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[Fairy Wings PT2]

Hard techno

I like how you start with this cool rhythm. Also has that mysterious flavour with that sweep pad you use (or did you put massive reverb on it?) In comes the bass. Oh great. Just found out that I'm reviewing your part 2 song before part 1. I am assuming Lacie is your gf. She likes this kind of music? I think you got the epic feeling going on, but I don't see much diversity at the start. You add some new stuff at the end of the song, but I was expecting that new transition part to be longer than just 1 second. I understand that trance is supposed to repeat so I always give trance a 10/10 diversity . I wish I could make synths as cool as this song. I guess the song is calm whenever the hard techno sound is not there. To tell you the truth, I'm not sure why I'm reviewing this song. If your gf likes it than who cares what critique I tell you. So I'm assuming your gf loved this song so hey I guess I loved it too. :) Time to review your part 1 of fairy wings. Bye for now

DoobyTimePiece responds:

well ill tell you....if your making snynths you need disinence about 50 percent of the time or a lot of browsing through library's.

[Chemical Six]

Umm

Is some baby crying in the background? Did someone fart? Okay I guess it isn't a baby crying or farting. It's just a whiny synth and you making those farting sounds with your mouth. Add some nature effects and yes we got a really messed up song. Okay now I can sense the reason why you named it chemical...not sure about the six though. The chemical synths sound lonely. Where are the drums? Where are the harmonies? Finally the drums come in. Same stuff again and again. A rapid surprise transition back into the whiny synths. You got some strange music taste. Your originality score is going to be 10/10 for sure. Okay so nice beat when the drums come in, but that whiny synth really gets annoying. So a 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now

Jimbobsthebest responds:

Yeah my taste in music is very weird I suppose. I only submit the stuff to newgrounds that I'm not particularly pleased with. Although that said this is the sort of music I tend to put on at around 6 in the morning after a rave or something. Very minimal. Cheers for the review man, always nice to get feedback.

James

[{Show Me The Way}]

Uhh where you come from?

Okay so your song is no where on the top 10 dance list. Fast forward to blammer day (every tuesday) and viola your near the top of the list. How you do that? Magic I guess. Is this a remix? You got the techno feel going well. Oh here comes the hard bass. Uh oh Rave. Nice job implementing the piano to your song. Maybe my headphones suck, but I'm hearing some fuzzies. Did you do that intentionally? I think your song is happy and dark music. A two in one package. :) Your best part of the song is the piano. Where are the harmonies? Get some harmonies in your next song and use some crazy synths like you used in this song and we got ourselves a master___ piece. So well whatever happened with your score shooting through the roof of of a sudden, will I'm going to shoot it up 1 more notch. I win :)

DaGrahamCraka responds:

lol thanks for the nice review. i swear i didnt 0 everybody either. promise.

[First submission]

And your first review

I like the loop except for where those rapid claps happen near the end of it. Took you a while to finally submit your first audio. Expand on this one and it can be some song that I never heard before on NG. Quite an original idea you got going here. Loops usually don't get a high score by me so a 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now

Subterfuger13 responds:

yeah it realy wasnt a loop
and the claps did make it anoyying as
the end or a trancending part of the song. ill work on it.

[Tiny Fire on the Mountain Jam]

First time reviewing jazz

I just finished doing jazz dance in my dancing class in school. So I'm like why not listen to some jazz music. Yours was top on the list so I choose your song. Has that jazzy feel but the song is soo short. I like the composition. Well done and a good mixture of instruments. Is that a recording of you playing? Why did you call it tiny fire on the mountain jam? Okay so a overall good one. Longer will make it better so 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. Bye for now

SevereDementia responds:

Its called Tiny fire on the mountain jam because its from Fire on the Mountain - The Grateful Dead =) I just did my ow little jam. Seasons has one too, but I dont think he tried as hard.

