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[Prelude no. 8 in C minor Lento]

no the minor key :)

Dang it.. this is a sad song. Why didn't you just name the song last snowfall instead of the fancy title. Beautiful seaon? Sounds like someone just died or something. Must have been a terrible season. Nice composition and I guess you purposely made the song really slow to get the mood right....however I think I'm interpretating the mood of the song different to what you expected. The high pitch notes seem to be a bit overpowering. Good way to finish song. Not too long of a song I might add. To sum everything up, you have done better. 5/5 vote and 8/10 rev. Shortness and the sometimes ear hurting high pitch notes took some of the luster away.

Winterwind-NS responds:

Hey

actually im getting this song taken down cuz i titled it wrong, its supposed to be "Un petit morceaux no. 1 in C minor Lento"

its sad, cuz winter is over, and wut would be snow, is now rain. No, it was an amazing season.

High pitched notes being moderately loud was intentional, but iono if it's ur ears being sensitive to high frequency pitches cuz i wouldnt say theyre overpowering. There's no other sounds to overpower actually.. personally, shortness duznt rid of a musical piece's luster lol and get ur ears checked.

thanks for taking the time.
try again

[H6 - Going Far Away]

Okay rev

So you say your new...okay. If you want future revs by me just PM me. From the way your alias name is, this song doesn't fit the heaven category. Interesting enough, I'm actually making a heaven song right now. :) Pretty good being your 3rd song. Some parts are a bit empty and yep that fuzzy bass line is evident. If you want to be unique than make a trance without that fuzzy bass sound. I don't think the leading pad is changing much, but I usually give 10/10 diversity on trance and techno anyways. Not sure if that calm sound is from a piano. Probably not...oh well sounds a bit like piano. Is Vanguard supposed to be better than fruity loops? I thought that was some kind of anti virus program :) Interesting title, but not sure how that fits. So suggestions are use more pads/synths cause gets boring when I'm listening to the same rhythm. (I think you have two real separate parts in the song where the rhythm changes a bit) If you had lots of variation with your few pads you used than I wouldn't have minded at all. Nice fade out by the way and the cymbal clashes were a good finishing touch. 5/5 vote and 9/10 rev. Bye for now

Heaven6 responds:

The piano thing was a plucked instrument. Vanguard is a plugin that I use for my synths, but Im still using Fl studio, to clarify your vanguard description =D Im still learning melodies and such, I'll probably upload a more advanced song. Thanks for the review!

Heaven6

[{GBD} The Good Dream]

question

What's audacity? Where do you get it? The piano part is funny. Not much of a beat, but at least piano is in the song. I think you should have chose different notes cause doesn't seem to match with background beat. Beachshore fx...? Ambience! Some industrial flavour to start the song off. For some wierd reason I can see this in a game where your sneaking across the high beams of an industrial site...near a beach :). That dreamy like pad is good. However only appears for a short time. Looks like your an industrial musician so keep the good work going. Again just fix that piano section. Bye for now. oh 5/5 vote and 9 rev.

DoobyTimePiece responds:

im sooooo clumsily about the piano but ill get the hang of it and thanx for the review!

[Left_Behind]

Sweet but depressing

You seem to be concentrating more on the sad or minor key songs now. :( no really this makes me :( What happened to your heaven like pop songs? You probably know that happy music is my favorite. Anyway, complaints aside, you made a fine classical song. This doesn't sound like a song from the baroque or romanticism era. Seems like today's style of classical. I don't know what it is, but looks like classical is moving to the more drama like style. I hear songs from many classical artists on NG and drama seems to be occuring more often. Heh. I noticed one part of the song where you stumbled a bit. Not a biggie...flows nicely. This song reminds me of music from the movie "my sassy girl". Did you ever watch it? Good one. So 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Can you try a perky like song next? Up to you though. :) Bye for now and have fun making music.

Turning-Japanese responds:

Sorry for the late response - this wasn't really anything intentionally done. I had bits and pieces of this song here and there among my other files. I'm not nuts about it, to tell the truth.

I appreciate your review though, as always!

