Interesting start
I missed what they were saying at the start of the song. Why the title forgot me? You mastered your song well, but it isn't diverse enough and that vox? is not fitting with the song. Has that mood in a video game where you visit the town square fair in the olden times. What is the vox saying? Please tell me. So umm has a bit of a happy feel to it which I like. Overall a 5/5 voting and a 9/10 review. Bye for now
Google Fairuz, classical Arab singer. I sampled her up to say, "They forgot me" (in Arabic).
Some happy stuff.
Can't believe your song hasn't been reviewed yet. Lol your vox is soo cheesy that it makes me feel happy. Good beat and a song for little children for sure. Happy tunes always !!! 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. No suggestions... cutesy music. Love it. Bye for now
Erm, I hope you're being ironical with the "song for little children" statement, since the lyrics are... Well, obscene. :D
It was just intended to be an energetic gut laugh of a song, not much else.
Industrial review
Ohh starts off with the whole panning thing going on. You have recently been making a whole bunch of industrial. Is that your favorite genre now? Weird distortion you got in one of your synths. Woah the song changes mood soo fast with those sweeping synths. I like it. I didn't like when you combined all the instruments together, but than again I'm not a big industrial fan. However, I'm not biased because of that. You got the whole working in a factory with huge gears circling around so I think you did a good job herel So umm suggestions for improvements? Well I'm not sure. I don't know enough about what makes a good industrial song. For all I know, maybe this is the best industrial song in the world. :) So I treat it like that and give you 10/10 review and 5/5 review. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Evil tuesday is coming!!! Blammer day :( Bye for now
haha. evil tuesday. :)
anyways, thanks for the review. i guess i've always had trouble choosing a category for the things i make, but with my newer stuff industrial is the best fit i can think of. so its not so much a matter of my favorite genre, as much a matter of how im composing at a certain point. i also really like the mood change, so thanks for noticing that. i'll be sure to check out your song in a bit, 'cos i cant at this moment. but hopefully by tommorow :).
so thanks again for the listen and the review!
Gate way 4
Making a series I see. Not bad. Starts dancy a bit. Your songs are unique because you always surprise me when you buildup your songs. They never go where I'm anticipating them to go. Original factor is high. Good clapping loop but I think it is a bit too overpowering over the other synths. It seems that the clapping loop is the show in this song rather than your composed stuff. This song is a gentle trance compared to other trances on NG. I like your style better. So umm fix up on your next song the suggestions I made and you get a 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" in miscellaneous section. (Note it is a mellow tune so if you hate that style than don't review or vote then) Okay bye for now
Thanks 4 ur reveiw and suggestions and when i was making the clap loops i was first experinmenting with them. Now i hav it under control.
Blues
Have not heard blues for a while. Good rhythm and that can't be you playing the saxophone cause that is crazy good stuff. This is your own composition using your music program right? Not someone else's music I hope. Wow you didn't sleep for 2 days to make this song. Lots of effort and sacrifice for us NG ppl. Your too kind. To repay for your act of kindness to me you get a 10/10 review and 5/5 review. Not much I can sayto improve this so good job.
I actualy got a HUGE loop collection by buying it online. The Saxaphone (not a trumpet) was made of like 30 something odd loops for this one.
Umm wait huh?
Okay so song is fuzzing the whole time through. Meh I guess I have to download your song to listen to it. Give me some seconds.....Okay listening now. Umm what is so great about rucklo? He is just a guy like the rest of us on NG. You got a comedy factor with the phone call. Umm yes so umm of course Rucklo is going to give you 10/10 review for this song. Your hero worshipping him. :) Umm i don't know how great this Rucklo is. Maybe he is king in some foreign country...lol Okay so umm well good guitar playing at least. Your already a better musician than half the people on NG. Your vox though sucks, but I get the idea you did that on purpose. So umm why not 5/5 voting. Go Rucklo...whoever you are.
Yeah, it was off the top of my head, so you have to improvise on the go. I'm glad you at least seemed to like it. I do need to work on my voice though. I'm not a singing kind of guy XD
Say..goofing off..not bad
For just messing around with your music program...not a bad job at all. Has a nice calm beat to it and that cool effect where the sound switchs from speaker to speaker in a circle. What made you get into making audios now? This song is like a loop to me, but I give trance and techno all diversity of 10/10 because that is one of their properties. So improvements? For your 2nd song a nice job. Maybe make a buildup (yeah you got a mini one at the start, but a bigger one) and add some more synths and harmonies. If your intention was to keep song calm than I guess my advise is useless. I see you reviewed some of my songs but your reviewing my sucky songs when I only had garageband 3. Can you review and vote for my newest song "carnaval charMS" please? Blammer tuesday is coming so I need the votes quickly. My song already got blammed once. So 5/5 voting to you raising your score from 0/5 to 5/5. Bye for now.
i dont realy have an intending genre 4 my audioz, i just want it 3 be cool.
Deja vu?
Huh this sound familiar to your 1st dance song. Wait a sec...what's going on here? DId you remix this song to make that dance song of yours? Well some differences, but really only the special effects. Umm running out of music ideas? :) Two songs almost identical so umm yeah uhh identical scores I guess. Okay see my other review for more detail. Oh guessed D major in the dance song, but just a guess so could be in C major, G major, etc. Just keep the sharps and flats in check with your key in the dance song. Okay bye for now
Thanks for the review.
Yeah, this was kind of a remix of Ravin' Love. But more of a detication to my dad.
I'm not that savvy with music, so you'll have to deal with that.
dance review
Well its a good first effort for dance. Umm are you playing DDDDDD CCCCCCC BBBBBBB CCCCCCC AT THE START? Okay so good so far but your next rhythm pattern sounds like in the minor key which doesn't belong. I could be wrong, but usually if you start song in major key, you should remain in major key. So what key did you use to make this song? D major? If so all the F and C should be the only ones sharped or something won't fit. So I guess when it is in the major kind of tune than it sounds dancy. Very repetitive too but since your first than 5/5 voting and well 10/10 review. Can you review and vote for my new track called "carnaval charMS". It is not a dance song nor any genre thus miscellaneous. Mellow song too so umm thanks. Bye for now.
Thanks for the review!
-For the intro, I accually went with DFEF 4 times, then CFEF 4 times, BFEF 4 times and CFEF 4 times.
-I didn't really use a key, I just went with notes that sounded good together.
Review of remix
Okay this sounds different from the first one. Now I hear some familiar stuff. Battle scene is comoing. So what changed this song from classical to miscellaneous? Adventure sounding. Not really a battle this team...more of a lets go and look for treasure or explore new places kind of feel. Has a bit of battle scenes, not as much. To make this song in 4 hours is really fast. You obviously knew what you were doing when making this song. So umm still good song so 10/10 and 5/5 voting. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS". Mellow song for sure. Hope you like it.
Yeah, I accidentally uploaded it in the Misc. section. It is meant to be in the Classical genre but nevermind.
And yeah, I hear ya, it certainly isn't battle-ish but I agree it at least sounds adventurous. I think I screwed up the volumes though... oh well.
Thanks for your review, I'll go take a listen to your "carnaval charMS" now :)
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