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[Orchestral Thing]

I know more bout classical

For sure a suspense scene. Those quick violins really bring out the mood along with the cymbal crashes. I know alot more bout classical than trance and techno so yah. :) You said you were just doing an experimental with this song from your previous review. I really think you should finish this....why stop a good thing? Most of the song is great. I agree with some of the previous reviewer advice to you except the reverb. I like the sharp notes and I guess the unflowing quality. Anyway if you do continue to make this a full song than that's good. You don't make too many classicals so this is quite impressive skill you got here. Multi-talented in many genres. I can only do dance :( . Oh well so 5/5 and 10. Bye for now

DaGrahamCraka responds:

thank you for teh nice review and 5zzz!

:D

[-SpaceWalker-]

Space music I like

I can say that because I finished a space song too quite but probably won't submit it for a while. Hard to tell what the guy is saying but the masking sounds cool. The lonely space...well done on that part. My knowledge about techno is limited but I'll try my best to give you suggestions. So I think this song is more artistic...like music that's great to hear but not to buy. It's quite peaceful. Does that description fall in "Indie" ? Not sure myself what indie is. :) The trip is quite long so I guess to apply to your description...I did go too far. Your space attempt is much better than mine. I actually don't have any suggestions at the top of my head. Sure I would like some crazy stuff, but I know you intentionally wanted the space feel so that suggestion is out the window. Overall 5/5 and 10/10. Bye for now

[Tear Drop]

Uh oh that don't sound so good

Well I'm sorry to hear to hear the new about this Becca person. You made a song for her. That's nice of you. I'm sure she would have liked this. I can sense why you chose this title. The modulation and delay you put on that synth sounds like little driplets. I would say that this song loops. I wouldn't suggest transitioning into happy stuff because of your current personal life, but maybe shift to a different type of sorrow mood. So a 5/5 and 10/10. GL with your situation and I'm gone. Bye for now.

[The Heartbeat of Rage]

Classic

Sorry I'm not a final fantasy fan. However I think you did a good job remixing this song. Do you just by ear play the notes replicating the original song? If so you got a good ear to come up with this. You did a great job in mastering this track. Everything sounds so clear and the panning going on is nice too. The only problem is the fade out. Sure its a good way to end a song but the easy way out. If you could make a ending that well ends instead of just drowns out then that would be better. Okay so 5/5 and 9/10 review. Bye for now

Charem responds:

Thanks for the review. =3 Yes, I did this by memory, more or less. I wanted to get the main instruments almost identical to the original game's, but then had fun updating the other portion.

I'm not good at endings, unfortunately, so hence the fade-out. I agree, it's not the best method of ending a tune, and perhaps it's something I should work on. =3

[Unstoppable -Preview-]

That trancy bass remind of of another song

I heard that trancy synth sound and rhythm in another trance song. Can't think of it at the moment. I enjoy the piano playing. Too bad it is playing the exact same notes as the trancy synth. You could change the harmonies instead of all 3 playing the same notes. If they aren't (maybe my ears just suck today) than you could at least change the rhythm of each. I'm sure your gonna finish this song up and I think you should too. Has some nice pads and the beat in jumpy. So that is my suggestion. Add some variety and it will be better. 5/5 and 9/10 rev. Bye for now

Mataro responds:

I plan to add another real melody in there. But the three lead instruments (piano, synth, and saw) are playing similiar melodies so that they compliment eachother. ^^

I need to fiddle around with the bass a bit more.. I didn't know this melody was similiar to another trance song.. But I'm not surprised, there are plenty of 'em out there :P

And the drums need some fine-tuning. But other than that, I'm pretty hapy with it's direction.. I really like the piano myself. Thanks a lot for the review Music-story! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! ^^

[Pulstate - Oxygen (Original)]

Step one complete

So is this a remix or your complete new stuff. Anyway I think that's really cool you got signed. I hope some of my reviews helped you out in improving leading to getting signed. This song reminds me of that song...."quasar" Yeah alot different tune but the atmospheric spacy mood is similar. So are you going to continue putting music on AP or does the company you sign with restrict you from sharing with us? As always you are a good remix artist...am still waiting for you to show me how great of a trance artist (non remix) you can be. Hope your having a blast with your new job. May I ask which company signed you or is that too personal of a question? Sorry if it is. Okay so suggestion is quicker transition into the new stuff. Kinda drags on for a bit, but if this is a remix I guess that isn't your fault. Okay that's it. Everything else seems in the right place. Congrats again and maybe down the road you will be a dj at the hot spots in ireland. Bye for now

Pulstate responds:

Hey mate, thanks for the review first of all.

This is 100% original, and the label that signed me are called, '' Lightning Sunset Records. ''

This is the clubedit, the radioedit gets to the point faster, and i knew that was a problem, but you have to have repetitive long tracks too, and these are the only tracks my label permits me to submit.

And . . .

Yes i will keep submitting music here, but only 96 KPS from now on.

Time to make money!

+ Don't forget, i'll be one of the best trance producers ever too, just be patient!

:)

[Receipt for Murder]

I heard your one of the best heavy metal artists

On NG that is. The rumours didn't lie this time. You got some awesome skill in this genre. I haven't reviewed many heavy metal songs before cause I thought they weren't that good until I listened to bad man incorporated (I think that's how you spell his alias name) heavy metal tunes and I'm like wow. Heavy metal artists got some mad skills. Now I enjoy listening to heavy metal. Loving the guitars. What's wrong with this song? Nothing, it's just a crazy diverse tune. Okay I guess lyrics would have made it a notch better. Oh well. 5/5 and a well deserved spot on the a-bot list. The a-bot list isn't so dumb anymore. It's beginning to recognize good songs. Bye for now.

[[|-Shame-|]]

Hey nice getting top spot

This is one of your better songs. I like the fast stuff going on with the drums. The pad or synth you use sounds almost haunting. Nice choice. Only suggestion would be not to make this song loop. It's quite repetitive, but nonetheless I enjoyed it. You get my 5/5 and 9/10. Bye for now

[1-24-07]

Title?

Umm january 24 2007....(looks at date you submitted this song...hmmm april 28 2007 not matching) Okay so to your song. This gots some nice synths. Lots of stuff is going on. Wow this is some great stuff. I sense a few pattern changes throughout. Sure some parts repeat but not a biggie. You keep changing one thing quickly that it never gets bored. Kudos for a fine job. Love the bass in that one section of the song. I also like that atmosphery sound. You gotta make more dance music. Forget the other genres and make more dance. :) 5/5 and 10/10. Bye for now.

mig297 responds:

Awesome, thanks for the feedback, i value the trickle of it i get. As for the name, i always seem to have issues coming up with a decent title for a track, so i just uploaded it and titled it as the day it was created. On the flipcyde tho, what would you name this track? just curious. And thanks again for the feedback....

[icantdance]

okay then

The fade in is nice. I think one of your pads is a little too loud which causes the speakers to fuzz a tad bit. Maybe my speakers just suck. :) This song sounds familiar. I heard a tune like this in a video game. Anyway still cool stuff. I love the rhythm of the climax section. So atmosphery and just plain jumpy. :( Wish it could be longer. How did ppl miss this dance song? Well I'm fiving this song and heck since I liked the climax soo much I'll give you a 10/10 review. Just make sure to master your track better. I suck at mastering so I'm like a hippocrite, but we can both help eachother right? Bye for now

LfunkeyA responds:

yo thanks for the review