion. I think the diversity was a bit lacking. That high pitch sound played a similar pattern throughout however I liked the reverb you used in your instruments. Short review so to be safe I'll give you a 5/5 and 9/10. Bye for now

Triented responds:

Oh hell what do men usually fall in love with? BEER!!! Nah It's a girl.
Seriously Thanks for the review, yes I am still using the same program.
I didnt use review WTF are you talking about. I guess I have a knack for doing good stuff on accident :D.

[Piano Stories (guitar version)]

Intrigued by the title

I love piano so your title really got my attention. The guitar is awesome. Spacy feeling. Just need some lyrics and this would be even better. Is piano stories a name of a song and you just converted all the piano playing to guitar? This has a very dark moody feel to it. Serious stuff. Wish the drums could change up more and a lil more diversity note wise on the guitar. Overall a song worthy of 5/5 vote and a 9/10 review. Question...mike blade and matt blade. Are you guys related? Bye for now

MattBlade responds:

LOL, heh yea were related mikeblade is the more older experienced brother of music, sadly to say im the smarter one, dont tell em i said that though. lol oh yea thanks for ya review its much appreciated.

[Violin Fanfare]

hah teacher made this?

Which program does your teacher use? It's happy and I guess disney like. Feels like it could work in shrek though. Kudos to your teacher. He/she doesn't go diverse enough though. Nevertheless I enjoyed it. Makes my day a little more sunny. I don't want to critique your teacher :) so I'll keep this review short. 5/5 and hmm 10/10. Thanks for sharing this music with us NG even though it isn't yours. :) I guess I should thank the teacher for letting you post it here. Bye for now

ProfessorChaos22 responds:

Actually the challenge was made by my teacher, so it is my own. He did not write it, I did. It was for class, he told me to write a "happy" song instead of the usual dramatic or epic styles I usually write in. So it is my own, his stuff is pretty good as well, but he did not write this. Sorry for the confusion, I would not put his stuff up here.
Thanks anyways

[Silver-Lined Shadow _Collab_]

!!! fast

What another song up already. I can't keep up with the rev :) Piano. Good but a little too loud and makes the speakers fuzz just a tad bit. No biggie though. I wouldn't really call this dance. Maybe classical or at least miscellaneous. I know a techno part is coming soon...waiting for that. So obvious to know what part you did. Yes I know your description already said that you did the techno part but even if you didn't say that I would have guessed right. Your synth choices...typical of F-777. I like your part better cause the sound balance is right on. However I think foxtrott had the harder composition area. Together it worked out. The obvious split between a classical and techno feel made it like a story so good job to the both of you. 5/5 and 9/10 review. Bye for now

F-777 responds:

Thanks for the review and ratings. i apricciate them.

[*Atomic Trigger 3* / ZeRo BaSs]

Waiting waiting...

Wow my computer is running slow. Took forever to start this song. Starts quite epic like. Like the crystal like bells. Quite typical of you to start slow in your songs than go all crazy. This reminds me of burning love a bit. Has quite the similar pattern. Ahh yes transition. Yes you are becoming more diverse each new song you make. Great job. Good...you came back to the main theme keeping things organized. I'm relieved that you didn't use that vox where person says lez go. The ending is cool...like the engine just blew up and starts powering down. You know what? I like the diversity you used. I might actually consider this a music story. Let's all start making music stories. :) Lez go! Bye for now and umm like I said to you already, it's up. Give it a listen. 5/5 and 10/10.

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

thank you MS!

[Theme of Trunks]

Good point

Good point on your profile message. Quite true which is sad. Your song caught my attention because another NG user is called trunks and I thought it was his song. :) Back in the days I loved DBZ but now its not so great. Video game musicians always amaze me with how good their ears are with making a song that replicates the original. This song is not upbeat or action oriented but it does have a crystal like childish sound. I don't mind at all. More mellow tunes on NG is always a plus for me. Anyway back to your profile message. I think everyone knows the facts...many however don't have the willingness which we respect. Bye for now and umm fix the clarity problems. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review.

Jester667 responds:

I noticed the clarity problems only AFTER submitting. >_<.

Thank you so much for the kind words on my music. *bows*

And yes, we all know of the suffering in third world countries, but we're too busy fighting a pointless war.

