bit too empty
Yep, I can feel a bit of hip hop. You should add more stuff to your song so it feels more dancy. That alien like fx was cool though. Your lead synth is too repetitive and finally changes when that kick sounding drum comes in. Choose better pads but more importantly add more compostion. Your first review and you seem to be a new NG audio submitter so I give good mark. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. bYE for now and enjoy making more music.
hey thanks!
Ill try but to be fair... this is one of my older songs anyways (^^)... but thanks for the [Good] review!
...k
Sounds like music that would fit in diddy kong racing or something. Or like music where your like buying items in a video game. It is alot more happy than your other songs. The bubbles (I think) give that kiddy feeling. The bongos give the jungle feel and of course the "whoop" sound gives me a thought of monkeys. Airplane...airplane race like diddy. Fun. Lots of good effects. A little on the short side. Overal 5/5 voting. How did you get a 0 on review? That's a bit harsh. So 10/10 cause this song is pleasant and brought me back to the good ol N64 days when games weren't always about shooting...killing...blowing things up. :) Bye for now
YES! the good old n64 days. man i miss those days.
rev.
Hey I got a favor to ask. Can you sample my preview song...it is the only techno song on my music profile so easy to find. I just need advice on whether rhythm is good. Not on the mastering since I didn't do any yet. So back to your song. Double personality song. Has that nice calm pad, but than the saw like synths make it more hardcore. Angry and calm at the same time. Nice twist. The beginning rhythm lasts a bit too long. Some chords shown which adds diversity, but than the calm sound returns back to the same pattern. I'm not sure if your just changing pads but keeping the same pattern. More diversity next time. Oh well I give all techno and trance and now hip hop 10/10 diversity. So 5/5 voting and thanks for the help. Bye for now
Hey thanks for reviewing my song, i'm just learning how to master stuff now and some of my new songs seem better then this old stuff i submitted, i'll check out your song .
interesting
This song is really strange. Do you mean circuit? What was the stupid mistake you did? Good drums but that wierd background noise got a little annoying. I like that guitar like sound. Some of your rhythm sounds familiar to other songs I've heard. Brings back memories. So 5/5 voting. Yeah so maybe more careful seleting your fx stuff. Can you give me feedback on my preview song (it is labelled under techno) Not sure if the rhythm is good. No I have not mastered anything yet and this is only like 1/3 of the song. Thanks...bye for now
if strange is good, then thank you. yes i did mean "circuit" as my syruplord had already pointed out. sorry bout the bg noise, i just got carried away and didnt notice it while i was making it, but i also thought it added the industrial feeling i was somewhat looking for. thank you about the drums, i spent a while on them. i don't know which sound you were talking about when you said the "guitar" thing. ill check out youre stuff.
thx again,
mawkeetus
cool stuff
A young band you guys are. The vox is a bit off tune. However having vox on any audio is like golden. So rare on NG. I got a name for your band. "One Voice" :) cause your the only one singing. Where are the other guys? Who ever is playing the guitar, kudos to him/her/them. The drums are well done to. If your doing the vox section, sorry bout just asking for that to improve. Anyway, without the vox this would be crap so just think like that. :) Keep your band working the beats and the voice box vibrating. 5/5 voting and congrats on top 5. It deserved top 5 for just having vox! Bye for now
thanks, ya i play guitar, and know one else ereally can sing so, even though im not very good i do it lol
rev.
First thing I thought when I saw the words BOA was you did a remix on the korean singer (girl) Obviously not. Yeah I here this beat which I think lots of ppl heard already. The original I think was a popular song. Some nice additions like the trance like pad. The drums were dancy. Sounds like workout music. Not sure if original was also workout music. Not much to say since a remix. Good choice of pads and synths and drums...and special effects. I noticed a sudden cutoff when the song ends. That may be the only fault. So 5/5 vote and 9/10. (If this was not a remix than 10/10 for sure) However kudos on a good revamped version. Bye for now
Im glad u liked it
Okay I had to review
I've seen your spk trademark so many times on the new submissions that I'm just like I wonder how this guy's songs are like. SpK!!! Mellow ambient...uhhh no. This is no where near mellow. I can't imagine what hardcore would sound to you. Quite repetitive and the only real ambient sound is that low echo like sound. Drums aren't ambient nor is that fuzzy background support. Funny how you were inspired by a car commercial. Which one may I ask? Cars are nice, but too many good ones are expensive. We NG people are too poor to afford super cars. Mmmmm the caspita. Mmm ford GT concept. Mmmm audi quattro. Well I got a helicoptor like image to this song...not cars. Oh well. Short but unique so 5/5 vote keeping your score at 5 (not for long though cause blammer tuesdays!) and 8/10 review. SpK!!! :) Bye for now
Sweet okay I'll listen
The tiny piano solo at the start was a tad bit how should I say this childish, but when that fuzzy sound comes in the hip hop feel comes in. You used a reloading of a gun as a sound effect. Heck makes sense. Lots of people in america owns guns to feel safe. Sad, but true. Why can't we all just get along. :) When you changing your name to 1000 watz and why change it? I like your alias name and the pic on your profile. Keep it platinum! For a 13 year old pretty awesome stuff. You got many years to get better compared to the other hip hop artists on NG. Suggestion for your next single is to add maybe 1 more pad or more if you wish. With just 2 pads and 1 drum going it sounds lonely. Where the fighting spirit with just 3 instruments (not including the gun reloading sound). Go all crazy. :) I like it so 5/5 vote and 9/10. I like the effort your putting in to improve. Keep the beats coming and as always enjoy making music. Bye for now
thanxz man...i am gittin good at thiz i csnt wait 2 turn 14 soon :).and we all should get along,i'm from L.A. So Its Hard Out Here
Peace
ahh noo
That piano tune WAS gonna be used in my next song. You beat me too it. :( Anyway I love piano and plz keep it in the full version. So just a preview so not much stuff going on until that explosive jump where sounds a bit too crowded. However you probably didn't even master the track yet so that's a very good excuse. Couldn't wait to finish up. Well continue finishing it. The tune is great...if only I submitted my next song using that piano tune. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review. And it isn't original cause I heard this piano tune before :)
yeah now this is better classical
Yah finally happy classical. I've been waiting a long time for a song like this. Well made and sounds like a concert song that mozart would make. His I guess would be better. No one is as good as mozart!!! cept beethoven. Lots of mood shifts in this song. Happy, mysterious, suspense, and other stuff. Love the plucking part. However now it doesn't sound fast. Allegro? Not to me anymore. Wait a sec, now that violin solo with the plucking sounds very familier. Hmm....were you influenced by the great composers? Lol the ending sounds very familiar too. Pretty good overall. More fast happy parts please. At least you had some so 5/5 and 10/10 review. Make more perky classicals...that's how they should all be :)
Hahaha thanks for the review dude. Happy classical? I suppose it is VERY happy in comparison to the other two movements lol. People sure do compare this to Mozart! It's not that good.
I purposely had a lot of mood shifts in this piece as it is the finale, plus I just would've gone insane if it was completely happy 100% of the time.
Yeah the pizzicato part is not very fast at all (something like 80 I believe.) But the general movement is Allegro, much like the movement is in E major but there are lots of modulations. A familiar part to you, eh? I suppose I am influenced by the greats :D Who isn't?
Thanks for the review. I'll try to continue making good pieces, though not all will be joyful.
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