[Brahms: Raphsody in B Minor]

Well sure

This is not really your stuff. I have heard brahms songs before and they are good, but not my fav. Great job playing the piano, but I thought NG audio portal was for your own music? I don't know how to grade you for this song. It really isn't a remix, but a replica of the original. Hmm. Okay well I'll still vote you a 5, but my review may be a bit more critical. So effort is good, but the effort to make a new song is really not there. Originality...well the song has already been made so not really original. Diversity..well brahms is an amazing composer so he deserves the diversity score to be off the charts. Clarity. You got a good microphone to record your music. Overall a 8/10. Keep the classicals coming. You already have more talent than most of the NG artist here. However, I think my sister and I played this song when we were still in piano lessons. I quit though. Hated memorizing other peoples' music. Bye for now

DaveTheMusicMan responds:

Hmm...that was my concern...the whole "This is only a recording" thing...

I noticed winterwind posted a recording of his a while ago, so I thought "What the heck? I spent so long learning this, why not?" I agree that reviewing this kinda thing is hard...lol...so just do what winterwind did and give all 10s! XD

[*- Revelation -*]

LOl your joking?

Well you made me listen to your song 4 times now!!! I'm also a bit full on the hot chocolate and cookies. Do I get something else :) Umm this song isn't original anymore. I think it will be funny messing with ppl who don't know how many versions of this song you have. Let's make four revelations in the top 10 dance section. Wait maybe 3 cause your original gots a 3.5/5. Oh nice title variation. 2 stars now instead of 1 on both sides of revelation. Okay I don't see much of a difference between the supposedly final version and the umm final version type 2. LOL Funny how ppl are still downloading all your revelation songs. How do you do it? I bet you'll get people downloading all your revelation songs even if you posted 10 versions. I'm not downloading this one. I already downloaded your "OTHER" ones. I don't need more revelation. So I hope this is my last review for revelation and glad you finally submitted the song. I guess submitting a song on NG is harder than making a song lol. Not making fun of you. Just kidding around. Nothing much else to say. Bye for now Oh did you see your diversity score. Now it is 9 Later dude

Jebbal responds:

Okay, here's what happened! I save the song as an mp3 in FL Studio everytime I add anything new, so I have about 20 Revelations on my computer. I named them all like "Revelation new" "Revelation Newer" "Revelation New Version" "Revelation New Sound" lol So can you see how I accidentally uploaded the wrong one? The file I uploaded under "*-Revelation-*(Final Version)" was an older save I had, and I meant to upload the most recent one.

I've double checked, and this time I DID upload the right file, and I will NOT be uploading another version of Revelation. It's over. On to the next song. ;)

Thanks for writing yet another review lol

Hmmmm... have a pancake and a Sprite Spritzer. xD

[Radiant Sunshine (ep)]

review

somethings wrong with this song. No sound. Wait. Don't worry about your grade. I'm not dumb like some other people who give a 0. I will ddl the song and it will work. Ahh there we go. I hear stuff. That is some crazy fuzzy synth sound you have. Nevermind. The next synth is even more weird. I see you managed to have 2 harmonies going. Wow, you already matched the skill level of most NG artist. How long have you been playing piano or any instrument? You seem to understand the basics in composing more difficult songs. Luckily you know how to create some funky synths sounds which I suck in so it keeps the interest going. You got quite a bit of diversity going on. I just wished you transitioned into the new stuff faster so I wouldn't hear the same stuff for a good 30 secs. Other than that, I'm giving you a good score cause you utilized some of your musician instincts which I'm so glad you have some unlike...well I stop there. Okay so a 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. You said some more are coming out soon. I'll take a listen to those too whenever they come out. Bye for now

DoobyTimePiece responds:

yah i know i don't know what the hell happened but at least the download works.
i played the trombone for 5-6 years and 4 years of tuba 1 year music theory.

[LinkinPark:Crawling(acous]

Review

Must be a remix since you said linkin park. Did you play that on the piano? Pretty good but not sure if you already have the sheet music and your just playing it with a microphone on you. You got some good piano skills which is rare to see on NG so you know your stuff. If you made this song rather than linkin park that would make this song amazing. I'm going to give you a 9/10 review and a 5/5 voting for your piano talent. Okay bye for now.

Gorekiller responds:

Hehehe ^^! Thank you ! YEp, I've play it on the piano, used a microphone and I've done it by ear, not with a sheet music. Also thanks for apreciatting the way I play the piano ! :)