[Destruction of a Dream]

long load!

Took a while for this song to finally start playing. Must be my computer. The name "Requiem of a Dream" sounds familiar. I know the tune sounds very familiar. This song has a very dark feel to it. Those cries by the choir have a freaky feel. The orchestra like drum hits are also a nice addition. I think you did quite a facelift to the original. Lots of effort must have been put into this. I like how you kept the drums quiet in the background. The leads are definatly the show. Well thought construction. Too bad the song isn't really original like you said. Did you play the piano near the beginning of the song? You can play the piano so that is a very good sign that your future original songs will be great too. Hah...I really like that choir distorted part. Haunting....and take a 5/5. No wonder this song is getting a bunch of revs. It's a good song. 9/10 rev (sorry remix will never get a 10 by me cause of originality but that doesn't mean this remix is bang on great) Bye for now

x-Exodus-X responds:

thank you for the lengthy, complimentitive review! that isnt me on the piano, i used FL keys. im glad the choir got its twisted feeling across, the song was supposed to be dark and hopeless. i also get what you mean about the originality, and i understand the 9/10. my next song is coming nicely, i think you all will like it! going to check out your page now.

[Neon Grudge]

Hi rev.

Eh this tune sounds familiar. It's familiar because I played a tune similar (of course not exactly the same) to this for fun at home. Never did make it a actual song on NG but brings back memories. Your going crazy over the fuzziness. The bass is good. Video game music more than techno in my opinion. It could fit in one of those rpg take turn battle scenes. I think you could have changed up the drums. Maybe less fuzz on the bass. The high pitch sound is what gave me the video game impression. Sounds so 16 bit....or 8 bit. I can't tell difference between 16 bit stuff and 8 bit sounds. In conclusion you get a 5 by me and a 9/10. Quite good for only a 2nd song on NG. Bye for now

Neon-Crepth responds:

thx for the review man. i appreciate all of what you had to say. in retrospect i see what everyone was saying about...well everything. got any new songs?...ill check em out.

-crepth

[Gaiden -]

Fun song

First off...your other song for a guy in iraq. There is a guy on NG called quickshot-x who is from iraq. You should pm him to listen to that song. Something tells me that your related or friends with wolf tech. :) You guys use identical programs right? Alot of these sounds I have heard (I wonder why :)), but since first time from you..I will pretend all these pads and synths are completely original. This song has a hectic feel to it. Reminds me of how hectic ninga gaiden black can be. A few fuzzy parts. Maybe a filter on the trancy like synth could have fixed that. In one point of the song it sounds like a mario video game. It changes up quite a bit so that's really nice for a trance song. You may be the first I have heard so far on NG that makes diverse trance. I like the special effects to. Overall a good song but not quite amazing trance stuff compared to immune and those other top trancer producers on NG. 9/10 and I will raise your score. Bye for now

SilverSanguis responds:

I will, thanks. Diverse tracks, eh? Mario? If that's what you heard, then that's pretty cool. Yeah, Wolf-tech and I have the same program, and he's why I tried a track like this. I wanted it more diverse and it looks like it worked. Yet, I'm new to the style and I thought it seemed a little shallow. But that's why they invented practice!!! I might do more, idk, but for now, thanks for the review, hope to hear more too!!

[Love dont let me go remix]

Eh....

I guess ppl really have a grudge against your dance music. Already two low dance scores and you just submitted the other one yesterday. Did you start making this song a while back? It looks like you made this song in 1 day which doesn't leave much room for effort. However I could be wrong and you were just stockpiling on songs submitting them all quickly now. I have no clue what the vox is saying. The guitars are a nice addition. I think you basically play the same pattern throughout the entire song. Adding a new sound on top of the guitars and plays the exact same rhythm does not count as diversity. I got bored halfway through. I will assume you spent weeks making this song so I'll give you a good score. Next time really work on the diversity. This can be made by just simply playing a couple of notes and looping it for the entire song. Still a impressive attempt for only your 4th dance attempt? Bye for now

DJ-Izeales responds:

Its a good thing that your honest, i agree sum ppl h8 my trx,that heaven track isnt even that bad, now its my worst track?? anyways, the vocals are saying "Dancing and Crying" Havent u hear this track? Its called "David Guetta-Love Don't Let Me Go"