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[Beat is Coming RMX]

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I recognize the vox. Yeah might not be the same words I think but same tone. Umm I think if you used a real person voice instead of that masked altered voice. I sometimes can't hear what she? is saying. A good background rhythm though. There is one part of the song where the fuzzies really start coming. Not sure why you dropped the volume down and built up. Usually the vox remains loud throughout a pop song so we can hear what the voice is saying. At least your song has vox which adds a originality factor on NG. So umm 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. So those are my suggestions to keep in mind for your next song. Since you put hard work into this song you get 10/10 effort. Okay bye for now.

EchozAurora responds:

I can hear the words... but it might be these headphones...
Well, I plan to make more like this in the future, so I'll keep those ideas in mind.

[Universe City]

EON ignores us :(

Respond to your reviews please !!!!!!! Okay so good buildup and nice transition. Huh? Did I hear people? Choir pad yah. I love that. Piano too!!!! Lol the guys yelling is weird. I'm getting a bit bored with the same drum pattern and that choir pad. Something new please. You return back to your initial pattern like the one you did after the first transition. Now you just have the men yelling. Yeah the song is long and doesn't seem to be diverse this time. You know what I notice about all your euphoria songs. You always hold onto one note for so long. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh sound for a long time. Lol Dude how long is this song? Put this in trance. So overall started awesome but after I heard the same stuff over and over again I got bored. So a 5/5 voting but a 9/10 review. Respond to my review this time !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EON responds:

OMG fine I'll respond to your review!! When have I not responded before? I do get a lot of them so I can't answer them ALL y'know...

Anyway, this song is 4:48, I actually had to cut the quality to keep it under 4M this time. I'm surprised you didn't find it as diverse as the others, I tried to make it as varied as possible. Didn't you notice the completely random funky break in the middle? And what did you mean about notes help too long?
Eh, anyway, thanks for the review and vote. It's nice when people actually give me constructed criticism occasionally.

[Anny is washing]

Reviewing

Remix you say. Umm the stuff you composed before the actual latvia song comes in doesn't match. I love this cutesy song. I don't understand latin though. Yeah, there isn't a good connection in this song. Oh well....since your first submission on NG I'll be extra nice and give you a 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Make clearer transitions that actually connect in your 2nd song. Bye for now

Fantomass responds:

Thank you!

[Disco to techno pt2]

Part 2 review

Okay it connects nicely with part 1. I think I hear keyboard? Not sure if that is keyboard. Here comes the hard bass. Yeah like that. Alien synths now. Yeah that could be the techno part. I like how you add that pattern with the keyboard near the end of the song. You should have put this song in trance cause a little too long to be in a dance song. Your song got blammed already so I'll 5/5 it. So my suggestions are should be in trance section. The base pattern gets a bit repetitive. Make song shorter. So 10/10 review. You said there was a song I would like in one of my reviews. I'll check it out right now. Bye for now

DoobyTimePiece responds:

cool cool i personally think this song is a pile of crap. im trying to get new software so this wont happen.

[{dj-N} Synful Sub]

Review time

Hey your song has 4/5 already. Guess someone doesn't like the piano. If you see my reviews about any trance song that implements piano...well originality is guaranteed 10/10. Oh did I mention that piano is my favorite instrument. Oh did I also mention that trance and techno I always give diversity 10 because they are supposed to repeat. Some people actually don't know that. So I'm going into your song on a very positive note. Not sure why you called it synful sub. Does it have to do with a submarine (navy vessel) or subway? (the sandwich store) :) So you obvious spent time mastering those piano skills. Not many people on NG will notice it,but playing piano like this is artistic and the only way that music companies will ever accept music. There are tons of songs on NG that use such basic patterns such as c a f g ......c a f d..... c e f g.... etc. and that is soo old and basic. Music companies aren't stupid to start taking ppl songs that takes that simple effort. So yes you didn't use as crazy effects as other musicians on NG, but you still made a great song with the primitive piano instrument and that takes a lot of effort. I guess the person who gave you a really low score (since it looks like your song got 5ived by your previous reviews meaning someone must have gave you a 1/5 or 0/5) does not know what makes real music that requires effort and just likes to listen to music that abuses special effects. I'm glad you are not one of the guys who thinks good music = whoever can utilize their music program the best. The composition is what makes good music. So you know what I'm giving you? Heck must I really tell you. Obvious. Keep making songs like this that take REAL effort. You got REAL talent. Bye for now

dj-Nate responds:

Wow man, I'm seriously at a loss for words; that was one of the best reviews I've gotten. Thanks ALOT for that.

[The Gamma Dimension]

I review right away

Weird user name you got there. You said you were new with FL so I'll be extra nice on review. Pretty good effort being new to FL. Doesn't seem dancy enough to get me moving. Maybe add some drums through whole song instead of taking them away in some parts. Also add some more harmonies and buildup sections. So 5/5 voting keeping your score at 5 until blammer day tuesday and umm 9/10 review. Can you review and VOTE for my song "carnaval charMS" please. I need more votes too before tuesday :)

mistahmoo responds:

Lol yeah, it is a tad weird isnt it. Long story actually, it started as an inside joke. Thanks for the review, I'll review that right now :D

[{dj-N} Sidechaining Test]

Hello again

Can't wait till your 50th song comes. PM me when it comes out or I might forget!!!!! Hey are you trying to make all the other trance artists feel bad? Not serious? It already is just as good as other good trance songs. Not quite at the "great" level yet but a dancy feeling for sure. So umm 5/5 voting. Suggestions.....PM me when you make your 50th song :) 2nd be more serious!!! 3rdly Review and VOTE for my happy song "carnaval charMS" before the blammer comes on tuesday 4th Vote quickly before its too late 5th PM me when you make your 50th song 6th Repeat the 5th step again. Bye for now.

dj-Nate responds:

It shall be done! The song is about 50% complete ish.

[DreamGate -|- Don't Stop]

So many songs with the word gate in it

Lol lots of songs seem to have the word "gate in it" Happy tune. Awesome awesome awesome. I love this kind of music. If you want people to review you song make a public profile. It makes it alot easier to access your music page. So a 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Maybe fix the timing issue with the deep bass sound. Can you review and vote for my happy song "carnaval charMS" please oh and make more happy tunes cause they are the best.

DreamGate responds:

yep i think you're right ^^, glad you liked it :) i will check your stuff out right away (= thx for the rev

[Stairway to Heaven (c.s)]

Review

First question...did you make this song from scratch? 2nd question....how did you make that guitar sound like olden music? Okay so a peaceful baroque song. I like it, nothing wrong with it. You said you spent a looooooonnnnnng time making this song and the result is excellent. So a 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Oh wear headphones when listening to it.

Chaoticstyle responds:

yes i did make it from scratch

[-=Rainhailer=- My Heaven]

Review

Looks like you already got some advice from your previous review. Not sure how this fits in hip hop modern cause sounds kinda happy. I have advice to give you. Make a public profile so we can access your songs easier. So this song is a bit repetitive and doesn't seem that hard to make. You said you were having trouble with Fruity loops. Are you new to using the program? Everything takes time to learn so you will soon be able to master FL. So other suggestions are make song more busy...more harmonies. So a 5/5 vote to keep your score at the current 5/5 and a 8/10 review. Can you review and vote for my song "carnaval charMS" please. Wear HEADPHONES when listening to song. Okay bye for now

Rainhailer responds:

yes i am new to fruity loop!
thanks for the advice.