Okay lets see how this goes
Definitely techno. Lots of distortion. I'm hearing some really crazy stuff. What's with adding the dubbing effect on the song so they sound like alvin and the chipmunks? I like your choice of synths, but I'm a bit confused where the song is going. It kinda end quickly rather than fade out. I'm going to give you a 8/10 review and a 5/5 voting but maybe putting some order to your song cause it seems chaotic. Bye for now
thanks for the advice just finshed 2 songs i think their better please tell me wat u think of 'um
Review # 1
Well I haven't heard your other version yet, but I will after this review. Fits the sorrow mood. A good composition with the piano. Not much to say since a very short loop you made. Umm so you should use this to make a full length song. 8/10 review and 5/5 voting.
I probly wont be turnin my "A Moment Of Sorrow" loops into full length songs...
but since ima be doin classical for the next while Ill do my best to get at least one full length melancholy song out thur. (but right now im workin on a chilled piece. sumthin lighter n happier)
thx for the review.
K-Dm
so this is your demo version?
Like the hard synth sounds. Your already done like 30 % of the song. Now add the other 70% and you got yourself a seriously nice song. A rare short review by me so a 8/10 review and 5/5 voting. Are you playing C A F G over and over again with the alteration of CBC on each of the notes? Eg DCCC ACCBBC FCCBBC GCCBBC OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT? Not sure since you put some distortion and modulation so hard to pick out. Okay bye for now
ye i guess you could call it demo, but its more testing the water of the NG music scene. ive never submitted before and i might just get mercilessly blammed lol. im gonna submit a classical piecec tomorow, which i hav been wurkin on 4 ages. hopefully dat wil b sucessful.
ehh you german?
I'm not sure what you mean by lied...but I learned in music class that lied means song and usually means a song played with the piano. I didn't hear any piano. Your song has nice atmosphery feel and you buildup on the stuff too. One part of the song you end abruptly. That brief silence added anticipation factor but also ackward too. You definantly are the skyflyer. Just maintain the business instead of the frequent silence breaks. I like your clap loop by the way. Here is your 9/10 review and 5/5 review. Oh also maybe a bit more diversity on leading synth. Your background support is great though. Flying out. Bye
Thanks. Yes, i'm german.
Review time
Your title interested me to listen to your song. Starts with that nice sound. In comes the organ. What does MG2 stand for? Now the song gets really moving. Well done buildup. Your bass is a bit too quite. You got the whole alien ufo kind of synth sound. Your song is basically a huge buildup from start to finish. It's a bit repetitive (but you keep adding something new to the buildup. I got tired of hearing that 1st synth over and over again) and the buildup can only do soo much to keep my attention. Great special effects so I'm going to give you a 10/10 on review. Maybe enter into a new rhythm (talking about that 1st synth). Your choice of synths is fantastic. Try to make your fade out at end of song more gradual rather than very quick. So also a 5/5 voting. Can you review my song "Final showdown" please and thanks. Bye for now
Thanx, MG2 Stands for Music Generator 2,
it was a sampling program made by mtv for the playstation line up but stay tuned for
more kick ass stuff.
Sweet
Probably surprised how fast I reviewed your song. I know you just submitted it, but I love to review like crazy. Review addict :) You have not made a song for a very long time. 3 months vacation? This song has a nice happy beat. Very upbeat. Love the drums and that happy synth. The low synth you used sounds kinda fuzzy. Is that an organ? I wish you always had the drums going cause without them, it sounds bland. I'm going give you a boost of confidence to start your music making after a 3month hibernation. Review my song "Final showdown" please and thankyou. Bye for now
thanks, as of the vacation, i killed, the unkilled my computer. anyway, i dont know what it was, i guess an organ. and sure, ill review it ..
thanks
And your first review
My first time also grading industrial. First off glad your starting to make music for NG. Not sure if you just started making music too, but this first track doesn't sound like your a newbie to music making. I don't really know what industrial is, but I think I can figure it out after listening to this. I like your separate tunes, but they kinda drag on for too long. I love the buildup though. I think your timing was off in one section of the song. Maybe I'm imagining it...My suggestions is make song less repetitive, maybe fix timings, and continue to make more music. Since your 1st ever submission, I like to start ppl off in a positive mood so 10/10 review and 5/5 voting. Can you review my song "Final showdown" please? Thanks
No, i've been at Sony Acid Pro 6.0 for quite some time now. I'm very picky about what loops I use, it was a long process believe it or not. Thanks for the review. :)
fun
You like math? Your crazy..just kidding. Seems like I'm at a concert and the crowd is cheering like crazy. A bit too long on that part but you add some new stuff and lol you bring in the crowd again. Are you imagining yourself as the DJ and everyone is cheering you on or something? I understand you had tons of fun with this one. Glad you enjoyed it and well I enjoyed it but probably more for the humurous factor. So 11/10 on the fun factor scale and a 9/10 review. 5/5 voting too. Suggestions is don't abuse the crowd cheering loop. Takes the seriousness of the song away. Maybe also add some more harder background support besides the very light drum beat I hear. Can you review my song "Final showdown" please. Funny how I told you to have a harder background cause my song fails to do that too. Thanks
Thanks for the tips. I've been hearing that the crowd is either too much, should be removed, or cut back a bit, so i think I may just take it out of the song completely. Keep an eye out for the final version, thanks again!
Review
There will always be some ppl that like your music. Also will be ppl that will hate your music no matter how good you make it. I am one more person that likes your music...well this song at least. I have not listened to your other songs. I'm having a hard time deciphering the difference between this techno song and trance? Almost similar. Did you play that leading synth with the keyboard? That is some pretty fast playing. Nice tune and happy at the same time. Here is a fat 5/5. Love the delay you put on the synths. Review my song "Final showdown" please? Thanks. Later
To be honest, I'm not completely sure if this should be Techno or Trance either, they're both basically the same, right?
Thanks for the comment and I'll check out your song.
Yes a long time
Glad your back to making music. Those are some great drums you got going. The techno kind of digital sound you add really give me the chaos feeling. I know that this genre is simply drum and bass, but your song seems kind of empty. I like the ambulence sound though. Good title. I'm going to give you a 10/10 review (since I don't know much about drum N bass so I don't want to risk making stupid judgments on you) and a 5/5 voting. Can you sample my "Final showdown" song please? Thanks
I never stopped making music!! I just got tired of submitting music on Newgrounds and not getting any feedback on reviews. I've been real busy with my band and stuff, and I want to focus more on guitar right now, but I definitely have not abandoned making music on my PC. Oh and i'll definitely check your stuff out as well.
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