[On My Way (Pulstated)]

Yah go team nate and pulstate

I never knew dj nate made this song. Kudos to you nate! So very jumpy with some sweet fx sounds. The beat seems a bit basic but that isn't your fault pulstate since a remix. Your definately a full fledge remix artist and a very good one too. Best irish trance producer...nah. Best irish trance remix producer...now I'm seeing your future. Well done, but I noticed most trance has the fuzzy low beat. I guess that's like a signature feature for trance. Looks like from the last review..dj nate of course that you added vox. Cool but only a short 3 words. More vox!!! It's great party music, but what I was looking for is a huge buildup to get me waiting in anticipation for something really extreme. I guess the vox was not good enough to get me all excited. So 5/5 voting and 10/10. Remember our deal? You better give me your trance music for free when you officially become the next best irish trance (remix) producer. :) Bye for now and have fun remixing! and mixing.

Pulstate responds:

Thanks for your review, but i'm going to be the best trance producer also, you just wait until i get the proper gear my friend, just because i'm good at remixes means nothing. Originals are coming, and coming in big amounts.

Cheers. :)

[Computerized (shortened)]

hey

Well I haven't reviewed your music for quite some time. Digital music indeed. Not sure if my ears are decieving me but did you use a somewhat ethnic instrument? That's cool. The background sound does get a bit annoying after a while. The drums are nice. To sum things up well this song lacks diversity. Sure at least the drums change with the cymbal crashes. I already think this song is long enough. How long is the original? Did you make this song related to Naruto or completely just something you made for fun? So you heard my suggestions so 5/5 voting and 8/10 review. Bye for now and as always enjoy making music.

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

this wuz made for fun

[My Harmonica]

Sensing

Where the harmonica? For a bit of the song it reminded me of mario 64 during the water levels. The addition of the drums are nice. The song is a bit atmosphery which is cool. Either you really modulated the harmonica or your thinking of the wrong instrument. I was concentrating soo much on when the familiar harmonica sound would show up that I didn't even notice the repeativeness. 2nd time through though I guess the song is repetitive. Sounds like it loops a bunch. Oh well. 5/5 voting and umm next time keep the instrument natural rather than some futuritic harmonica. Keep the real instruments authentic. Bye for now and enjoy making more music.

VegetarianMeat responds:

I know, the name has no relevance to the song, but it just sounds neat. Thanks for the review and the 5 :)

[Welcoming Walls]

Nice!!

So happy :) Finally someone that makes a umm happy miscellaneous? Sounds a bit classical to me though. Love the little bells. I'm happy that someone else makes happy music. Too many sad depressing classicals which I don't like too much. The background is kinda repetitive, but a few changes here and there. I think you have a piano going for a bit too. This reminds me of those snes rpg game moments. I actually will download this song. I haven't downloaded a song from NG for so long and I only download the really good ones so congrats to you. I'm happy mood now. Time to study though blah. Sad mood now. 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. Bye for now and keep making them happy music cause happy music is the BEST music in the world. :)

race1 responds:

YES agreed. I make music of light.... if you notice, very few of my other songs are of a sad... or even minor or 100 percent minor tone. If you like this, also check out Passage of Lost Doors.

[Variaton D-19]

Ahh okay got it

Well now I know what kind of synths and pads karco likes from the previous review. Atmosphere lol. Maybe I'll go atmospheric. So great piano and lucky for you, you know how to put some crazy effect on the piano. I don't know, but the piano notes sound very familiar to a song I think I've heard before on the radio or music book. Definately the piano is the show. The background support isn't really doing much but give more atmosphery sound. I like calm music so yah! :) Hmm I probably won't ddl the song because this sounds familiar. Yeah not your fault cause I think you composed all this, but with the billions of songs done on earth we're gonna repeat someone else's rhythm by mistake. So 5/5 voting and what the heck 10/10 review. Bye for now

NightHawk22 responds:

I agree that it might sound similar to something else, but I did composed it all. thanks for the nice review though,
NightHawk22

['Starlit Havoc']

weee :)

That lead synth sounds like mario party at the beach. Gets repetitive quite quickly. Ahh no comes the bass. Has that cool effect on it. Kinda happy song, yet also has that serious feel to it. Quite unique so originality 10/10. I'm not sure if your changing the composition of that happy sound throughout the song or if it is looping. That could have been the part that bored me. So 5/5 voting and 9/10 review. Bye for now and enjoy making more music.

tobycreed responds:

hah, "mario party at the beach" great description, thanks for reviewing.